Hi Genipher! I am happy to review your entry in the 'I Write in 2018" activity.
The title is appealing as it paints a picture and made me curious. I could imagine a pile of garbage with all of its different aspects include how it might smell! Yuck!
It made me ponder about the environmental questions. It was a cool surprise when I read the piece that the idea of trash island was actually positive. Neat!
Even more curious now as to how that would work. LOL
The short piece of writing gives a really interesting and unique prompt for a story and gives a challenge to the imagination. The Bermuda triangle element gives a potential author lots of room for the wierd or wonderful to occur.
The composition was easy to follow and provided enough scope the who, what and where elements of a potential story line. The question at the end is directive in intent with the words "survive" and "alternate dimension". It could indicate a sci fi, paranormal, fantasy, adventure in terms of genre possibilities. The sky is the limit! Good job.
Thanks for sharing your visionary idea.