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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
An adventure that did not work out.
A special time spent together with Kitty Cat.
A poem so full of life as in lively and lovely.
Well.. Kitty Cat
Better luck next time..
Yes there is always a next time.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
This is very touching.
A poem that expresses your great love and honor to your dearest mother as you keep all the memories in your heart.
" I love you mother, now and forever"
My favorite line in this nicely written and nicely presented work of art .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Out To The Future  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry by that gives importance of the future based on the very interesting title
Out To The Future
Yes..there is tomorrow for those who willingly and bravely wait.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Review of Time  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Better change the battery as soon as possible.
Hahaha
Time..the precious time. Once lost can never be regained.
The value of time in our lives must be given importance hy everyone.
Tick tock tick tock
Cannot tell the time
Unless battey is replaced.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Pollution  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Cromorna Form of poetry.
Thank You for the special Note below the poem that makes me understand more of this nicely written work of art.
A very interesting title
Pollution
It truly needs an urgeht solution.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Easy  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Nice title of an Essay..
Easy..
It gives importance to little things which means a lot.
The sense of appreciation that makes existence harmonious.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire each line that completed this.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Truly a wonderful time.
A great bonding at winter as well as
Christmas too.
Great reason to celebrate.
The poem is lively and lovely.
It expresses a happy season.
Delicious food and drinks to enjoy.
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Great topic that you are sharing and it is a very important one.
Four Principles of A Lasting Relationship
You explained it with clearness and clarity .
The Essay is well written and nicely presented in direct to the point that makes your readers easily understand.
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
This is fascinating.
Nicely written in details and is well presented too.
The fact is I have never seen a Snow in my whole life and reading between the lines makes me so well informed about this magical nature in your country.
I am happy for you to have such wonderful and great exoeriences about Snow.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of The Visitor  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
It is not a sad life after all for Emily.
Thanks to the kindness of people Emily was able to smile again because of
The Visitor
Very touching too
I hope all will be well and be Emily will be reunited with her Angie.
A story with hope and love.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of A Chance  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Very convincing
A Chance
Well..in life.. there is always a second chance it depends also on how grave is the offense.
Regarding this matter., Ruby has to weight things property before a decision for another chance is given.
Thank you for sharing.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The picture of the shining Sun adds more meaning into this work of art.
Interesting and Captivating title
Born Again Under The Rising Sun
A free verse poetry that expresses the deepest faith of this very precious time.
The poem has a good flow and the rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
An inspiring Read
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Interesting and Captivating title of a Free verse poetry.
The Key To The Door Is Faith
Nice and wise title
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
Truly precious thoughts that speaks of an the subject matter.
Thank You for the Great read.
Write on.
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Review of Prayers  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A nice and very special title of a poem...
Prayers
It is well written and nicely presented.
The last two lines are my favorite lines.
" My happy prayer goes up to Him
Who makes the violets grow."
Perfect conclusion that is highly admirable.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
WOW..
Awesome free verse poetry. It makes me hungry too as I love the food being written here.
Lovely and lively.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
The lines are admirable all the way with wonderful rhtyhm and rhyme.
Precious as it is.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review of Reading Speed  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A spjendid poetic way in describing your own reading speed .
Yes.. Reading speed and comprehension goes along with clarity and understanding of the items being read..
I love to read but my speed declines when my eyes are tired.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Read on.
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Review of Time at 17  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
An interesting title of a poem
Time at 17
The story behind the poetry is about a person, his family and his death.
Intriguing lines that completed this work of art
Chronos, the main character of this poem may be a very important person
in his time.
Thank You for sharing
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Review of Amnesia  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very sad situation when you love someone but this someone does not show love in return that you wish to have an Amnesia...
This is well written as in the heart speaks.
Well.. You have so much love to give and you deserve someone who loves you in return.
Much better to have an Amnesia to forget this person so you can love somebody else that you truly deserve.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very captivating title of a free verse poetry
The Tea That Cures Me
This is a deeply emotional piece especially this line,

But then I walk into the room where I share a bed with someone who doesn't love me...
A very heartbreaking line that makes this poem so sad
The last line expresses Hope.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Kiya's Lunch  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Reading between the lines makes me hungry and thirsty as well.
Sandwich plus lemonade...oh perfect combination.
I wish to have it too.
Haha haha
This is well written and nicely presented as well as very inviting too.
Great short story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of The Place of GOD!  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that gives importance to The Most High and with a very interesting title
The Place Of GOD
Admirable lines that completed this work of art.
In answer to the question that serves as a conclusion:
God is. in my. Heart.
Write on.
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Review of Stick  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Happy
Anniversary...
A very unique promot and you did write so well about it
The title is captivating
Stick...
As in through thick and thin.
Ten Years of togetherness is being summed up in a well written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very unique movement for a good cause. Interesting and Captivating title
Hammock Haters Unite
Surely a sad experience triggers this very special movement as to stop any bad results in the future .

Choose the loungue chair.
Yes, I agree
Write on.
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Review of Daylight Ride  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very meaningful free verse poetry about Nature.. the sun in particular
.
It speaks of the present situation that is weakening.

The next lines expresses Hope for a better, brighter tomorrow.
That is truly a wonderful twist of the story behind the poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The Daily Pen
Great Title of such wonderful personal collection of a very precious form of art through your own writings from BB the heart.
The great poet and writer that you are can touch any precious topic under the heat of the sun.
Brilliant.. as in
Nice and wise.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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