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Review of Leftovers  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
I knew a writer could give anything a voice... I did not consider leftovers one of them. Thanx you for opening my perception. I really like this poem, everything about it. :D
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Review of Wonder  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful!
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Such a pleasant read! :D
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading this entry. Used books tell the story of the character of the previous owner(s). The book having missing pages, water/tear stains, the surgical cut of page 167 all tell a story within the authors story. It is unfortunate people don't display proper care of books, however, I'm excited to have a little insight into whose hand(s) the book has been.

Thanx for the description and for sharing your sensitivity towards used books.
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like a poem that captures the exact way people speak. You painted a picture, very descriptive. This is a good piece, I like it. :D
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Review of Master  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Turn to you, probe deep your eyes, do I dare
Tread lightly I must, and make it an art"

and

"My eyes leaked tears as their salt scorched my lips"

These are two profound statements. I like this poem. :D


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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.0)
Never thought your sister would turn into the predator, great twist to the story. :D
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Review of Groundhog Night  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a fun poem to read. :D
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Review of Breaths  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.0)
Leaving us in suspense...

I like this poem. :D
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Review of Tree Branches  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful poem. I am all for tapping into the power of positive thinking. Convert lemons into lemonade by adding a spoonful of sugar.

Thanx for sharing. :D
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Review of Letting Go  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is heartfelt poem. It reminds me of a line in a book called "The Prophet" by Kahlil Gibran:

"When you part from your friend, you grieve not;
For that which you love most in him may be clearer in his absence, as the mountain to the climber is clearer from the plain."

We grieve the lost of a friend and we are thankful for how they enriched out lives. :D

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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate the list and will be aware. Thanx. :D
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have a great imagination. Words are powerful tools, they can elevate or plummet someones esteem. Your story reminds readers that random acts of kindness can relieve a heavy heart. :D
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Lani,

There is a vast difference being in proximity physically and emotionally. It's disheartening when something like this occur because you never think it will happen to you. Thanx for sharing.

:D
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Review of Lani's Bio  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lani,

Thanx for sharing you writer's bio. You are welcome to visit my parlor anytime. :D
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Remain optimistic and stay resilient.

Here's a smile for you :D
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Review of First Mate  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.0)
We must be careful. Thanx for sharing.
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Review of Silent Witness  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
WOW!

Many painful elements described tenderly. This is a heartfelt poem. It gives insight.

Great job.
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
so sweet!
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Review of Four Messages  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi ncwatts,

WOW! Powerful poem about your friend. "She is not here and even worse nothing to prove she is really gone" very profound line. I really like this poem.


Keep writing and always smile :D.
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Review of Ruby Kisses  
Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
The heart can only be truthful of what it feels. "Would make my heart soar to the sky, beautiful and blue" is very descriptive of the sensation of a kiss. That line makes me smile :D.
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Review by A-MinorPoet
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tsurtidogni,

This is a refreshing read. You mention Wan-Wan without lessening the effect the rest of your animals have on you. It's sounds wonderful where you live totally different from living in a metropolis. I enjoyed reading and welcome you to visit my space in the community.

Sincerly,
A-MinorPoet
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