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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
"To drift off into dreams
And gentle slumber deep"

I find these lines to be so peaceful. I can just picture myself in bed, comfortably, and drifting off.

"Snuggle under the covers"

This give off a nice warm feeling. I can imagine those cold winter nights and getting under the warm covers. It is a great feeling to remember.

"Many stories told"

Excellent way of describing dreams. They really are like stories.

This was an enjoyable poem to read.


Last I just want to note that I find it interesting that I discovered this poem, because I also did this prompt for the same contest almost a year ago. And it is nice to see a different take on the prompt. Mine is no longer in my portfolio on this site. But it is post on another site. Here is the link in case you are interested: https://allpoetry.com/poem/14668135-I-Just-Want-to...


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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an outstanding poem. Everyone should read this and learn for it. Keep up the great work.
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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a lovely poem and the imagery is fantastic. You did a great job at personifying wind. You made it seem like it was a real living thing. Outstanding poem.
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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great poem. You should write more poems. I think I might have to try this some time. Thank you for sharing this poem and interesting concept.
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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
Even though this is a children's story, I enjoyed reading this. It was very heartwarming. I hope you continue this some time in the future.
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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poem. I can relate to a lot of things you said, involving my OCD.
And it is good to see you are trying to use writing as a way to help heal. I have been doing that too, and it does help. Writing is great for expressing thoughts and feelings. Keep it up and good luck in the future.


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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt warm when I read this. A great poem that is short and simple, so well done.


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Review of Future generation  
Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great poem, and I think what is great about this is it can apply to any graduation class, for both H.S. and College. It also made me feel a little old, since I was H.S. freshmen in 2000. Nonetheless, very well written. Wish the best of luck to you and all of your generation.


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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
So good, now I want one. I like how well written this is, the way you describe making a sundae. This is a great poem.


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Review of Dreaming  
Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.5)
I got a nice peaceful feeling reading this, and truly enjoyed it. The imagery was well done too.


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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for this how to guide. Many times, in the past, when I tried to make a PB&J I would fail and make a grilled cheese or a tuna fish sandwich by mistake. This has helped me out a lot. Now I can finally make a PB&J.


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Review of For her.  
Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great sad poem. I can feel the pain, I have been in this situation more times than I wanted. You wrote something so nice that I am sure it can speak to others too. Such a good job. Keep up the nice work. Hope you write more in the future for this site. I have joined over a month ago, and only regret not finding out about this site years ago.


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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good. And I will admit I can relate to this, at least to some degree.
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Review by AJW
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this and the humor was done nicely. I laughed at times because I thought how this is me sometimes.
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Review of Banana Split  
Review by AJW
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this a lot. Also, never heard of this kind of poem style before. I do like food and might even try to write one of these poems sometime.
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