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Review of Butterflies  Open in new Window.
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Angelica Weatherby- Mother Day Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary. Long time, no see *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

An apt description of a beautiful creature. Surely God was at His creative best designing the different kinds of butterflies.

My Favorite Part(s)

The last line, which states their beauty, their uniqueness and being recognizable.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this a prompt, or just something flowing from that wonderful mind of yours? Thank you so much for sharing. Hope to see you soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Pitter Pat  Open in new Window.
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello StephBee Author Icon

Hi again. By the way, I love your milk and cookies costumicon.

My First Impression:

I hear the chains and squeaks and groans in the background as I read your poem celebrating that haunted holiday.

My Favorite Part:

"To bad they're too old to work" Now that is a scary thought!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Did you write this as a prompt or for a contest? Nicely done. Thank you for sharing your work. Again, Happy WdC Anniversary!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of Any Time C-Notes  Open in new Window.
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again.

After looking over your collection of c-notes, My impressions are these:

The pictures are wonderful. They give a faded, painted feel which is beautiful.

My Favorite One(s)

The third card in the collection with a waterfall in the background and a bridge in the foreground crossing the stream has almost a jungle feeling to it. It looks like a painting, and I'd love it in my room *Smile*

Suggestions/Questions:

Are these pictures your work? Thank you so much for sharing them.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear StephBee Author IconMail Icon ,

I am so glad that I decided to do your challenge. *BigSmile*

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I LOVE When Harry Met Sally. It's just one of those feel good movies, ya know?

My Favorite Part(s)

I'm always up for trivia, so this was right up my alley. I didn't do as good as I had hoped (3/5), but it was a sweet jaunt down memory lane. OMG! Who could forget the orgasm at the deli? LOL

Final thoughts:

Thanks for sharing this. I'm glad I found it. Hope your Anniversary Month has been great.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dear Soldier_Mike Author IconMail Icon ,

After working your puzzle, My impressions are these:

An apt work for an insipid disease. The women in my family has a history of cancer, and this puzzle brings it up in my mind.

My Favorite Part(s)

The puzzle was fairly easy to solve. I am a fan of word searches.

Final Thoughts:

Thank you for sharing the word search. Happy WdC Anniversary!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dear ElizabethHayes-DaughterofIAM Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I want to wish you a Happy WdC Anniversary. Thank you for sharing about yourself. It takes courage to open up about the good, the bad, and the ugly in order to come through and become the person you are.

My Favorite Part(s)

It seems you have an inquisitive nature. That is a wonderful asset in a writer.

Final Thoughts:

I am a dozen years older than you, and I appreciate your faithfulness to your grandmother. I wish you well now and in the future. This was written quite a while ago, and I am curious as to where life has led you.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Hello Olivia Author Icon

My First Impression:

What a fun puzzle.

My Favorite Part:

The different names are amusing, and quite different than what you would think of for German town names.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I am glad you came up with it, and of course it is ok to "blame" Cubby for starting things - LOL. Thanks for sharing, and maybe we will have a new slew of puzzles to come.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of Spring Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

After checking out your word search, My impressions are these:

A fun little word search, with all of the things pertaining to spring. It didn't take me long to finish it, and I'm glad I saw it on the Newsfeed.

My Favorite Part(s)

All of the words about spring made this a timely and fun puzzle

Final thoughts:

Thank you for sharing this word search, and happy Anniversary with WdC.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon

My First Impression:

An apt prelude to the coming weekend. The religious leaders were pricked in their hearts, and the response was anger.

My Favorite Part:

The second to last phrase is the promise of eternal life - to those who believe.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

It is my prayer that this weekend will give all a chance to come to know the saving grace of our Lord, especially friends and family.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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for entry "Perfect Dinner" Open in new Window.
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yum!!! What a culinary delight in poetic form. Who wouldn't enjoy?
Thank you so much for sharing this. Just reading it made me hungry. I think I will bake some salmon this week. One less dinner to have to figure out. LOL.

Is this a contest prompt? I hope you do well with it, if so.


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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Ben Langhinrichs Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

So many ways this lady "covered up" and made herself almost invisible. I "almost" didn't see you - but something little, such as red toe nails - caused you to look again. And the way it turns out, it was a good thing.

My Favorite Part(s)

The different ways a woman can cover up - culturally, and the different layers and types of cover-ups. Very well done.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this done as a prompt, or maybe a contest? Thanks so much for sharing your writing. I hope to check out more in the future.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of I Hope You Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dear THANKFUL SONALI 18 WDC Years! Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I like this letter to yourself. I am sorry for the loss of your beloved father. I lost a sister, and understand a little of the pain/relief of the loss.

My Favorite Part(s)

You've set some good goals here, and have set a tone of encouragement. I hope that you were able to achieve your goals that you set.

Suggestions/Questions:

Is this a contest that is held every year? Even if it is not, it seems to be a good idea for setting goals. Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear James A. Osteen Jr. Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:
A wonderful tribute about a soldier who answered the call to service, and ultimately paid the ultimate price.

My Favorite Part(s)

Realizing that the cost of freedom is not free, and that people are willing to pay it, regardless.

Suggestions/Questions:

Thank you for sharing this, and I hope to look further into your port in the future, as I enjoy poetry as well.

Happy WdC Anniversary, and many more to come.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 23rd WdC Anniversary!

After looking over your port, My impressions are these:

There are lots of things going on, which is to be expected, since you've been around for a hot minute. Also looking over your port, I found a new trinket to collect of the "grand-dog". What a cutie! Thanks.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the way you have your port laid out, and it makes it inviting to check out. I plan to do so in the future.

Suggestions/Questions:

Nothing to suggest. I am looking forward to checking out more of your work soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of I am Sham  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Kalai Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Looking back on life, especially in the 20s, I get the feeling that "time" has not treated you well. To me, the word "sham" means phony or counterfeit. Then you describe yourself as not a sham at all.

My Favorite Part(s)

The realness of this poem, the crying out struck me and resonated with me.

Suggestions/Questions:

Do you still feel this way? Or is this just an artistic expression, such as for a contest? Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Hello dragonwoman Author IconMail Icon

My First Impression:

What a funny little story. From the backwater Appalachia would be my guess. Moonshine? Bet them aliens got great mileage after that! LOL

My Favorite Part:

That the sheriff actually took down notes, and didn't just haul them off to the pokey.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

This had a great hook, and I enjoyed this little story. Thanks for sharing!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear ♫~ Kenword~♫ Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

What a transformative testimony. It is straight-forward, without any varnish. God has done a wonderful work in your lives, and in the lives of your loved ones.

My Favorite Part(s)

That you show the good, the bad, and the ugly, but also show God's grace and mercy in your lives. Romans 8:28 does show itself in your lives.

Final Thoughts:

Thank you for sharing part of your life in this manner. I hope your WdC Anniversary month is a blessed one.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Friendly Neighborhood Derg Author Icon

My First Impression:

You really do love your dragons! The illustrations are very cute and varied.

My Favorite Part:

I don't know if I like the fishing Gulp or the author Gulp better. The fishing Gulp as my dad loves fishing, or the studious author Gulp who looks so studious.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Thank you so much for sharing them with everyone.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Dear Anna Marie Carlson Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Boy, could I relate to this poem. The ups and downs of relationships...bah! humbug! LOL.

My Favorite Part(s)

The lines are quite rhythmic and have a nice "bounce" to them.

Suggestions/Questions:
I see this is a newer poem. How did it do in the contest? I enjoyed your writing. Thanks for sharing. Happy WdC Anniversary!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

These are some FUN c-notes, as your title implies. The characters are fresh and lively, and I have used some of these in my gifting of c-notes.

My Favorite Part(s)

I think the dancing smiley faces with THANK YOU is my favorite one.

Suggestions/Questions:

You should advertise these once in a while.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of KEYBOARD  Open in new Window.
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Dear THANKFUL SONALI 18 WDC Years! Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I like this type of poetry, and the two different styles are quite nice in appearance.

My Favorite Part(s)

The way you describe a keyboad in this poetic style. It is beautiful and flows well.

Suggestions/Questions:

No suggestions, other than I plan on visiting your port more often. Thank you so much for sharing this. Love it.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear maggie Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This is a nice work on how to make tempera paints. I knew that paint colors could be done by using natural things, but you give a pretty nice list of the different materials for the different colors.

My Favorite Part(s)

The list of things you need to make the paints, outside of the natural ingredients. Vinegar, oil and even a mortar and pestle (or two rocks).

Suggestions/Questions:

Have you made any of these paint colors? How did they turn out? Thank you for sharing this writing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Grammarama  Open in new Window.
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Dear Davy Kraken Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again! This writing caught my eye in regards to giving reviews, and your explaining what you use in conjunction with your reviewing.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

There were several different definitions given in an orderly grouping. Some of these things I learned in English class, and I recognize them. However, there are a few that I hadn't learned, or forgot *FacePalm*

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the way that this is grouped together, and I'd like to keep this handy when doing my writing.

Suggestions/Questions:

Thank you so much for providing this writing. I think you should advertise this in the Newsfeed, as it would be helpful to many, I believe.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear 💙 Carly: poems & novel Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Yikes! I feel for Posy. To have your hopes and dreams crushed like that. I want to do violence to Brock and Samantha on Posy's behalf.

My Favorite Part(s)

In under 300 words, you managed to tell an entire tale, of happiness to betrayal. Well done. "You can both go to hell" sums it up nicely.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this for a contest? I hope it's not based on a true story *Hug1**Frown**Hug2* . I plan on checking in on your writings in the future. Thanks for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Gaby Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You seem like a fun-loving free spirit.

My Favorite Part(s)

Your tongue-in-cheek answers to the questions about you. I love your spirit.

Final thoughts:

Keep on writing, and being you. I am glad I checked out some of your port, and look forward to reading more in the future. Glad you are here.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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