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Your page is well organized with a clear thesis line and bolded subsections covering specific queries or data. I like the objective view point providing advantages and disadvantages and then supporting the opinion that Windows is the productive way to go.
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Oh my gosh! How precious is that? The dog knew you would find him a home...even by trickery. 
It is sad how dogs wind up wandering, left by owners. I like how the "eyes" got you. That is so like a dog. A cat would never beg. LOL A big heart can't say now anyway.
This is a wonderful memory piece and an entertaining story. I like how you use your knowledge of what dog your dad liked and really it can be hard to tell about dogs unless you know them well. He certainly quickly turned your mom's mid around quick. 
Hiya Beholden! I am here with a review to celebrate you and your win in our January 2022 Review Raid! 
The picture is so cute!
In the next line, " at that point" is redundant and breaks the sense of the line.
It was quite magical, which is how he felt.
This vision was easy to enter with its vivid descriptions, a very contemplative air to it!
What an intriguing title for the poem...the idea of MY water made me curious.
The short poem with its effective repetitions of key words/phrases is fun to read. It has a quick pace and shows clear images of the problems with water. I like how it builds to a comical last line. I thought of how you might want that cold drink as it felt like your experiences with water ight have been a lot of work! And I get the idea it is summer as you work with the pool, hose, etc.! 
Hiya Beholden! I am raiding your port for comical things and found this most unsual topic for a funny tale! Awesome.
It was a delight to read your expression aloud. Your use of poetic devices is effective. I heard the long i sound throughout, c, d, s, long o and ee sounds and bits of inner rhyme as well. The soundscape added to the pleasing flow with its conversational, emotive tone.
Greetings! Thank you so much for entering the "
Your haiku follows a traditional approach with 5-7-5 and a nature theme. Your midline pivot works well too! Yay! I could see how the first image and the last line image applies to the second line and could read it both ways. Good job with the challenge.
I am here with a review to celebrate you! 
I love to celebrate the solstice days outside under stars and by fires so I was drawn to your title and theme. Your short poem encapsulates the essence of the winter solstice related to the natural cycle of light. 
The contrast of the dark and light is vivid in your word descriptions. I like how you added us to the experience as people are part of nature and if awake, honour the earth! 
I could really sense the rush and and not having a minute to check things out. And we don't expect the outcome. Some folks do not count well. 
So maddening as there is likely no way to get it fixed! Ugh.
This episode describes an air battle with gusto. The title and tag line give us the clue to the theme directly. 
I can feel the excitement and tension as the pilots see the enemy planes and are outnumbered. You show you did some research to have the types of planes and the main facts of this event. I felt the tale had a fast pace that mimics how it must have felt as these events happen so fast! Short phrases help give that impression. Focusing on one pilot was very effective too.
You describe your grandma with skill and I can imagine her attitude and opinions. One wonders what her life was like in her past. It was interesting that your other Grandpa knew something was going on. Cool!
Your narrative voice was consistent and sincere and I liked how you kept it observatory.
Wow! This is a tightly woven free style poem with great detail about the experience of riding this Eye. It felt scarey to me as I am not keen on heights and the last line was evocative.
The poem tells a story and describes well the place and its fame in the first verse. The experience of riding it is so vivid. Images like the plush seats, "arm of unearthly proportions" "warty rubber", the simile of glaucoma was so visual too> 
I enjoyed reading the poem out loud as it has such a varied soundscape with interesting topical words and repeating letter sounds. I had to smile at "arses" to contrast the royalty of the seats. 
Your poem is well crafted with a steady pace and set rhyme scheme. It was pleasing to read the flow aloud with its effective soundscape. Repeated sounds like P, a, w, d add to the overall impact of the read. I felt it had a quick pace that suits the kitten ready for action. Images comparing her to a villain having capers is brilliant. Lack of punctuation worked well too.
Thanks for sharing this lively entertainment. It was fun to enter your vision and I can imagine those cat eyes following me. 
Your short contest page is effective and to the point with all the main protocols and prompts clearly stated. I like the colours used and the invitation to sign up for the newsletters. Some newbies may not really get that idea amid all the things there are to learn here, so a reminder is good! A great way to encourage interest in our letters. 
The writing was coherent and child friendly. Using similies to compare the ant home to ours is a good visual for kids to ponder. I think you do not need the word "also" in the third line. I was pondering on using the words "regurgitated" and "emerge" and "assume" {could be "take" instead} depending on the age of the child you read it to. Some may have heard those words but some may need explanation. Though the adult reader of the book could explain it. a teaching moment to use scientific words. 
I think "cacoon" is spelled "cocoon". 
The page is attractive with well placed paragraphing that makes sense. The story flows in a logical order. I was drawn right into the vision.