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Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a much better poem than mine as you bring feelings into this poem which mine lacks
but thank you for comparing the two poems as the thought is very similar but it ends there,

George
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Review of Old Man  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah age has never been written about any better than you have in this delightful poem
that all us old folks can attest to and find truth in what you have written.
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Review of Depression  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
I used to call that being lazy, but depression is no joke
and I have seen people suffer from it for long periods of time
and some ended their lives. Seek help.
George
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Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
All poets face a blank canvass that must have words painted on to it and you have certainly done that well with this masterpiece of writing that can ring a bell with many readers. We sometimes need a little help which our imagination supplies us with.
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Review of Hands of Time  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hardly a time piece you can put in your pocket, but whether it's a 100 feet tall or you can wear on your wrist the hands of time always move and no one can stop them but the day when the Lord will come again to claim us all.
Great no fault poem.

George
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Review of Waterfall Sense  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
Splendid poetry with vivid imagery makes the reader feel like he is underneath
natures alluring falls and is splashed by your creation in words.
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Review of Incomplete  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
A nice piece of writing with no punches pulled as to the whys of breaking up. Just a missing piece of the puzzle that couldn't be found in a romance that has faded and no longer is fulfilling so it was time to say goodbye and part company.
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Review of Music  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Love is music when it has been put to words otherwise is is like a gong that never rings. So if you have a song in your heart and you let the world hear, then your music is pure love and will remain ever dear.
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Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have been introduced to a Kyrielle form of poetry and it is so well done that I can find no fault in it.
You seemed to have mastered this art form and thus the 5 stars and a bravo to you. I hope you find your elephant.

Eaglewings
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Review of Wrong Turn  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a poem with a message that I hope gets through to kids who think the wrong thing is the right thing in life.
Many a person who was brought up well went sour when things got tough and hung out with trouble makers.
I have seen it as I was growing up when some kids followed a life of crime only to be put away for life.
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Review of Angel  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
At first I was going to give this poem a 4.5 but then realized it was a love sonnet which has been done to perfection. There is nothing I can find amiss in this delightful sonnet.

George
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Review of Angel  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (4.5)
Reminds me of a number of poems I wrote about my wife when we first met. You have turned in a poetic masterpiece
however I would have added the final two lines for continuity sake and it would have been perfect.
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Review by eaglewings
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very well written. Kept me interested all the way through and the ending was perfect. This should have been a contest winner in my humble opinion. Tense and gripping.

George
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Review of Quiet  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ah, how typical a feeling a lot of poets get when words fail them and others seem to have no problem at all expressing themselves with words. Loved the poem for its honesty and well formed idea.

George
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Review of Beggar's Sermon  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem captivates the reader to continue to read the story to its end and the reward is heaven if God in His mercy grants what we may not deserve..
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Review of Caernarfon  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (5.0)
Loved the story of old times remembered and how the new has replaced them, not the same as the old. Oh well we always have memories that never grow old as long as we keep them, they'll still be fresh and new. Can't fault his poem on any count. Loved it and it brought back memories of my youth with different characters.

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Review of LOVE EXISTENCE  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (4.0)
You write much with few words that leaves the reader to fill in how the poem affects his life and when you offer in poetry that which can effect many people you have done your job as a poet. A sun rise can be expressed in a thousand words but one word would explain it all. BEAUTIFUL
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Review of Question Mark?  
Review by eaglewings
Rated: E | (4.5)
We are on the same page of letting thoughts take shape regardless of the degree of pain. Poets thrive when they can empty their heads from thoughts that always seem to bother us but once you clean them up an place them on your writing pad they lose all their sting. Great poem and I wouldn't change a thing. It is compelling in it's brevity.

Eaglewings
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