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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Dorianne Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 19th WdC Anniversary.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

It always hurts to lose a beloved pet, especially if the pet is in pain.

My Favorite Part(s)

You expressed your desire to have Stubby back, but not if the pain came back, too. You would rather miss your pet than to have him in pain.

Suggestions/Questions:

Thank you for sharing your writing. I hope to read more of your work in the future.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Jeremy - 22 Years With WDC Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again! Hope your anniversary is going well!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

LOL...it wasn't so much reading, as it was a photo. Is this you? How recent is it?

My Favorite Part(s)

If this is you, what a baby-face. You don't look old enough to be here 22 years.

Suggestions/Questions:

An updated picture, like a then/now kinda thing? Just curious. Thanks for all that you do here. And yes, you ARE Cool - not just somewhere, but here. You are appreciated!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Staycation  Open in new Window.
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Dear Teargen Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary to you.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

COVID certainly disrupted people's plans for quite a while. I like your version of a "staycation".

My Favorite Part(s)

My mom is an avid bird watcher. I like the descriptions of the different birds you describe. The funniest is the robin, with its fat red belly hopping around. I also like the majestic heron. I would say for me, a favorite is the pilated woodpecker. He is huge with a bright red crest. Have you seen one?

Final thoughts:

Now that Covid is "over" do you still enjoy watching birds? Thank you for sharing your staycation with me. I'm glad to have read it.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Margins  Open in new Window.
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Hello Rick Fix Author Icon

Hello, and thank you for the opportunity to check out your writing.

My First Impression:

The title and caption caught my eye, and made me want to read further. Ah, the joy/despair of oncoming puberty! The insane thoughts, the wonder of other other sex, and the fear of rejection.

My Favorite Part:

I had to chuckle at the seeming "make out" session, at least from the girl's point of view. Boys are boys no matter the age, it seems.

I liked the way you wrote this, with no capitals or punctuation. To me, it made it stand out.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I didn't see any grammar issues, outside of the "no punctuation" But it didn't take away from the overall production.

A tricky time in young men/women's lives, and I'm sure there will always be the thoughts and dreams that come along with the growing up. You write this with deliberation, and good taste, where it could have been crass or rude. Thank you for that.

Keep up the good work, and I appreciate your letting me share in your writing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear Prof Moriarty Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

You've written a nice autobiography that is easy to read. I like how you've prefaced it with some questions which you go about to answer in your writing.

My Favorite Part(s)

I like the change of colors that separate your paragraphs. They catch the eye nicely. I also like how you write about the ups and downs in your life, and you don't sugar-coat anything. I am sorry about your mom.

Suggestions/Questions:

Thank you so much for sharing about your life, and everything else. I hope you are well, and that your WdC Anniversary is the best one yet. Take care of yourself.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of broccoli  Open in new Window.
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Hello THANKFUL SONALI 18 WDC Years! Author Icon

My First Impression:
I enjoyed reading your poem.

My Favorite Part:

While I now enjoy broccoli as an adult. I wasn't a big fan of it as a kid. I like the way you made an acrostic poem out of the title and subject.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

No suggestions that I could see. Have you tried a broccoli/cheddar soup? Also, cut the broccoli into small manageable bites. Maybe use some bacon w/ a bit of the fat to help flavor it. No harm, no foul if you cannot eat it still. Thank you for sharing.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear typingrhyme Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This poem reminds me of the song by Keith Green "create in me a clean heart, O God". You ask for guidance, patience when you fail, and help when things get hard. It is a good poem, and a great reminder that we are not alone.

My Favorite Part(s)

My favorite lines are the last two: Please give me peace and rest; Help me believe that You know best.


Final Thoughts:

It has been a few years since you've written this poem, but it is still relevant today. Thank you so much for sharing your work.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Hello Prier Author Icon

My First Impression:

You talk about fortune cookies and give some background about them.

My Favorite Part:

You describe the feelings of disappointment, both with the taste of the cookie, and how the "fortune" ruined your day. It was clear your feelings about these little cookies, and I appreciated your clarity. I feel as though they are given too much credence overall. I especially chuckled when you thought maybe if the cookie tasted better, you might give the fortune more weight.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I haven't really thought about fortune cookies, and just basically take them for granted. I appreciate your candor, and for sharing this work.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of Trinkets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Schnujo's Giving Away GPs Author IconMail Icon ,

Hello again, dear!

After looking over your work, My impressions are these:

You are one busy bee! Between travelling, school, and WdC, I wonder if you ever get to sleep? LOL.

My Favorite Part(s)

Thanks to this port, I just collected at least a dozen more trinkets for my collection. Thank you for that.

Suggestions/Questions:

If possible, you should advertise this in the Newsfeed. I'm sure there are plenty of people who would love to add to their collections. You rock! Thanks for sharing, and may this be the best WdC Anniversary for you.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Tim Chiu Author Icon

My First Impression:

Wow! The first stanza is a dramatic picture of the Milky Way Galaxy. Inspiring.

My Favorite Part:

The stanzas all show an aspect of God's grace and mercy. It is very encouraging. I'm happy that Marvelous Friend Author IconMail Icon put this in the Newsfeed.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Thank you for sharing!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Tehuti, Lord Of The Eight Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary!


After reading your work, My impressions are these:

This particular story hit me hard in the feels. It is difficult when a pet passes away, especially having had her for so long.

My Favorite Part(s)

You express yourself eloquently, and I can hear the emotion, even after all of this time.

Final thoughts:

I'm glad you shared this in your portfolio. I'm glad I took the time to read it. Thank you for sharing your work, and a bit about you.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of On Giving Reviews  Open in new Window.
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Dear Roseille ♥ Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy 20th WdC Anniversary!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I was just reading where someone didn't "know how" to do a review. I knew there was help for those who were uncomfortable with reviews, or did not know how to start, and here is one *Smile*

My Favorite Part(s)

I like how you've broken it down into different types of writing, and the different things in different genres. You even go as far as to give help to those who just don't care to review, but reward others who do. This writing was easy to read and digest.

Suggestions/Questions:

If you don't care to "toot" your own horn, I'd be happy to advertise this in the Newsfeed for you. I've also fan'd your article. I found it helpful and insightful.
Thank you for sharing.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Princess Megan Rose Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary!

After looking over your work, My impressions are these:

You have quite the talent for MBs and for trinkets. Your pictures a quite something.

My Favorite Part(s)

You never disappoint, and I came away with several new trinkets thanks to you.

Final thoughts:

Thank you for sharing your talent in such a creative way. Much appreciated. Keep up the great work *Smile*


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Dear Revelry- inspiration needed Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary!

After looking over your work, My impressions are these:

These c-notes are unique, and visually stunning. I enjoyed looking through them, and have fan'd them so that I can begin to use them.

My Favorite Part(s)

I liked all of them, but the one "Perfect Point of View" is my favorite.

Suggestions/Questions:

I think you should advertise these c-notes on occasion in the Newsfeed. Thank you for making and sharing your work. I hope you get more traffic through these c-notes.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Butterflies  Open in new Window.
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Dear Angelica Weatherby- Father Day Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary. Long time, no see *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

An apt description of a beautiful creature. Surely God was at His creative best designing the different kinds of butterflies.

My Favorite Part(s)

The last line, which states their beauty, their uniqueness and being recognizable.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this a prompt, or just something flowing from that wonderful mind of yours? Thank you so much for sharing. Hope to see you soon.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello StephBee Author Icon

Hi again. By the way, I love your milk and cookies costumicon.

My First Impression:

I hear the chains and squeaks and groans in the background as I read your poem celebrating that haunted holiday.

My Favorite Part:

"To bad they're too old to work" Now that is a scary thought!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

Did you write this as a prompt or for a contest? Nicely done. Thank you for sharing your work. Again, Happy WdC Anniversary!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Review of Any Time C-Notes  Open in new Window.
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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

Hi again.

After looking over your collection of c-notes, My impressions are these:

The pictures are wonderful. They give a faded, painted feel which is beautiful.

My Favorite One(s)

The third card in the collection with a waterfall in the background and a bridge in the foreground crossing the stream has almost a jungle feeling to it. It looks like a painting, and I'd love it in my room *Smile*

Suggestions/Questions:

Are these pictures your work? Thank you so much for sharing them.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear StephBee Author IconMail Icon ,

I am so glad that I decided to do your challenge. *BigSmile*

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I LOVE When Harry Met Sally. It's just one of those feel good movies, ya know?

My Favorite Part(s)

I'm always up for trivia, so this was right up my alley. I didn't do as good as I had hoped (3/5), but it was a sweet jaunt down memory lane. OMG! Who could forget the orgasm at the deli? LOL

Final thoughts:

Thanks for sharing this. I'm glad I found it. Hope your Anniversary Month has been great.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear Soldier_Mike Author IconMail Icon ,

After working your puzzle, My impressions are these:

An apt work for an insipid disease. The women in my family has a history of cancer, and this puzzle brings it up in my mind.

My Favorite Part(s)

The puzzle was fairly easy to solve. I am a fan of word searches.

Final Thoughts:

Thank you for sharing the word search. Happy WdC Anniversary!


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Dear ElizabethHayes-DaughterofIAM Author IconMail Icon ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I want to wish you a Happy WdC Anniversary. Thank you for sharing about yourself. It takes courage to open up about the good, the bad, and the ugly in order to come through and become the person you are.

My Favorite Part(s)

It seems you have an inquisitive nature. That is a wonderful asset in a writer.

Final Thoughts:

I am a dozen years older than you, and I appreciate your faithfulness to your grandmother. I wish you well now and in the future. This was written quite a while ago, and I am curious as to where life has led you.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Olivia – Hockey DEN-GER 2:1 Author Icon

My First Impression:

What a fun puzzle.

My Favorite Part:

The different names are amusing, and quite different than what you would think of for German town names.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

I am glad you came up with it, and of course it is ok to "blame" Cubby for starting things - LOL. Thanks for sharing, and maybe we will have a new slew of puzzles to come.

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Dear Maryann Author IconMail Icon ,

After checking out your word search, My impressions are these:

A fun little word search, with all of the things pertaining to spring. It didn't take me long to finish it, and I'm glad I saw it on the Newsfeed.

My Favorite Part(s)

All of the words about spring made this a timely and fun puzzle

Final thoughts:

Thank you for sharing this word search, and happy Anniversary with WdC.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Hello Jay O'Toole Author Icon

My First Impression:

An apt prelude to the coming weekend. The religious leaders were pricked in their hearts, and the response was anger.

My Favorite Part:

The second to last phrase is the promise of eternal life - to those who believe.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

It is my prayer that this weekend will give all a chance to come to know the saving grace of our Lord, especially friends and family.

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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Yum!!! What a culinary delight in poetic form. Who wouldn't enjoy?
Thank you so much for sharing this. Just reading it made me hungry. I think I will bake some salmon this week. One less dinner to have to figure out. LOL.

Is this a contest prompt? I hope you do well with it, if so.


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Dear Ben Langhinrichs Author IconMail Icon ,

Happy WdC Anniversary.

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

So many ways this lady "covered up" and made herself almost invisible. I "almost" didn't see you - but something little, such as red toe nails - caused you to look again. And the way it turns out, it was a good thing.

My Favorite Part(s)

The different ways a woman can cover up - culturally, and the different layers and types of cover-ups. Very well done.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this done as a prompt, or maybe a contest? Thanks so much for sharing your writing. I hope to check out more in the future.


*PenG* Write On! *PenV*


Sincerely,
AmyJo

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