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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Penelope Moonbeam

My Thoughts:This is indeed a dark poem. Your words bring vivid imagery to my mind, and I want to huddle up and hide when reading this. It is scary. I was looking for some sort of hope in this writing, and it wasn't to be. "Clearly I can/Endure no more" is a very hopeless feeling. I am hoping that this was a writing prompt and not mirroring real life for you. *Pray*

My Favorite Part:I like the way you used the acrostic to make your poem. I like the way you used the color red to highlight the words of your title. Your acrostic was very smooth to read.

My Suggestions:The only thing I saw, and it wasn't that big a deal. On the word silence, the line that starts "I hear" you forgot to put a space there. Like I said, it didn't really detract from the poem, it's just something I noticed.

Keep up the great work! Love reading your work *BigSmile*

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Marvelous Friend ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:Wow...some people would think you've gone from preaching to meddling! LOL...I'm sure they thought the same of Haggai.

My Favorite Part(s)This poem is filled with common sense, as well a biblical values..."you take out loans, max out credit cards...consider your ways". That is just plain common sense...Don't do it *Headbang* LOL.

Suggestions/Questions:May I ask how long you've been a Christian? I'm loving the work I'm reading in your portfolio. I hope you don't mind if I become a troll...LOL Keep up the great work!


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Review of Love Is Strong  
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Dear Marvelous Friend ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: I cannot but feel the love you have for him. This poem reads fast, but it is an exciting event. It brought a smile to my face reading it.

My Favorite Part(s)"The possibilities are endless/My love for him I must confess" I really liked the hopefulness and optimism that your words convey. I also like how you did a footnote section. I need to learn how to do that. I also need to learn how to do the actual images for the contests that I enter. Well Done!

Final Thoughts: Thank you for sharing your work. I'm glad to have gotten into your portfolio. I also want to thank you for the Challenge prompts for Take Up Your Cross.


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Dear Spring in my Sox ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:This is such an interesting poetry form. Though from different poems, it still made sense and worked well.

My Favorite Part(s)That you described the prompt and gave a definition of the poetry style. I like learning new styles of poetry, and would love to figure one out for this form. I also liked that you listed the poems that you got your lines from.

Suggestions/Questions:I see you got an honorable mention for this poem. Great job. Keep up the great work!


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Review of The Storm  
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Dear Spring in my Sox ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:I like the way you followed the prompt. I also like how you used a footnote, to hide the prompt. I need to learn how to do that, so as to make my writing a little less cluttered.

My Favorite Part(s)I like that the one verse has each line end in the same rhyme. It made it a fun read, and the flow was great. I also like the lack of punctuation; you knew that each line was it's own stopping space.

Suggestions/Questions:I like poetry centered, but that is just me. Perhaps a little larger font to help out my old tired eyes? Other than that, well done! It's simple, but yet such a reminder to be hiding when these storms come tearing through.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: Wowzers! This is quite the tribute portal. It is wonderful that you help keep the memories of the writers who are no longer with us. It is an honor to look at the different things they are remembered for.

My Favorite Part(s) That it is tastefully done, and beautiful. The doves and the books just make it perfect.

Final thoughts/Questions:Such a blessing. I am amazed and a little overwhelmed at how big Writing.com is. I am so glad that I found this site, and want to help keep it a great site and community to be part of.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Dear iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen ,

I just wanted to wish you a Happy Anniversary! 17 years on WdC is quite the accomplishment *HeartP*

After reading your work, My impressions are these:You have created a wonderful "Angels" activity for Writing.Com. I have been blessed to be a part of your group, and looking through everything, it must have been a daunting, but rewarding task.

My Favorite Part(s) How you said that this group isn't just about reviews, but that acts of kindness, and encouragement are essential as well. I think this is the main reason that I joined the Angel Army. I love it here!

Suggestions/Questions:No suggestions, here...it's quite the undertaking. How long did it take you to set this up? I imagine it is still growing and evolving as time goes by. Well done!!


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Review of The Poet's Place  
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DearDave ,

After looking at your collection of pictures, My impressions are these:This is an eclectic array of pictures. I liked how you displayed your awards and other images. The ruby throated hummingbirds was sad, as I saw a helicopter in the background.

My Favorite Part(s) I especially loved your cat. He did like the high ground, didn't he? LOL

Suggestions/Questions: I love your picture of "The Poet's Place". Wasn't that (or isn't that) a poetry forum? The library of books just looks so welcoming. Happy Anniversary, and I'm glad I got to peek inside your portfolio.

Merry Christmas/ Happy New Year coming up *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*


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Review of My Brother Joe  
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Dear Dave ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these: This is a very sad, and heartfelt poem. This war was so controversial, and at times, seemed so meaningless with the number of casualties that occurred. My heart goes out to you, even though it has been quite some time.

My Favorite Part(s) I could see your writing in my mind; from answering the call to the cocky young man fresh out of bootcamp; then the notification and meeting the plane on his "final ride". It just is so much.

Suggestions/Final thoughts:Thank you for sharing the style of poem that you used to express this intimate part of your life. I love learning new poetry styles, and this is one that is new to me.


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Review of CLOUDS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Penelope Moonbeam Long time, no see (at least on my part *FacePalm* )

My Thoughts:I, too, have wondered at the clouds and their formations, going about their cycles and everchanging moods.

My Favorite Part:That you don't think you'll know how they get where they are or where they are going. It's just one of the fun things that God has made for our enjoyment/amusement, I guess. I also like how you call them homes for "little angels". So very sweet.

My Suggestions:I love that you made the font larger and emboldened it for ease of reading. I am a sucker for centered poems, but this looks ok, too *Smile* I also like how you catch the various "moods" of the clouds, whether whimsical, or dark and foreboding. It is a wonderous sight to just "cloud gaze".

I saw no mechanical/grammatical issues with your writing. I encourage you to keep up the great work that you are doing, and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello DestinyAwaitsDarling

My Thoughts:Wow...I'm floored by this poem. I don't think I've felt like this...even having moved more than a dozen times in my life.

My Favorite Part:That you own your discomfort. You don't try to blame anyone else, or the "Fates" or "God" or anything else. Your words paint a vivid picture in my mind, of the disconnect, the feeling of not belonging somewhere, when you should feel safest at home. I cannot even imagine the pain and hurt you are feeling.

My Suggestions: I wish I could just scoop you up in a protective hug and make everything better in your world; I know it sounds crazy. But I hurt for you, and am praying for you.

I saw no mechanical or grammatical issues in your writing, just a raw, exposed nerve. Keep sharing your journey, and know that you are appreciated. I wish you well, my friend.

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Review of Feathers  
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

My First Impression:Wow...this is a hard thing. When I first reviewed your other poem Band of Gold, I was thinking that it was divorce that was being described; I had no idea it was death. I am so very sorry.

My Favorite Part:I must be hope; I cannot be truth. This line has undone me. I can picture the fear and the anger that she must have faced, just as a bird will pull out its own feathers because of illness/fear. Your words paint a vivid picture in my mind.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:You have written an evocative poem. My heartfelt condolences, even though some time has passed. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Thank you for sharing, and for responding to my first review.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Quiltingmama

My Thoughts:I liked the description of the prompt that you gave. I found your writing on the Read and Review portal.

My Favorite Part: Lilly asking if Old Lady Blue was a witch. I chuckled as I read that, and it sounds just like a little girl's question. I also like how "Mrs. Bean" shared her secret with Lily, and the amazement in Lily's voice. I could picture the scenes in my mind's eye. The story stands alone as is, but I always want more.

My Suggestions:I wonder if you would ever consider making this a longer story? I loved how I was drawn in, and then it stopped...*Sad*
I also think a little larger font for ease of reading might help...I know it would help me and my tired old eyes. LOL. Other than that, I saw no mechanical issues or grammatical errors. A well done story. How did you do with the contest?

Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Naomi

My First Impression: The title caught my eye. I found your recipe on the Read and Review portal

My Favorite Part:I love recipes, and I would very much like to add this to my collection. I certainly want to try it! *Hungry* Have you tried this recipe?

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I see this is new, and I hope to see more of your work, whether it be stories, poetry or recipes. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

My First Impression:A very introspective piece. I love reading your poetry.

My Favorite Part:I like how you describe yourself as an "introvert who wants to be an extrovert", but only sometimes.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Keep doing what you are doing, and keep being the blessing that you are. I appreciate your love for God, and wanting to be at peace in Him.

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for entry "Remember November" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

My First Impression: The title caught my eye...November is a time of giving thanks for our blessings.

My Favorite Part: "Family and friends proclaiming their gratitude" resonated within me.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I also like the way you explained the type of poetry format used. I don't believe I've seen this style before...Thank you for sharing it; I want to give it a go, now *Smile* Well done!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello KingsSideCastle

My First Impression: This is a delightful limerick for Cinderella...your wording makes it seem so effortless...I have a hard time with this style of poetry writing, myself and enjoy other's work so much.

My Favorite Part:"...making a hasty retreat"...so entertaining!

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I am reviewing this as part of the I Write challenge, and I'm so very glad to have stumbled upon this work. I guess now I will have to find the rest of these little tidbits...Thank you for sharing!

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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

My First Impression:An encouraging note. Although there are times that it is easier said than done.

My Favorite Part: "You can trust God...His supply will be greater also".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder that we need only place our faith in our God. I appreciate your heart in your writing about your faith.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lonewolf

My Thoughts:Found this on one of the lists for November Raid for the PowerReviewers. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity in such a fun way.

My Favorite Part: It's hard to choose which one I like best; maybe because they are all coffee themed. LOL. I think maybe "Essence of Peace" might be #1, though.

My Suggestions:Perhaps an occasional blurb on the newsfeed to let people know that the c-notes are here? I may have found them sooner. I'm happy to know that I have places to go for such cute c-notes.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello turtlemoon-dohi

I found your poem in the list for November Raid on the PowerReviewer's port. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:Oh this brings memories to my mind. An old Alan Alda film with the same "yearly" get together. "Same Time, Next Year" is the title of the movie.

My Favorite Part:Asking to "Stay" all the while getting ready to go. Bittersweet and touching.

My Suggestions:What was the inspiration for this poem? I'm glad to have read it, and I look forward to reading more in the future.

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Review of Grandpa's Back!  
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Hello Joy

I found this in the list of things to review for the November PowerReviewer's Raid.
Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:A sweet poetic ode to a beloved family member. To wake up and find that YOU are the older family member now. Quite the twist. I also like the format: aabb

My Favorite Part:"Eat, drink, laugh, explore!"

My Suggestions:I wonder where you got your inspiration, or if this was a contest entry. A fun and interesting read. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole And Again *Smile*

My Thoughts: Not your usual poetry, but a charming little story...turning out to be a dream. Loved it.

My Favorite Part: The ending caught me by surprise...that it was just a dream. Then "I need coffee". This made me chuckle.

My Suggestions: I just wonder where you get your inspiration at times. Was this an actual dream? LOL. Just keep writing, my friend; as always, thank you for sharing.

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for entry "Cool Beanz" 
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Hello Jay O'Toole Again!

My Thoughts:A cup of coffee shared with a friend over conversation. What a better way to spend part of a day!

My Favorite Part:Latte or espresso? LOL I want a Caramel Ribbon Crunch...

My Suggestions:I always enjoy your poetry, and strive to be able to do this kind of work/encouragement one day. Thank you for sharing your heart, as always.

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for entry "The Poem" 
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Hello Jay O'Toole

My Thoughts:Your poetry always makes me smile.

My Favorite Part:"hope, a place to start/ a nuance, that you seek"

My Suggestions:I have no suggestions, other than to keep up the great work. I see that you wrote this in January. I'm glad it's part of the PowerReviewer's November Raid. I always look forward to your sharing your work. Keep up the great job!

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Hello Spacecat

I am reviewing this as part of the November Raid for The PowerReviewers group. Thank you for sharing your work.

My Thoughts:Word searches are my favorite kind of puzzle. It didn't take me too long to go through it, but I enjoyed your choice of words and the hunt for them.

My Favorite Part:All things coffee/Writing.Com. Who could ask for anything more? LOL.

My Suggestions:Thank you for explaining what you wrote it for/your inspiration. I look forward to reading more of your work/checking out your puzzles.


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