Good Evening,
A poetry full of joy as in
"Joy to the world" and the song goes on.
A poem celebrating Christmas the old fashion way.
The poem has a good flow and it expresses so much happiness being shared by the family.
"And happy times for all"
Indeed !
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A short story worth to be read by all. Very blessed that both of you were safe when it happened.
It was shocking and terrifying. So many sad stories were told, so many hearts were broken, so many shed tears, so much grief and prayers were also said.
9/11 left a big mark of loss.
This is a short story that expresses love and great concern to each member of the family checking their whereabouts when it happened. Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
A beautiful , loving feeling shared together during Autumn is being expressed in this nicely written " Autumn whispers"
The poetry has a good flow and with a very nice rhythm and rhyme.
A work of art that is joyful to read.
Fascinating too.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
A wonderfully written story.
Ellen, the postman, the blackbird, the jacket, Arthur.
The very important characters in this very touching story full of love and sweet memories.
The story has a good flow and vividly described the encounters of Ellen and the chirping blackbird.
Touching too.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
The message in this poetry to the dearest daughters is Great. How blessed are these daughters to have you.
The poetry has a nice rhythm and rhyme and with a good flow.
The presentation is wonderful.
I admire the lines all the way through.
A highly impressive work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
A very beautiful poetry so full of love. So full of loving thoughts. A poetry from the deepest heart and soul.
The message is clear that it penetrates to my greatest understanding how great is the love of a mother to her child. A love that flows forever.
Thank You for the very nice read.
Good Evening,
I can picture the dining table filled with delicious food and the whole family gather around enjoying especially the grandchildren. Truly a great blessing.
Thank You Lord for grandmothers.
I love this writing all the way. It is full of loving care.
Truly a Home Sweet Home with " Grandma's Stove".
Thank You for the wonderful read.
Good Evening,
A very attractive "Lights in the Night Sky". Truly a lovely sight. One of the wonderful creations of the
Most High. It is the clear message of this beautiful poetry with a good flow.
Reading between the lines give me sure delight.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
The quality of life is in harmony when you meet and inter-act with others who are also willing to reach out in a nice and pleasant way.
" Nature's gratifying
words
Breathe heartfelt
longing
Into brief lingering
moments"
My favorite wonderful lines in this poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Nice . Truly Nice with the most sincere thoughts. I love the given title and I agree with everything that you wish to convey all because I am a firm believer of this two words
"Thank You".
Yes..A grateful heart is a winning heart .
Thank You for sharing and for a very meaningful read.
Good Evening,
A song. A story.
I admire Christine's strong determination to spread and to share her song that she learned from her parents. Sad to note that not all people appreciated it and some are so cruel in treating her.
I wonder what the title and the lyrics are but I believe it is a beautiful song with a nice tune.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
An inspiring piece about
"Truth". Yes..truth is truth.
I am a firm believer of this word : Truth
It makes me one with the wonderful world.
Very true : "Truth is Awesome" all the way through.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Written for a contest and being awarded as Finalist
Congratulations!
Reading between the lines I may say :
The mind and the heart speak.
A perfect combination as it is in a harmonious way of expressing yourself through writing.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
Well-said as in Well-written about a very precious, valuable, important subject matter:
TIME
Time once lost can never ever be regained so we must all use it Wisely.
This is how I understand ypur writing as I agree that Time is one of the best gifts from the Most High.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
I love both: Reading and Reviewing as much as I love to write too.
You are sharing a very wise idea about reviewing and I appreciate each word/ line that completed this.
For me, giving a review adds more meaning into my reading wherein I can honestly say in a nice way what I was reading about. I made suggestions but still it is up to the writer to follow or not as it is with the writer's descretion to make an improvement of his or her work or to just remain the writings as it is.
Writing, Reading, Reviewing makes this Writing.Com. a very awesome community where one has a way of reaching out to authors all around in a nice and respectful way and I am most grateful to be a part of it.
GOD Bless Us All
Good Afternoon,
Very precious and most practical advice that you are giving here and I appreciate and admire them a lot.
" Bring a little notebook .. . " that is truly brilliant. You tips surely works for me and I believe for all the authors worldwide ...In other words : I agree with You.
Great mind !
Thank You very much !
Good Afternoon,
The positive answer. The heart and the head said:
"Yes". Affirmative.
I admire the creativeness.
Very true, :
" Our organization of
knowledge
A cognitive expression".
Very well said.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
I wish I could buy some of her pies....hahaha...
Surely they are very delicious. I am not into baking. It is my husband and my daughter who are the chef and the bakers at home. I only wash the dishes because they deslike doing it. Their apple pie is super yummy as well as the buko or coconut pie is my favorite. I never tasted a Lemon Pie..
Very nice story about "Mama's Pies" and the wedding reception having the lemon pie is something uniquely nice.
Hmmm a slice please...
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
Whew ! I was holding my breath as I read this suspense thriller with a twist.
Hmm brilliant writer.
Very convincing.
A happy ending.
What a relief !
Hahaha
A short story that is highly impressive.
Very convincing.
Thank You for sharing "Fear".
Good Morning,
A poetry with a philosophical message. It is about the relationship of two people.
It could be the end of their existence or it could be the end of their love story.
The words " fondling each other" it could be the last time they are together.
Oh..If only...there is no ending...
A very Intriguing work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A grateful heart that appreciates The Most High sending Angels.
Yes...I believe in Angels in our midst and I thank God for sending them especially at the time that I needed them most.
The poem has a good flow and beautiful in every way.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
Truly an emotional piece .
Well, life is not a problem to be solved but a reality to be experienced. Life is what you make it, always has been always will be.Cry if you want to, tears flowing can heal the aching soul.Choose to live with joy. Happiness is your birthright.
Smile...Braveheart and Write On...
GOD BLESS..
Good Evening ,
Wonderful writing with a good flow.
I can vividly picture the room, the window, the cat and all the nice things that surround you including the radio.
A nice atmosphere for a writer.
Highly impressive lines that completed " My Vision"
Enjoy the journey.
Thank You for the great read.
Good Evening,
A love song....The sentimental lyrics of a love song. I wonder what the tune would be.
The story behind the song does not have a happy ending...like a crying heart.
A ballad...it can be..
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing
" there was a fault".
Good Evening,
A precious topic to write and to share. A vintage or an antique item and it gives so many memories as the years passed by.
I can relate with the story as my husband is keeping a lot of things other people called junks but for him it is his great treasure. He built a special room for them and I understand his sentiments on how he values them and I wholeheartedly supports and respects him in his interests on them.
This may be Junk or Priceless but in the heart and soul of the owner this is more valuable than gold or diamond.
Surely the next generation of your family will treasure it as a keepsake that lasts forever.
Thank You for sharing.
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