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Review of Crimson Moon  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (2.5)
I like the way it's presented and the idea. I wish you used better words and maybe even type it in Ye Olde English form.
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Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (4.0)
The way you feel about life is the way I feel about my generation
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Review of Borrowed Bodies  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Man the second stanza describing the lung cancer freaked me out. So we have cillia in our lungs that smokers burn away gradually? When you say sweepers I guess you mean they're meant to filter out the bad stuff like dust.?


peace
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Review of Music and Writing  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (5.0)
I get inspired by others. It might be a single word or a line in a song and it just triggers something. Especially if you have writers block. Listen to your favorite band or read your favorite writer.
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Review of The Color of Moon  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
That was good. I was abale to put a rythm to it. I'm a songwriter so If there's a melody in there I'll find. That was a good song


Peace
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Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was good. I don't like coffee that much but I like wolves' though. And I like the the structure of this poem too.
Read me sometime.

Peace
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Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's sad. It took me a little while to catch on because it's a little complicated. But I felt it after I started making sense out of it.
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Review of Dead Steps  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Hey, I'm sorry for such a low rating. It's hard to write a good horror piece or something creepy. I think it's too long. Your trying to tell a story in poetry format. All the lines in each stanza are too long for my taste. I get lost and have to reread the stanza before. I'll read more of your stuff. Check out my poem for "when I wear your favorite dress". tell me if you like it. I believe it portrays a perfect example a psycho.

peace.
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Review of weeping willow  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey um I like green by the way, but seriously though do you think you could make a haiku out of this. If you don't I will
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for entry "Kyoka
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
lol nice I read it wrong at first. I'll mail you what I thought i read. You probably get it all the time
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Review of Death, Oh Death  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Steven when I first read the title I was a little iffy but I was drawn to it and I gave it a chance and I'm glad I did. I enjoyed your poem. I enjoyed it so much I even put a rhythm to it. Are these lyrics of yours? Beause this would be a good country song.Not like todays country. More like the old country like Hank Williams Senior. And a mildly fast pace like bluegrass
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Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
That was a nice little trip to New Zealand
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Review of Leftovers  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: E | (5.0)
lol I like it. You musta got realy stoned. Opened your fridge and saw all the leftover Christmas dinner and thought to yourself..."Those poor leftovers. How cold and old they must feel." Now I wanna know whats in the pantry.
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Review of Watching  
Review by Mr. Jones
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I could immediatly put a rhythm to it when I started reading it. So I liked that. I wish you'd kept describing fire more. I know what its about I think. A nice backyard/camping bonfire with family and friends with plenty of children running amuck. The ending does not seem to fit
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