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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a great poem.It needs some rhythem, but it is good. This poem reminds me of spring. I love spring. Spring is beautiful. It has flowers, rain, lighting, and happiness, like in your poem. You should make some more, but with more detail. Keep working on it. You will be great.
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