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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing - This is a review done for the "I Write 2024" Challenge.



*FlowerP* Impression: This little dialogue cracked me up. It was very fast paced, and engaging.


*FlowerY* Cool things: I love the way the "mountain man" freaked out over a little mouse. It was quite funny to me. I'm glad that they came to a compromise, and decided to stick it out.


*FlowerR* Suggestion(s): This is just a little nitpicky, but if you could possible enlarge the font a little, or maybe put a space in between the different speakers, it might make it a bit easier to read. But other than that, I couldn't help but chuckle.


*FlowerB* Final Thoughts: This might make a great prompt for a story.


Sincerely,

AmyJo

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Hello foxtale

Thank you for noticing my work, and allowing me to read/review your writing.

My First Impression:Indeed! The A-Team would have been proud of the endeavors to rescue this cake. I wonder if Buster was nick-named "Decker" after that.

My Favorite Part:The details were delightful to read, and the innovation actually made the cake better that what was the original. Thank goodness for the level-headed Marsha!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I don't have any suggestions. I like that you had where it was written at the bottom of the piece. I also like the font size, as it made it easier to read! A wonderful memory, to be sure!

Thanks again for sharing! I very much enjoyed reading your work.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Hello LegendaryMask❤️

My First Impression:I started reading this in the Snail Mail Forum. I don't know that I ever saw him online here, as I joined up Aug of 2022. It sounds like he has been through quite the rollercoaster ride in life *Hug1**Frown**Hug2* .

My Favorite Part:Your fond memories, especially of the Anniversary Review challenge that you would engage in with Angus. Perhaps we could do something like that in honor of Angus? Perhaps revive the challenge for a month, or so?

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

My heart goes out to him, and his family. I'd like to send him a card to wish him well, if that would be ok?
Anyway, I am glad that you shared, what must be some heartbreaking information. Bless you.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of Deadline Looming  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing - This is a review done for the "I Write 2024" Challenge.

*FlowerP* Impression: Fear is a powerful motivator. I've certainly not have had challenges like this, but I know well the fear of deadlines. I can appreciate your fear and doubts about overcoming obstacles, and also the fear of public speaking.


*FlowerY* Cool things: That you can see both sides of the coin. You understood yourself and the challenges that you overcame. You put praise for your parents and their willingness to get you mobile while you were young. You also were willing to admit that you could have had more friends if you were only willing to give them a chance.

The gratefulness to your "muse" or "inspiration" as the deadline loomed, and that you were able to write your speech - that and not having to add to/modify your speech afterwards. Very cool, indeed.


*FlowerR* Suggestion(s):I can only offer one suggestion, and that of maybe a little larger font size, as my eyes get tired easily reading small print.


*FlowerB* Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading your work, and I thought you nailed the prompt that you choose. I wish you well in the contest you've entered. Well done, in my opinion.


Sincerely,

AmyJo
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Review of Wonderland  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Wow, just Wow! I have never read Alice in Wonderland, and this project/competition seems way over my head. I think that this is an especially bold task. Kudos for putting it together and the pictures are stunning.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like how you explain the contest, and how you give clear rules for engaging. This page is quite the sight to behold.

Suggestions/Questions:

Maybe one day you will offer this contest again? Thank you for your incredible imagination and for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Impermanence  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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DearWords Whirling 'Round ,

Hi again!

*Wind* After reading your work, My impressions are these:This poem fits your title. Things go by, and nothing stays.

My Favorite Part(s)It looks like you've followed the prompt, and by the awardicon on your writing, you must have won the contest?

I like the AAA BBB CCC DDD EEE format of of your poem.

Suggestions/Questions:Font a good size for reading ease; I think this is spot on! Thank you for sharing your work.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Goat  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Words Whirling 'Round ,

*Barn* After reading your work, My impressions are these:A simple every day activity summed up nicely in a haiku.

*Barn* My Favorite Part(s)I can picture the goats running toward their caretaker, hungry and wanting their food. My sister had goats and they were funny to see. I also liked the picture by the title; it caught my attention and gave me a little chuckle.

Suggestions/Questions:I see this was done for a contest. How did you do with the contest?


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Fibonacci Spring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Words Whirling 'Round ,

*Rain* After reading your work, My impressions are these:I like learning about new types of poetry, so I thought I would give your folder a "lookie-see".

*FlowerV* My Favorite Part(s)This poem is an interesting decription of springtime. It just makes me feel warm and fuzzy. I also like that you share what the Fibonacci style is. Much appreciated, as I would love to try this style for myself.

Suggestions/Questions:I have nothing to note really. The font size is great, and though I like to see poetry centered, it isn't always practical or necessary. Well done! Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Brooklyn ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: Another easy poll to answer, and I have.

My Favorite Part(s)I like the different answers you've given. My favorite genre is poetry, but I suspect that I do a lot of prose as well, given the descriptions that you have given.

Suggestions/Questions:Other than perhaps seeing if the new people that are now on WdC, perhaps you should put this poll out there again? I appreciate your curiosity.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Brooklyn ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:This is an interesting poll, and now that I've found it, I have gladly taken it.

My Favorite Part(s)I like the different answers that you gave as part of your poll. My answer was to Be honest, but don't tell me I'm terrible, PLEASE! I don't mind critique, but don't tell me my writing is terrible without giving me answers to why it is.

Suggestions/Questions:I think you should put the poll out there again. But just my opinion.

Happy Account Anniversary!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 💙 Carly

I am reviewing this as part of the 23 in 11 Writing Challenge.

My First Impression: I have to laugh at the title of your book. I am old enough to think of the roaring "20s as flappers and jazz and speakeasy-s. So 100 years later, here we are again *BigSmile*. Although the world doesn't seem quite as carefree any more. *Sad*

I digress; on to your writing: *PenP*

My Favorite Part:This conversation is realistic and I too wanted to pop Alec on the head with something. It was rather funny that you wanted to blow him up. You showed a beginning, middle and ending of the story within the allotted word count.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I hope you do well with the contest. I think Flash Fiction is up to 300 words, so you do have a little room to play. Personally, I liked the story as is. I even found the size of the font comfortable for reading. Again, good luck!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of There Is No God?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Marvelous Friend

My First Impression:What wonderful questions. Without God, it would seem that the world would be form of chaos.

My Favorite Part:Just the different questions covering a lot of topics. It does make one think. I'm grateful for my security in the knowledge of God.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Thank you for sharing your heart and thoughts on this topic.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of WDC Pro-Tips  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love

I'm here nosing around your portfolio, and I am just blown away by this first section. I spotted no witches, but a ton of stuff to help one on their way to navigating the ML writing code here on WdC.

My First Impression:This is well thought out. Lots of interesting topics and "how to"s all over the place.

My Favorite Part:creating a progress bar was quite helpful and highlighting text is amazing!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I wish I could double "fan" this item and you! I love it. Now, on to finding witches!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of My will  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DearWickedfugitive ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:Wow! I had never heard of this style of poem, and it is harder than it looks. You inspired me to try one of my own. It was hard to come up with phrasing without an "e" as your prompt instructed.

My Favorite Part(s) The second stanza is vivid in my mind's eye, and quite relatable to me.

Suggestions/Questions:How did you do in the contest? Thank you so much for sharing your work. Thank you also for giving me another type of poem to practice.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Ailurophobia  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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DearForeverDreamer ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:
Wow! *Mindblown* What a scary story you've written. I am a big fan of cats, but this tale would definitely make me think twice about owning one (if you can call it "owning")

My Favorite Part(s)How you've given Cheri her own voice and thoughts. I also like how you gave the explanation of the differences between regular cats and "devil" cats. Very spooky, indeed, and I am afraid for Sierra's little one that is coming *Yikes*

Suggestions/Questions:Other than maybe a larger font, I have no suggestions. Did you come up with this as a contest entry? It certainly spooked me for sure!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Don't Trust Cupid  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DearForeverDreamer ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:
This poem is so relatable to me. I heartily agree that Cupid is not to be trusted. I, too, have been left feeling stupid after being entangled by his arrow *Sad*

My Favorite Part(s)I enjoyed the light-heartedness of this poem. It was easy to read, and brought a smile to my face.

Suggestions/Questions:I found nothing of note, except possibly enlarging the font a bit for old, tired eyes. LOL. Other than that, spot on!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Intensive Care  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DearForeverDreamer ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:What a horrifying thing to happen! I cannot begin to imagine what you've gone through, and I am grateful that you have a way of expressing your emotions through your writing.

My Favorite Part(s)That Ann was compassionate and reached out to you. That in itself is a testament to her care.

Suggestions/Questions:I hope that you are doing well, and I wish you a happy WdC Anniversary.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Breast Cancer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Spring in my Sox

My First Impression:If only...what evocative words. A simple statement, and yet, some people will just ignore the warnings.

My Favorite Part:I like the simplicity of this poem. Two couplets, no punctuation, but they stand together as a reminder to us all who have been or know someone who has been a survivor or now a memory *Sad*

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:The only thing I could suggest, is perhaps just a larger font, or maybe an increase of the line spacing. Otherwise, perfect! Thank you for sharing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Dear Nixie Martell cheerleader ,

I thought maybe I would change tactics and try another folder.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:You seem to have a c-note for just about any occasion.

My Favorite Part(s)The little gift guys are so cool. They are bright and entertaining to read and help give information about what c-notes are available.

Suggestions/Questions:No suggestions, really - I've added your shop to my favorites list. Thank you for sharing these little goodies, and I hope to purchase some of them in the future.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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DearNixie Martell cheerleader ,

You are the featured author for October in Anniversary Reviews, so I thought I'd nose through your port to see anything I'd like to review for you.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:I like the way you bring to mind memories of your parents. I also like the way that you show gratitude for when they help you out. There are too many people who just expect their parents to shell out for whatever they want without expressing thanks.

My Favorite Part(s)That you've put your thoughts down on paper, so to speak. I find that writing out my feelings make them more real.

Suggestions/Questions:Perhaps you can update your writing, maybe think of more memories? Don't mind me if you'd rather not. I'm still lucky enough to have both of my parents, and you've inspired me to write down my memories as well. Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a nifty idea, and anything that can add to the sharing of feedback on reviews is a plus in my book. I also like the little kitten trinket that is an added incentive. I hope you get lots of feedback for this item. I shall be curious to see how the new system works out.

Sincerely,
AmyJo *HeartP*
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Hello Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk

I am reviewing this as part of the 23 in 11 Writing Challenge. Your entry is right before mine, so here goes: *Smile*

My First Impression:Well, ok, then! I had to shake my head, as I've known one or two people like Mitch. It is almost "meme" worthy, blaming Auto Correct for everything. I felt sorry for Tess, and I'm sure that I would have responded in silence as well, although I'm sure there would be a "boil-over" point in the not to distant future.

My Favorite Part: I had to chuckle when the store owner told him that he was going the wrong way entirely! Tess must have felt justified, although she doesn't say anything, that stare must have spoke volumes.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts: I hope that your flash fiction does well in the contest. Good luck! I enjoyed reading your little story.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Hello QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

I saw "New Idea" posted on the Newsfeed. Curiosity getting the better of me, I thought I'd check it out.

My First Impression: Ho-boy! This is not what I was figuring it to be. Your story leaves me with a lot of questions and not very many answers. I'm shaking my head at the antics.

My Favorite Part: The thought of "rent a casket" made me laugh. This sounds like high school or early college thinking for sure.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Flash fiction is incredibly easy to read and digest. It does leave a lot of questions, but it is enjoyable. Thank you for sharing, and I'm glad that you won the contest with your entry. I will have to check out this flash fiction genre.

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Review of Toe in the Water  
for entry "Failing to Win" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Beholden

I can totally relate to having blah days, but wanting to do something in spite of it. You bring up an interesting point of view. We all manage to fail at some point or other; I believe it's part of being a member of the human race. We can have our moments of "ah ha!" but mostly we just live day to day, minute by minute in some cases.

I like that you make being a "loser" not such a stigma. I don't think that any of us have a right to sit in judgment and declare someone a "winner" or a "loser".

Thank you so much for sharing your point of view.

Sincerely,
AmyJo



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for entry "Deluxe Chef salad " 
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Dear Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love

I want to try this salad as soon as possible. The ingredients are wonderful, and why not shake things up a bit? You've done so, and it looks delicious. I'm going to have to follow your recipes more often, as I am a recipe collector myself.

Thank you for sharing this tasty morsel and I look forward to finding more of your goodies in the future.

Yum!

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