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Review of Day of the Lord  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
created by marphilhearts & gifted by siscok


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I posted after you in I Write in 2020. It is a pleasure, as always, to read and review your poetry.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

This is a poem of faith that looks to a positive day in the future when the promises of faith come to fruition.

I am not familiar with the Festival of Ridvan, but I don't think you need to be in order to appreciate this pronouncement of devotion.

*Cool**Idea*

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"The day when unity lights the planet!
The day when peace shall flood the Earth!"

A song came to mind that says if only you believe like I believe we'll get by. I think it is inspiring to look to faith and hope in these troubled times we are living in.

Lovely work!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my personal (unique to me) reactions to what I read. They are not meant as harsh critiques or detailed editing suggestions.

I enjoyed reading and wanted to convey that to you.

Perhaps Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2020! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
This is so lovely! I had fun writing what I thought about things. It is hard to pick favorites. Moseley will always be my favorite ever though. Same with Violet. Without them there are a lot of other great characters to enjoy and love. Even Thomas Barrow is lovable in the end. I wonder if Mrs. O'Brien had stayed if she would have been lovable.

I always thought that after Matthew, Charles Blake was a the best one for Mary. I don't know why they dropped that. I liked him a lot better than Henry. Thanks for having this!

This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!
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for entry "Mr Jones from Wales
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am participating in the I Write in 2020 Activity. It is, as always, a pleasure and an honor to read your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* With the world the way it is now, it is easy to forget the lovable charm of human contact. Sometimes, it is the small gestures that live on in our memories of what humanity can mean.

A lovely, courteous gentleman with an unforgettable greeting. There is a lot of unspoken, but genuine affection in this portrayal.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite part:

"Widowed and alone,
with a twinkle and a smile
he'd offer a "good morning"
and sometimes a song."

Wouldn't that be so welcome right now through all these masks and all the self protective gear. Oh, for the days of not being warned to death.

Lovely poem.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my reactions to what I read. I am not aiming for harsh critiques or editing forays. I enjoyed reading your poem very much.

Perhaps, Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2020! *Cow**Balloons**Type* Every journey begins with a single step.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Silken Threads  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Tinker !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*Your poem tells of an enduring love, that bends and stretches over time. The image of a silken thread (the title) ties in well with the words that you use. Love does indeed wrap around our hearts and minds like an expandable thread.

The title fits like a glove, and so does the free verse format.

I typically look for phrasing or words that stay with me and I certainly found them here.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite passage:

"Unselfish care strengthens the links
and binds us to a singular
focus."

Sometimes one's love can be reinforced and strengthened by hard tests. You know how much you truly love when you have to put yourself aside and concentrate on that other person. It can go the other way when someone runs, but that usually will happen early on. Time and devotion tell the tale as none of us is perfect.

When the other person's well being and happiness mean more than our own, well you've got something precious there. Precious and as delicate as a silken thread.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

Poetry is so personal and the best is written from the heart. This certainly seems to be the case here. My reviews are not meant to be detailed edits or harsh critiques. It is more my personal reaction to what I read and what I feel when I read.

We all come at it from different angles, I reckon. I read and I reread and I enjoyed. Can't ask for much more than that. Well done! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

This review was written and stored in my review tool on March 7, 2020. It will be sent when we are instructed to send out our reviews for the contest.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Love's Rose  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Prosperous Snow Valentine !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought of a love that stood the test of time. I thought of true romance as being something to hold on to and that endures throughout the trials of life's journey.

This is a lovely tribute to beloved and admired grandparents.

I think that poetry is such a personal thing so my reviews are my reactions to what you have shared. This certainly hit a chord with me as both sets of my grandparents and my parents were married a long long time. Free verse is a wonderful vehicle for communicating in a succinct and moving way.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite passage:

"Love's rose grows
among the thorns of everyday life."

Here, you tie the enduring love to the imagery of the title very well. This lovely poem proves you do not have to have a lot of words to say a great deal and to move your audience. Holding on to that rose, to what is good is an inspiring way to go forward.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

My reviews are not meant to be harsh editing forays or critiques. It is my reaction and response to what I have read that I attempt to share with you. You did some fine work here and I was moved as I read and reread.

I reviewed your poem on March 7, 2020 and stored it in my review tool. It will be sent out when we are told to do so, as the winners are announced.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings THANKful Sonali LOVES DAD !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*Your poem tells the engaging story of a young man in an arranged marriage, who makes a choice to stand up for his young bride, when she is taken advantage of by his family. He changes his whole life to stand up for her. I think it's love (as in the answer to the title question) and something more. We all wish that those we love would take our parts in times that are hard. But standing up to one's own family is pretty tough and could have long lasting consequences. You have to admire someone who does what he thinks is right.

When I read poetry, I look for passages and phrases that stick with me, that are memorable. I certainly found that here, more than once.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

It is tough to pick out just one, but this stanza is particularly brilliant:

"There may not have been chocolates
Or flowers, or diamond rings
There may not have been moonlit walks
Down lanes where nightingales sing."

Maybe not those things, but lovely poetry and heroic portrayal of a young man. That's what I found. Remarkable, original and inspirational.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

My reviews are not harsh editing forays or critiques. They are my reactions and response to what I have read.

I thought your poem told an inspirational and moving story with originality of language and flair.
*Cow**Balloons**Type*

I read your poem and stored my review in the review tool on March 7, 2020. It will be sent out when the winners are announced and we are told to send our reviews.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Your Embrace  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



*CakeB* HAPPY 7th WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


Greetings 💙 Carly !

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about feeling safe with the one that we love. We find our solace and our home in the arms of someone who cares so much and who we care for. Everything ties back to the title and feeling secure in one's love's embrace.

When reading poetry, I look for lines that are memorable and stay with me. I certainly found that here in your conclusion.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part was particularly moving:

"Together we rise above
And our love endures
Burning bright
In a world prone to darkness."

In the darkest times, the imagery of darkness - that's when we know we are loved. Expressing all that someone means to us is a difficult task, but you have done it well.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

My reviews are reactions to what I have read and not meant to be harsh critiques. I tell you how I connected with the writing, from my point of view - which is very subjective. I think that all poetry is subjective and it's how well the writer connects to the reader that really matters in the long run. I could not begin to dissect writing that comes straight from the heart, as it does here.

Well done!
*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written and stored in my review tool on March 7, 2020. It will be sent out when winners are announced and we judges are instructed to send out our reviews.

If that is after March, please accept my belated account anniversary wishes!

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings intuey !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought of enduring love that leaves one with lasting and comforting memories. Love outlasts life. That is the message of the title and one that inspires and comforts as one struggles to carry on.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me). Your use of language to convey feelings and cherished memories is remarkable.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part stays with me, particularly the last line:

"Honeysuckle-laced breeze kisses my cheek,
reminiscent of the petal-soft taunts
shared between us down by the crooked creek.
A place my memory forever haunts."

To say that memory haunts a place (and not the other way around) is a brilliant turn of language. Why shouldn't that be so. Makes lovely sense to me!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do after I read everything, then reread and think about it some. But, in the end, it's just one opinion here from a fellow writer.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Sumojo !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about a long marriage that's full of love and adventures. This made me smile and think of my own marriage of more than 30 years now. A lifelong journey, to be sure. It's all part of the learning, loving and laughing, isn't it?

I particularly enjoyed your leaf imagery at the end.

Your title fits perfectly!

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*Oh, a lot of it rang a bell with me, but this part hit home:

"I’d run my fingers through your hair,
The hair that’s no longer there.
We’d travel far and wide
Just we two, side by side."

We traveled a lot to Ireland, that's why. He still has most of his hair, although it's white now instead of blond. You never know where that journey will take us.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings jaya !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about taking care of those we love. There is no greater happiness than making someone we love comfortable and happy. It is nice when the wind and other things cooperate, as in the title.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Go get him a soft bed from the moon,
fetch a nice pillow from the clouds"

If only it were so...

Lovely poetic imagery!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Steve Joos !

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about falling in love when we are young and being unsure of what would happen. It's a scary thing to contemplate even through the prism of many years. You never know if you don't try.

This poem says young love to me and it's wonderful to read about all that anxiety and the nervous feelings that I still remember.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me).

You did that remarkably well with a fresh perspective.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

There are a lot of favorite parts, but this one stands out:

"It’s not like saying
I love the Cubs,
Or I love root beer,
But I love you.
Those words are beautiful.
Those words are scary.
They are words I want to say,
I need to say,
I have to say."

I understand the love of a baseball team, believe me. That's pretty deep and long lasting.

I thought this was wonderful.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

I also wish you a happy account birthday, but if this doesn't come to you in March, consider it a belated wish.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of beyond dreaming  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Rhyssa !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that too much harmony can be dull. I am sympatico with these sentiments. You need some spice and disagreements over the years to liven things up.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite part:

"somehow, as we grow together,
our little differences
that once jangled against my nerves
are swallowed in the big harmonies
we create together"

I wouldn't change a thing, either. Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings Mastiff !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Wow, close call for both of you!

Love has to weather a lot of tests as the years go by.

Don't forget your line count with future poetic entries and word count for stories!

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part hit home:

"After she saved us both that night,
By wrenching at the steering wheel;
Every thought was on my plight,
To call for help with my ordeal.
Hospitals... are the true reveal."

Handling hospitalization is pure agony. As with every hard thing, it can show us a lot if we are willing to see it.

Fine poem!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 8, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

Stay well, my friend!

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Valentines  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely Image in March



Greetings ridinghhood-p.boutilier !
*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest.
Thanks for entering!


What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how little one needs all the material trappings of valentines and other remembrances of the day when love is real. All that is needed is the beloved.

In future entries, don't forget to include the word/line count (whichever is required).

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I loved that you wrote this for a prompt I gave in W. Cramp. This first line sticks with me:

"All the valentines in the world
could be shredded to confetti,
tossed and recycled,
But you would know I still love you."

Who needs valentines with a love so fine as this. Bravo!


*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 8, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review of Wonderland 2020  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Sweet Girl on Her 8th Birthday



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You posted before me in I Write in 2020. It is a pleasure, as always, to read and send my review.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*Marshmallow clearly has a mind of his own. Well, it's a dog's nature to explore. I think that in space it would be even more difficult to sniff things out properly. Marshmallow's adorableness will see him through. Same with my basset hound. Adorableness is the universal language of dog.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked that, at the end, the searching one had a change of heart about posting for someone to "find" Marshmallow. Charm will be the saving grace here, charm with an extra dose of common sense, backing away from trouble.

Very imaginative and engaging story. The video was full of cute antics, too.

Good luck with the entry in the contest.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

My reviews are my reactions to what I have read and are not meant to be harsh critiques or whatever. I do what I enjoy here now. Seems to work out mostly.

Nice work!

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals
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Review of It can't be wool  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I was tagged and came to read - always a pleasure. I am not the judge of "The Writer's Cramp today, but I enjoyed reading this.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about what Robert might have said there when he couldn't get back in the way he wanted.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

You did a great job - this was very funny.

It is not easy to knit with hooves. Well, it's good to know their birthdays are now!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are reactions to what I read. I rarely send them now except in I Write. This caught my eye when you tagged me and I meandered over and enjoyed so I figured I would send a remoo.

Well done. I hope this is a vegetarian gathering!

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals
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Review of Surprise!  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*You posted before me in the I Write in 2020 activity! It is my pleasure to read and review your well written short story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I like how you show us that Joey is nervous, without giving away the ending. You convey a lot about his character and his happiness for others in a very short story. Some people give away things because they are so honest in their reactions and responses to situations. Joey certainly seems like one of these sorts of characters.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

At first I thought you were going in another direction when the story took a twist and surprised me in an equally satisfying (maybe more really) way at the end. I think did a fine job of engaging me, as a reader, and getting me interested right away. I think that is because Joey is such a likable character.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my reactions to the reading and not meant to be detailed critiques or editing forays. I leave those to the experts.

Writing One Review at a Time in 2020 and having fun along the way! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Toupee & All



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You posted before me in I Write in 2020. It is always my pleasure to read and review your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought this was very funny. You present a situation that could be dramatic, as it is fraught with peril, but it ends up being very humorous.

You do a fine job with presenting the characters and their behaviors, using just dialogue. I take it that is the point of the exercise. It all flows very naturally and seems in keeping with the odd situation that it presented.

Lots of humor went into this and I could picture it happening from what is written.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I particularly enjoyed how the policeman offers helpful defense suggestions. It is as if he wants to help Mr. Broderick out of his predicament even though he has to take him into custody. That helped me to feel sympathy for the officer, dealing with this. You get the feeling that he's seen similar things before, thus the "sigh".

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

You did a fine job with your story and I enjoyed reading it and writing this review. *Thumbsup*

Wishing you a very Happy New Year in 2020 as we boldly march into a new decade!! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  
for entry "January 6, 2019
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am participating in I Write in 2020 and you posted before me in the forum. It is always my honor and pleasure to read and review your wonderful poetry!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about the meaning of the words. I know, from past experience with reading your work, that each word is carefully chosen to be consistent with the title and the message.

We all are creatures of habit in this life, whether we realize it or not. There is a repeating pattern of behavior that runs in cycles. Epiphany in the title, to me, refers to the moment that we have an awakening to what we are doing.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

The key word that sticks with me the most here is "rituals". This is a brilliant choice as one might not see reactions to events in this context. It sort of forced me to take a step back and look at my own reactions to things. For some reason, this time of year is a bit rough at the year's beginning. I do not know why, but I have a tendency to overreact and leave things in the "dust" that you refer to.

This is a very thoughtful piece of writing and it forces the reader to take a step back and see the big picture when it comes to reactions and behaviors.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. As always, it is a pleasure to visit with you any time of year. I am so glad to see you post!

Happy New Year and Happy writing in 2020!! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You posted before me in the I Write in 2020 activity. It is my pleasure to read and review your engaging and delightful short story!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like how you build the reader's interest, using quick-paced dialogue. I was curious and read eagerly through your story to see what was up. It certainly seemed at first like a most peculiar couple of conversations.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked especially that two fire brigades showed up. That sort of made me chuckle at the fact that the notion of a naked lady brings levity to what could be a very tragic situation. It will make it memorable in the telling of the event, also. Comedy and tragedy are sometimes very close together. This definitely took a welcome and comedic turn.

I liked how cool the officer was too - this fits with what I've seen when I've seen people pulled over.

I thought it was very well written and all your words were carefully chosen. I enjoyed reading it and hopefully Brian isn't a budding arsonist and just misbehaved and will know better next time. He seemed to regret his choices already - or at least that's the feeling I got.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

Very enjoyable reading - thank you!!! I love comedy!

Happy 2020! May all your pastures be lush with savory grazing. *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!

I think you did a fine job with this. It is good to realize what we have might be fine. It is good to know that we are fortunate in a lot of ways. Not that many people really see what they have in life before they lose it due to age or whatever.

"Love your job and try to have a good life" is the best advice of all.

Well done! *Thumbsup*
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Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!


What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am doing the I Write in 2020 activity. As always, it is my pleasure to read and review your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about how Amazon steps in to do a lot when there is trouble. So sorry to read about Rudolph and hope he makes a full recovery.

Santa is resourceful and knows who to call. I guess with all his years of experience there would logically be a back-up plan of action. So, Christmas is cancelled, but will amazon create the illusion of Christmas? Will they call it Bezos-mas?

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the humorous banter between Mr. and Mrs. Claus. It is good to maintain a positive attitude and look to thinking outside the box in order to find a solution.

That sounds like the kind of thing they would say to each other at amazon, doesn't it? I enjoyed reading your story and was glad it was fictional for Rudolph's sake.

Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. It has been a good start for a new year to visit with you!

Being relaxed and having fun in 2020. Hope you are, too! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Pretty Ugly Words  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Christmas tHiNg

What brought tHiNg meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am doing the I Write in 2019 Activity and you posted before me in the forum. It is my pleasure to read and review your work.

What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*I thought about my own marriage which is a long time. It is good to feel so positive about those we love more than a decade (or three in my case) of being together.

There is also some humor in this. I think it takes a sense of humor to make a relationship stand the test of time in appreciating that we all change physically as the years creep over us. It is what is inside that counts and that becomes clearer as I age.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

I liked the rhyme and the message that is here that one appreciates a romantic love, but also a constant one based in friendship. That's how I took it anyway.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

I enjoyed reading your poem and felt that the rhyme scheme was good. I am no expert, but you got your message across with effective language. Nice work!

I do not engage in hyper critical reviews or editing forays. I enjoyed my reading and I told you why, which is about the size of a review from me these days. Enjoyed my visit! Well done!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Harvest Time  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Christmas tHiNg

What brought tHiNg meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You posted before me in I Write in 2019. It is always my pleasure to read your work, Mastiff .

What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how you convey a lot in this short, 24 syllable poem. The first part is idyllic, how it should be and how we would all love it to be.

The last line, with the shoving to get to the food, is more realistic from my experience. This is how the young ones tend to behave at times. But in the years to come they will remember it with mist in their eyes just like I do now. I know I wasn't such a dream child all the time when company came for holiday dinners. Quite in keeping with that last line.

What does hooves moo and tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

I like how you manage to impart a lot of things on your reader with few words. Each word is well chosen and I guess that is the point of doing the 24 syllable thing, to get to the heart of the matter with just a few words.

Well done in doing that! Happy holidays to you and yours.

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are designed to be encouraging. They are not detailed editing forays or harsh critical lectures because that is not what I like to do. Since I still have a bit of an unruly kid in me, I tend to do what I enjoy.

I think we would all do better to do what we enjoy here and elsewhere, but that's just me.

Making a Difference (I hope it's a positive one) One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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Review of Seasons  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Image Designed For tHiNg!



What brought OctOGRE thIng meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Pointright* I am a judge for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about what an unruly group of siblings mother nature has to cope with in the seasons. You personify them just right, with spring being the most flighty and headstrong. I find that to be the case every year.

But they never seem to be able to stick to that plan do they? I wrote as summer continued to linger way into October. *Headbang*


What does tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

I thought this was timely and very amusing. It helps to picture the seasons as troublesome children who will not listen. If only they and everything could be so organized, eh? But that's a dream that will rarely come true and never all sticking to the plan in one year. I don't think that's ever happened in my lifetime that I can remember. There is always one outlier or renegade in the mix.

This year I long for fall in the same way I thought that there wasn't any spring. We went right from winter to summer, you just can't please me I reckon. *Laugh*

Your story is very entertaining and timely and it made me smile. Very fine!

*Thumbsup*

Thanks again for entering the contest and giving me something amusing to read!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read. In that sense they are unique to me. I am who I am, that sort of thing. They are not meant to be harsh critiques or wildly critical editing forays because that is not what I enjoy here. I enjoy my reading and seeing what creativity writers bring to the table and I am pleased to read and review your work - well done! I appreciate the work and effort it takes to enter the site contest very much.

This review was written and stored in my review tool on the morning of October 5, 2019. It is to be sent out within 48 hours of when the winners are announced so if it is not timely in any respect, chalk it up to that delay. In other words, don't blame me. *Laugh*

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Jackals


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