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Review of On The Brink  
Review by Absolfusion
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Thank you for this short poem.
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Review by Absolfusion
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful. I liked it.
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Review by Absolfusion
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good work, I really enjoyed reading this.
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Review of Sea Salad  
Review by Absolfusion
Rated: E | (3.0)
I honestly don't understand how anyone could hate green vegetables. Green beans are delicious!
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Review by Absolfusion
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very informative read. George Armstrong Custer is considered one of the worst military leaders in U.S. history, his arrogance and hard hardheadedness an almighty blemish upon the U.S. Army. This work needs to be revised to replace all instances of "Autie" with either Custer or Col. Custer.
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Review of The Message  
Review by Absolfusion
Rated: E | (5.0)
I assume that your poem invokes the feeling of standing on a seashore, watching the sun fade to night and waiting for the promise of a new day. I, myself had stood on that shore many a time, wondering when the stars would fade so that the sun might bring me new life. An excellent read overall.


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Review by Absolfusion
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
It's interesting how few people seem to address that this creature can suck up ANYTHING. Kirby may seem innocent but I think that's just because he's just a child. What if Kirby suddenly grew up? Would he join the more noble members of his race in protecting the innocent? Or would he finally give in to his baser urges and start eating everyone in sight? Very nice read and thought provaoking.


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