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The rules and expectations of the written pieces are clearly defined and adding some drop note titles with more detailed specifics is helpful. I like that you have the basics on the page as returning people do not need to keep seeing all the detail. The drop note is available and saves room on the page..which could get long. 
Very practical.
I can see how new members will want to read the dropnotes as there is vital information. and I think you answer every possible question a person might have. 
You do a great job of showing specifically how to post as a lot of people still don't get the visual clue. The links to stuff is convenient too and the items can serve the writers here. The writing is coherent and easy to follow without a glitch! 
The page is aesthetically pleasing to the eye and well organized with effective use of colour font. The banner is appealing and unique. The symbolism rocks as it is easy to get the message!
I loved the simile! Wow! Three different essences of relationship and seeking love. This is quite an original idea. I liked the magic of ravens and the word 'abide" suggests the calm careful graceful swan.
The form is well composed with apt syllables and line count. The punctuation suit the flow especially the colon. The use of assonance of long 'i' and 'ai' and consonance of "r" and "s" create a coherence to the flow and make for a pleasing soundscape as I read aloud. 
The title suits the theme and the images are vivid. I appreciate the romanticism and idealism. Thanks for sharing this evocative vision.
Thoughts that cause misery.
The writing is clear with enough information to set the tale. Even the tone is there. Good job! I wonder if anyone picked it to write about. 
It is hot here so I thought I would check out your cool haiku! I never saw one with the theme of Santa. (nowadays I guess it would be senryu} LOL I enjoyed the light hearted vibration and clear detail of the vision in this short poem! Wonderful for the topic and season.
The title drew my curiosity and it makes it sound the cat has a job! I love cats.
Oh, this poem is so sweet with a vivid portrait of walking dogs and the coming of fall. I could so imagine the bassett hound! 
I like the surprise of the cat and the anticipation in the last line. I had to laugh. What else would be in a dog's mind but treats. LOL
I appreciated the personification of August and the summer's "mewing call." 
I am happy to review to celebrate you at our "
I like the celebratory words like dream, treasure trove, fame that make it a tribute raising the authoress to a high place. The last line shows a true author quality as writing is life.
And letters were the way of communicating as well so it fits. She loved to stay in touch. 
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
Greetings! Thank you so much for entering the "
I loved the contrast of the black spider on the white wall. "pristine" is evocative and I appreciate the vision of the word "scales". Effective word choices that depict your observations clearly and also pleasant to read aloud. 
The last line is a fine cut line as i jump from the spider on the wall to the dripping tap, which makes me think of a bathtub! I shudder as I hope I am not in the tub at the time. Spiders creep me out! 
I enjoyed your insightful response to the prompt. You capture the dichotomy brilliantly and using the shoes as metaphor for life is awesome. Wow! 
I entered into your vision with ease as I could identify with the commentary you make. The chosen words and ideas created a potent picture. The only thing I might tweak is the punctuation. I see you used some periods to great advantage and yet I think it would be more powerful a read if you put them in other places where you have complete thoughts so we can pause and take it in. 
Gosh! In 75 words (yep, I counted!) you portrayed this experience of estrangement so vividly. I could feel Teedy's sadness at the beginning, her hope when she got the letter and her disappointment at the end. There was a finality to it with the chosen end words. I felt the door close and now hope that Teedy will just move on and realize that her sister has her own road and may realize the loss eventually.
It shows she knows her sister might still care 
I so relate to your image of mosquito although I can hear them farther away than my ear especially at night! LOL I like how you address the mosquito as if you are speaking to it in the first line. 
Your title is evocative as after reading your piece I thought of sliding down hill and also of the old saying of it's all down hill from here after a certain AGE! (which I do not buy into at all.) 
The contrast of feeling between the child and the elder is effectively expressed using the natural symbol of snow and the experience of sledding. The first few lines lured me in with the free space and the assonance of your chosen words. The wide open sound of "a". I liked "us" and "rush" too. 
It is so true, when parenting is done, we long to be kids again...and be free with grandkids without the "parent type of responsibility". LOL At least, so I have heard. 
Wow! This short paragraph has a potent sadness to it as you share your experience with loss. The title is perfect for the theme and feel of the piece.
I noticed a couple of typos: "iI wake up" and "the biggest a Mommy". I am not sure what this means.