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Happy Columbus Day
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Back at ya! *Bigsmile*
Happy Indigenous Peopleโ€™s Day!
Kind words are like snow, Kind words turn away anger as the snow covers muddy ground
                                                           -RookieTea

Ok that sounded much better in my head
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I like it though
That color is hard to read just like tiny script is. Just saying.
Oh man really *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ on everything I have its fine I even made it super big
Happy happy happy news I get to tell everyone the gender of the newest addition!!! Known for almost a month now! Tomorrow I get to finally reveal if my ninth sibling is a boy or girl
Welp I started writing my backstory for my NaNo Novel three times. Yup you guessed I deleted it three times too. Like my writing was all out of sync. I have a small idea I just can't get it to start. It's terrible!
So no more deleting. Don't wanna get in trouble. *Laugh* But like what if it is just one sentence? Thank you for the site refers? (ig it would be called that). I feel like opening new files takes so much room maybe I'm scared of running out of room *Scared*. Like that's the same reason my emails never get higher than 100. Is this a problem. Smh I think I have a deleting problem. Oof sorry I'm rambling.


Tag: All cats are gray in the dark, Haunted Sox, Annette, paulcoholic
What you save doesn't each have to have its own file -- or in your case, apparently, entry. You can throw them all in the same one with copy/paste, till that runs out of space, and then start another. It's a good idea to date each section, though.

It doesn't have to be in another file, either -- if there's space for it, just put it at the bottom of the regular entry, date it, and use the hide tags around it. WritingML Help for hide
You are probably your own worst critic as some if us are too. It might just have needed a little tweeking.

The ones here saying not throw it out are correct. At a later time you might realise some potential in it.

That being said, I have done lots of artwork, but in an art class, one item in particular just didn't look right. It was suppose to be an underwater scene. I believe it was a jellyfish. I was new to this type of art and decided I could make it work.

It didn't look much like a jellyfish though and more like well...something unmentionable.

I eventually did rip it up and realized I didn't have enough experience for that one anyway.



Is it ok to have two Resolutions/Closings in one novel?

Idk if I've every seen this but idk maybe people have down it?
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It makes perfect sense. :*)
I'd think that if there are more than one issues to be resolved, it'd make perfect sense! And, if it is a series you are writing, it gives the reader even more encouragement to pick up the next one in the series. But, hey...that's only my humble opinion.
Oh nice I like that Bones, beasts, midnight feasts Thank you for your opinion. It defiantly has more conflict to resolve! I hadn't thought of making it a SERIES that's a great idea! Now we just have to see if I can add enough words hehe
Alright here's my sample's! Which do you think works best?




(1) When the door clicks shut Shade falls back onto the bed with a sigh. He couldnโ€™t stay, he couldnโ€™t fail Silas. The queen wouldnโ€™t stop looking if she found out what he carried. It would put Josiah and Cora in danger. Remembering the piece of paper he pulls it out.
I know who you are. We will meet again.
He stares at the words for a long time. Who would recognize him and leave him be? They could have taken him to the queen and been rewarded handsomely.


Or

(2) When the door clicks shut Shade falls back onto the bed with a sigh. I can't stay, I canโ€™t fail Silas. The queen wouldnโ€™t stop looking if she found out what I carried. It would put Josiah and Cora in danger. Remembering the piece of paper he pulls it out.
I know who you are. We will meet again.
He stares at the words for a long time. Who would recognize me and leave me be? They could have taken me to the queen and been rewarded handsomely.

Or

(3)When the door clicks shut Shade falls back onto the bed with a sigh. I canโ€™t stay, I canโ€™t fail Silas. The queen wouldnโ€™t stop looking if she found out what I carried. It would put Josiah and Cora in danger. Remembering the piece of paper he pulls it out.
I know who you are. We will meet again.
He stares at the words for a long time. Who would recognize him and leave him be? They could have taken him to the queen and been rewarded handsomely.


Tag *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ, Schnujo Cujo Misses Fangus, John Little,Lilli Munster โ˜•, LeJenD'ry Ghoul, Andy~your friend till the end Beacon - Pumpkin, Trickful Sonali Hey Halloween!, Northernwrites, Battiwyn๐ŸŽถAnd all the others
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NW is a genius! She knows all things WdC and writing!
Thank you Northernwrites I will be referring to this many times over
I agree that #3 makes the most sense to me. The story is told in 3rd person, but the main character's direct thoughts (in italics) would be in first person since most people think to themselves in first person present. It might help to think of the thoughts in italics as dialogue and treat it similarly. It's basically the main character talking to themselves in their head.

I don't think I can add any more here than Northernwrites already explained with her thorough comment. Very helpful!
Hey everyone guess what I've been working on... Yup you guessed correctly my Stolen Thrones book/novel! Come read it I have finished 3 chapters now and am working on the next ones.

 Stolen Thrones   (ASR)
Shade is sent away with something of great importance to keep safe. Find out what happens!
#2259575 by Haunted by Handles-RookT


Come read and please leave a review, I appreciate all types!
I've finished my assignment for today! Oct 4.

 
BOOK
NaNo Prep  (ASR)
Just thought book form will fit more
#2259380 by Haunted by Handles-RookT


Yippy
Hello everyone. Got a terrible migraine and bad sniffles. Let's hope I feel better tomorrow. *sad smile*

I finished my nano assignment

 
BOOK
NaNo Prep  (ASR)
Just thought book form will fit more
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So sorry. I had just texted a once in a lifetime brilliant post. And it disappeared. LMBO. Okay not so brilliant.

Glad you got the assignment done. I went ahead with two and three I believe. There's alot I hadn't added yet. Btw you will notice they will be out if order if you do what I did and use book. What I found out is to number them differently. In for example 100, 200, 300 BUT. Start with a big number like 900 or bihiger.l then go backwards. That way you can also add anything if you need to.

It will go in reverse. Look at mine.

I don't know what but last I looked at it v26 people had visited that page. Lol

As Sally Field had said once: They love me, they really love me! Lol. Probably they wanted to see how not to do it..
Drop me an I'm if you're up in a little while. I use to get those often. I kind if figured out why.
Thank you for your comment's Schnujo Cujo Misses Fangus and *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ I am feeling much better the Lord is amazing!

HAhaha I noticed the book goes backwards and was like WHAT WHY *Shock2*
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Haunted by Handles-RookT. You're welcome. I hope that helps. You might find a book that you like that uses this point of view and notice how they did it. :*)
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Though I don't think if I post in your Notebook that it will appear on the Newsfeed. Otherwise, I'd see a lot more Happy Birthday and Happy Anniversary wishes on the Newsfeed. But what you post in your Notebook probably ends up on the Newsfeed.
I think it may be the other way around Schnujo Cujo Misses Fangus I believe if I post in the newfeed it shows up in my notebook but if someone else posts in my notebook it stays in my notebook or it did till *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ did somethin magical
I agree. If you post on the Newsfeed, it's in your Notebook. If I post in the Newsfeed, it's not, but is in your Personal Newsfeed (if you've clicked my Plus button). If I post in your Notebook, it's not. I'm pretty sure all that is accurate. The only thing I'm not sure about is if you post in your Notebook, does it appear in the Newsfeed?
Anyone else? I was writing something for the writers cramp and then forgot what I was writing for! *BigSmile* By the time I remembered it was to late to enter it but the story was to good to toss so now I will be finishing it and adding to my port *Laugh*


Schnujo
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To display WritingML to show someone how, use double brackets or {db}{{/db} around more complex stuff.

For example {dropnote:"LinkTextHere"}the dropnote words go here...{/dropnote}

I put {db} {/db} around that example then you don't need to add any space to display your example...
And for simple things like showing how to tag, you can just use 2 actual sets of braces such as {{huser:stolenthrones}} to display {huser:stolenthrones}. Note that I actually used 3 sets of braces to show the 2 sets and 2 sets of braces to show the 1 set. But if you are doing something with lots of braces, ruwth's way is definitely best!
Ah thank you very much ruwth and Schnujo Cujo Misses Fangus
Hey Y'all I entered

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The Writer's Cramp  (13+)
Write the best STORY OR POEM in 24 hours and win 10K GPs!
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Come enter you have 14 hours Left!
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Haunted by Handles-RookT the right finger? Haha. Yeah, I'll give it "the" finger. Eh it still goes to delete. I tried refreshing. Ah well.
It says, "Come enter you have 14 hours left." *Wink*
HAHAHAHHAHAA *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ No the pinky of course *RollEyes* *Rolling*
Alrighty I'm actually going this time! Don't miss me too much! *Laugh*

Smell yuh later. Er I mean read you later. *Whistle* Be back in a few days!


Tag John Little Schnujo Cujo Misses Fangus *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ ruwth
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LMBO John Little I am far from retired so I'll just have to wait and see.
MoonRaven. Everytime I see that picture by your name I think it's a chocolate chip cookie or something with eyes.
Lmbo *SilverSpookMoonie* ๐ŸŒŒ now I'll never unsee the MoonRaven cookie with eyes
Blee looked at a few of the NaNo prep writers pieces and now I need to go organize my piece cuase mine now looks dirt compared to the others *FacePalm*
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The essence of NaNo is chaos.
I have to organize,at least a little or I'll never find anything.

Oh that's right. I can't find anything already. Haha

Now where's that butter lid?
Thank you Anonomous, Unanomous, Ananomous, Anonamous, you know what I mean *Laugh*
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