Good Evening,
This is a Love Poetry that is well written and nicely presented too.
Interesting Experience being expressed through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art that is so full of mixed emotions as in Breathlessly Liking somebody's presence.
Hmm Splendid !
Thank You for sharing
" Summer Nights "
Write on.
Good Evening,
Graduated with Honors.. WOW !
Congratulations !
I am so happy for You.
Here's a word Search that commemorates this very special occasion of your life.
Yes...A New beginning soon for College Education
Good Luck and God 🙏 Bless..
Interesting words that completed this Word Search.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Beautiful tribute to mother's in this Awesome Community.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written all the way with wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
I wish to say " Thank You" from my heart as I am a Mother to an only child.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Hiccups..yes.this happens and for me I experience this when I am eating spicy foods even if I am not eating it and it's nearby being sliced or served like this hot peppers and some dusty or powdery items.
I wish I have no allergies to these food because they add appetite just by looking at it.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
I have written things that I wish to change or actually happen to the whole world today and for always.
Thank You for the opportunity for me to share my views on this very important topic or matter.
And may my two wishes come true that answer this question;
" What Would You Change ?"
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Evening,
Wonderful poetry that speaks of one of the Seasons, Autumn..
Nice picture that adds more meaning into this special work of art.
A poem so full of life and much movements like the falling leaves all around.
Wise and nice lines all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Good Afternoon,
Oh... WOW!
I was expecting a horror story.
Hahaha I love to visit this
" Crooked House " myself and enjoy the taste of this magical chocolate and I promise to stay quiet
Haha haha
Brilliant and unique idea of a short story.
Amazing.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha This is truthful, amusing and nice as it speaks of life's choice and it's result.
Well .not bad at all..as surely you have a nice time altogether with parties there and parties here and a wife of a General...
I enjoy reading this well written short story in 300 words.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A message to someone in your life that serves as a reason of what you are experiencing now.
A sad encounter that leaves something unforgettable.
All the feelings are being expressed through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poem that says " Hello , You are in my thoughts today " and such thoughts are positive for a better you and for a better tomorrow for you and me nicely written and nicely presented through a well written free verse poetry.
Sentimental with full of hope.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Welcome to Writing . Com and Have a wonderful stay.
I enjoy reading
" Writing And Me " a Biographical Essay written from the heart. Written with all honesty and truthfulness.
Surely , you will enjoy it here as there are writers of different genre and most of all kind author's all around that makes my stay worthwhile and meaningful.
I learned a lot from here as far as my writing is concerned and I believe I still need a lot to learn and the need to navigate around must be done to get more useful and helpful information about writing.
Also, there are truly lots of writings to read that I feel like I am in the biggest library in the world that makes my stay Awesome.
The last line makes me say :
Keep writing and keep.posting.
God Bless 🙏 You Always.
Good day from the Philippines...
Good Morning,
Oh...A hard lesson indeed. Yes.. I agree with the given title of this well written and nicely presented short story.
Instead of gaining something, the loss is truly enormous and a sad result.
Well... Life lesson indeed !
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting and makes me wonder why "Make Me
Your Enemy "
Reading between the lines that say it all makes me sad as it's not easy to live in this world with an enemy ..
The written lines fit for the given title.
This is well written and with the presentation that is exclusively yours proving your unique and wonderful talent.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
So, Anna was right in telling Andrea " they disappeared"
Confusing on why Anna insisted but as I continued reading between the lines...then it's because they are aliens.
An interesting and intriguing
" Everyone Groaned"
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Reading this story makes me believe that your Mom was a very courageous woman and with a great Faith and love in her heart.
The part of the story where there were singing before her last breath touched my innermost soul as I did the singing to Mama an hour before she died last May 15 last month
I sang to her the songs she taught us when we were kids. When I sang Tantum Ergo my sister sitting at the back sang with me, then our youngest brother sang with tears freely flowing from his eyes while Mama was smiling as she listened then died.
Your story is truly full of meaning.
I am so glad to have read this.
" A Message From Mom "
I cry writing this Review as I miss Mama with all my heart and soul.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
An Alien story and this one is not scary so surely the kids love this.
Captivating title
" The Sun Was Shining "
The picture adds more meaning into this special work of art.
The rain , the clouds, the sun and the children playing.
Something wonderful to read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The story of Little Boris written through poetic words and lines from the poet's heart and mind.
Interesting personality that eventually become a Spy...
This sounds like a very interesting movie.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
An unpleasant relationship yesterday and now in harmony.
As in truly a great news.
A free verse poetry that is Biographical and written with all honesty and sincerity.
No pretentions..
The last line are wonderful lines that is like a sunshine that brightens your day.
Admirable
" At The Beginning Of My Life "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Great question for working people.
I answered I love it.
Though I am now retired from the Corporate World I have to say each job was well worth it all because I love doing it and for me that matters most.
I enjoy this Poll that is truly interesting.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Afternoon,
I belong to a family who loves to cook except me but I collect recipes if their cooking that I love most. So I answered Family.
I have some recipes posted in my Port . Actually our late Mama was the best cook in the world when she was alive. When I miss her cooking I visit my Sister who owns a Restaurant that serves an international cuisine and right then and there she serves me one or more of Mamas cooking that she masters.
Interesting Poll that reminds me of so many memories.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
I love books and more books and love reading them and collecting them.
I answered I love all books and I have some at home that crowded the space of our veranda, our sala , our kitchen, our rooms and right now there are more coming as my birthday is coming and people close to my heart usually greet.with book or more books as my gift.
Maybe I was a Librarian in my previous life. Thank You for sharing this and for the opportunity for me to answer this.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Afternoon,
Ahhh..all because of that unforgettable ticket.
Hahaha
Love finds a way.
Amusing, fascinating and a unique love story indeed.
I enjoyed reading this wonderful short story that gives an amazing result.
Brilliant writer.
Thank You for sharing
" How It Worked "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Oh..Those criminals you meet and good that Jane was clever enough not to buy that stolen stuff.
Yes...in this world one has to be very careful especially to those who sweet talk even if it's the first time you meet them, not all of course..but better play safe.
There is a great lesson in this short story.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The title is a question that is being addressed to the whole world..." Did You Know That "
Reading the given questions makes realized that such questions are pertinent and need pertinent answers too.
In my own point of you I think it is but normal that the old people like the grandparents of the paternal side does not look like you or vice versa.. possibly because you may get more genes from the side of your mother.
And yes..this happens..
That is why I love watching Paternity Court in You Tube because Judge Lauren can really explain this clearly.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very meaningful short story with a BIG lesson to share.
I Salute Suzanne and James for their initiative of bringing their children to see the realities of life and look for themselves that there are so many families or children who needs help and giving something from their hearts truly counts.
Beautiful Christmas story about giving
Highly impressive as in truly admirable.
A great read.
Write on.
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