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Review of Ours  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Amazingly well-written story. Liked it. In fact it felt real. No spelling or grammar errors too. Well done. Would love to read more of your work. Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Liked your poem. Well-written though I prefer rhyming words at the end of lines. But, meaning-wise, it was interesting and true too. Keep writing. :)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Chapter 1: Vignette Item # 2205482 for your review.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hilarious story. Well-written and different in a good way. The only error I found was the spelling for 'waive' as 'wave'. Please edit the same.
Keep writing. Cheers - Swetha
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Review of The Sound  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lol... seriously a laugh riot. Well written work and oh-so-hilarious. It made my day. I totally sympathize with the protagonist inspite of knowing it's a fictional character and that is saying something. Keep writing. Cheers - Swetha


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Review of Ethereal Love  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful poem. Well-written. I am not much of an expert with poems but can say yours is lovely. The ending came as a pleasant surprise. Would like to read more of your work. Keep writing. Cheers-Swetha
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Amazing storyline. Very gripping too although it takes time to get acquainted with the many characters. But that said, I understand that the story demands so many characters. I really found the story too good, and would love to read the rest of it. Keep writing. My best wishes to you.

As far as the grammar and editing goes, I think there are quite a few spelling errors and punctuation/capital errors. Please do correct them. If you need help, I would be more than happy to help you.


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