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Review of We Did It!  
Review by Silvia Romerez
Rated: E | (4.0)
That sounds like some personal experience. Hey, I stumbled upon your work through a random read; I'm a new author here but from a writer's pov, this seems quite decent. The chapters are a bit short for my liking but I guess that depends upon you but overall impression from just this read: Well done! But I think it would have been a bit more idyllic if u had described the scenes on top of the mountain a bit more intricately but I wouldn't base the entire story on just one chapter, so keep on writing ig! You're doing well and good luck!


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Review of My House  
Review by Silvia Romerez
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey, I stumbled upon this through a random read. As a new author myself, I believe you're doing quite well but from a writer's pov, I believe there's certain things lacking. For one, it seems quite short for a chapter. 2nd, it would have been better if you had described the fighting scene a bit more intricately but again I wouldn't like to base the entire story on just one chapter. So, yeah! Keep on writing ig, you're going good but there's still space to improve. All the best!


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