What a beautifully dark poem. I love the repetition of the "To Feel Alone" line. Any reason you used an ellipsis on the first and a comma on the next? I love the pause that the ellipsis gave me before I delved into your work. I also loved the personification of "the dark wrapping its arms;" it made me feel a bit suffocated before the chill of an embrace. Great job Roxxie.
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