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for entry "Remember November" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Thankful Prosperous Snow

My First Impression: The title caught my eye...November is a time of giving thanks for our blessings.

My Favorite Part: "Family and friends proclaiming their gratitude" resonated within me.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I also like the way you explained the type of poetry format used. I don't believe I've seen this style before...Thank you for sharing it; I want to give it a go, now *Smile* Well done!

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Hello KingsSideCastle

My First Impression: This is a delightful limerick for Cinderella...your wording makes it seem so effortless...I have a hard time with this style of poetry writing, myself and enjoy other's work so much.

My Favorite Part:"...making a hasty retreat"...so entertaining!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I am reviewing this as part of the I Write challenge, and I'm so very glad to have stumbled upon this work. I guess now I will have to find the rest of these little tidbits...Thank you for sharing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lonewolf

My Thoughts:Found this on one of the lists for November Raid for the PowerReviewers. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity in such a fun way.

My Favorite Part: It's hard to choose which one I like best; maybe because they are all coffee themed. LOL. I think maybe "Essence of Peace" might be #1, though.

My Suggestions:Perhaps an occasional blurb on the newsfeed to let people know that the c-notes are here? I may have found them sooner. I'm happy to know that I have places to go for such cute c-notes.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shadow Prowler

My Thoughts:Hi again! This came up on the list of the PowerReviewer's November Raid.

My Favorite Part:It's hard to decide whether I like the ice cream or the iced coffee better. So hard to choose! These are fun little c-notes - just right for a pick-me-up. I'm glad to have found them.

My Suggestions:perhaps advertising them on occasion in the newsfeed? I may have found them sooner, but other than that, I'm glad they are here and I got to peruse your creativity a bit.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello turtlemoon-dohi

I found your poem in the list for November Raid on the PowerReviewer's port. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:Oh this brings memories to my mind. An old Alan Alda film with the same "yearly" get together. "Same Time, Next Year" is the title of the movie.

My Favorite Part:Asking to "Stay" all the while getting ready to go. Bittersweet and touching.

My Suggestions:What was the inspiration for this poem? I'm glad to have read it, and I look forward to reading more in the future.

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Review of Grandpa's Back!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Joy

I found this in the list of things to review for the November PowerReviewer's Raid.
Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:A sweet poetic ode to a beloved family member. To wake up and find that YOU are the older family member now. Quite the twist. I also like the format: aabb

My Favorite Part:"Eat, drink, laugh, explore!"

My Suggestions:I wonder where you got your inspiration, or if this was a contest entry. A fun and interesting read. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole And Again *Smile*

My Thoughts: Not your usual poetry, but a charming little story...turning out to be a dream. Loved it.

My Favorite Part: The ending caught me by surprise...that it was just a dream. Then "I need coffee". This made me chuckle.

My Suggestions: I just wonder where you get your inspiration at times. Was this an actual dream? LOL. Just keep writing, my friend; as always, thank you for sharing.

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for entry "Cool Beanz" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole Again!

My Thoughts:A cup of coffee shared with a friend over conversation. What a better way to spend part of a day!

My Favorite Part:Latte or espresso? LOL I want a Caramel Ribbon Crunch...

My Suggestions:I always enjoy your poetry, and strive to be able to do this kind of work/encouragement one day. Thank you for sharing your heart, as always.

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for entry "The Poem" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole

My Thoughts:Your poetry always makes me smile.

My Favorite Part:"hope, a place to start/ a nuance, that you seek"

My Suggestions:I have no suggestions, other than to keep up the great work. I see that you wrote this in January. I'm glad it's part of the PowerReviewer's November Raid. I always look forward to your sharing your work. Keep up the great job!

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Review of Coffee 101  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shadow Prowler

I am reviewing this as part of the November Raid for the PowerReviewers. Thank you for sharing this.

My Thoughts:I LOVE Word Searches. They are my favorite puzzle. I am glad that you chose this format to show your love of all things coffee.

My Favorite Part:I was particularly pleased to see Eight O'Clock coffee as one of your choices. I lived in the Slidell, LA area for a few years. This was my father-in-law's favorite coffee. Of course I am partial to Starbucks Caramel Ribbon Crunch...LOL

My Suggestions:I saw nothing of note, but had to solve the puzzle before I gave the review. Brava! I look forward to reading/playing more of your work in the future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Spacecat

I am reviewing this as part of the November Raid for The PowerReviewers group. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:Word searches are my favorite kind of puzzle. It didn't take me too long to go through it, but I enjoyed your choice of words and the hunt for them.

My Favorite Part:All things coffee/Writing.Com. Who could ask for anything more? LOL.

My Suggestions:Thank you for explaining what you wrote it for/your inspiration. I look forward to reading more of your work/checking out your puzzles.


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Review of Coffee Spuddle  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Words Whirling 'Round

My Thoughts: Having had a few of "those kind of days" myself, I can totally relate about the coffee being a type of salvation. LOL.

My Favorite Part:I remember my Dad wanting coffee in the morning, but finding it not brewed, and his fussing about it when I was a little girl. Thank you for the memory trigger.

My Suggestions:I am reviewing this as part of the November Raid with the PowerReviewer group, and I am glad to have found this to read. Love this fun poem...sound just like a Monday Morning...or whichever day is "spuddle". Keep up the great work. I found no mechanical issues in your writing. And thank you for adding the prompt (coincidence it is from Coffee Queen Lilli? I think not).

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AmyJo

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Review of Starbucks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann

My Thoughts:An acrostic for Starbucks! Awesome.

My Favorite Part:While the poetry was indeed fitting and easy reading. I loved the picture at the bottom of your writing. It is very endearing.

My Suggestions:No suggestions other than to keep on writing. I enjoy your work, and look forward to reading more of it in the future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

I am reviewing this as part of the "November Raid" from PowerReviewers.

My Thoughts:I am a fan of coffee, to be sure, but to say you like/need coffee would be an understatement, indeed.

My Favorite Part:"life support in a small brown bean" cracked me up.

My Suggestions:The only suggestion I have is to myself - to read more of your work. Your sense of humor comes through greatly, and this ode to coffee was a fun read. Thank you for sharing. I saw no mechanical issues, nor grammatical issues - to be expected since it was a contest entry. You didn't say if you won, or not.

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Review of The Coalition  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Angelion

My Thoughts:Your description of the story drew me in. I was really curious as to how this was to play out.

My Favorite Part:I like the dream; rather the nightmare...not because I like nightmares, but because your words gave me a very good mental image of the scene. It is sad that Kai's daddy died. I'd be interested in how this story pans out, as well as the backstory of what happened to Kai's pride, and how he ended up in the cheetah coalition.

My Suggestions:I also like how you've given the other Cheetahs voices...even though they are of distrust. It gives them a "human" quality where we distrust those things not familiar or strange to us. I saw no grammatical errors or mechanical issues with your writing. I do wonder if you are going to continue this story on. I would like to read it if you do. Thank you for allowing me to read your writing.

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Dear GerMac ,


Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:I love the picture you paint about a childhood memory. I can see it clearly in my mind's eye.

My Favorite Part(s) being able to smell homemade bread from "12 miles away" and the "lucky" ones getting a whole loaf to take home. These bring up memories for me when my mom used to bake bread when I was a little girl. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Final thoughts: I am glad that I got to delve into your portfolio for this month's anniversary reviews. Thank you for sharing. I hope you will write some more.


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AmyJo

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Dear GerMac ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: I loved the picture of companionship that you portray in this scene. It just feels homey to me.

My Favorite Part(s) The contrast between the piano playing and the bread-making, and yet you bring them together seamlessly.

Suggestions/Questions:I know it has been a while since you've written these, but I was wondering if it is just something about everyday life, or was it a prompt? I hope it was about everyday life...it just feels comforting to me.


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AmyJo

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Review of My Biography  
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Dear GerMac ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: Wow!! You are definitely an achiever! That is a lot of experience, both hands on and work-wise...I'm glad you were able to retire, and still do what you love.

My Favorite Part(s) Your daughter and son being the "real blessings" in your life; and Thanking the Lord for your blessings. Very encouraging.

Final thoughts: I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Happy Anniversary at WdC and many more to come.


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Dear Richard ~ Mending Well!! ,

Hi again...Your handle cracks me up...hopefully it isn't too painful now.

After reading your work, My impressions are these: An interesting story. Horrendous thought of the world without coffee...I'm sure that might be the start of an Apocalypse!

My Favorite Part(s) trombone player with a twinkle in his eye...Your humor radiates, and brought a chuckle to me..."innocent, eh?" LOL

Suggestions/Questions: Congrats on winning with your entry. I loved it. And thank you as well for the cute little trinket...very nice mug, for sure!


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Review of A new beginning  
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Dear Mina~ ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: Thank you for sharing this poem. After the year I've had, I am so very much looking forward to the new year.

My Favorite Part(s) promises appearing "like the rays of the sparkling sun shining" Nice metaphor!

Final thoughts: I appreciate your words. They definitely resonate through me. I am looking forward to the new year, and have enjoyed reading your work.


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Review of Meaning of Life  
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Dear Mina~ ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: I agree with the adage of life being like a train. Once you punch the ticket, you have to go where it takes you. For better or for worse.

My Favorite Part(s) The last stanza; giving thanks to god that we are alive. Well said.

Final thoughts: Thank you for sharing your poetry. I find it enjoyable to read, and found it relatable. Keep up the great work.


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AmyJo

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Review of Winged friends  
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Dear Mina~ ,

Hi again!
After reading your work, My impressions are these: I enjoyed the little story of the love birds. I was horrified when the crow snatched up the one bird. I've heard a little about love birds, and the grief of the female was sad to read about.

My Favorite Part(s) I liked the quote about flying being an "illness" to birds born in a cage.

Suggestions/Questions: I saw no mechanical issues, and was wondering if this was a contest entry, or if it was just an experience. I am glad to have read it. Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Chromism  
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Dear Mina~ ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: A simple little search a word. These are my favorite types of puzzles.

My Favorite Part(s) The title drew me in, as I was curious where it might lead. I was very happy to see a search a word, and solved it, as I was wont to do.

Suggestions/Questions: I was perusing your portfolio, and I hope to see other work soon. I liked the headings of the different folders. Happy Anniversary, as well!


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Hello JCosmos

I am reviewing your poem written for Promptly Poetry Challenge.

My First Impression:I'm thinking you like coffee...LOL. But I do like the history of the coffee shops and how they've evolved (?) into the shops of today.

My Favorite Part: The "disdainful cat frowns" cracked me up. So like a cat!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts: I can picture your writing in my head, and it would be an interesting place to visit one day; at least I think so. Thank you so much for sharing!

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Hello DestinyAwaitsDarling

My First Impression: This sounds about right. Wondering if it mattered to the person that did the damage. More than likely, it did not. Either that, or they were too sick to care or register it.

My Favorite Part: Asking if the sun understood your pain? The pictures you paint with your words are vivid.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Keep writing, and sharing, and encouraging. It is a blessing to see that you are using this as a catharsis. You are appreciated!

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AmyJo *HeartP*

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