Good Afternoon,
Easter Sunday is being celebrated worldwide. As a teenager, when our parents were still alive, we did make wonderful preparations for this day along with my six siblings.
Going to Church the a family breakfast and lunch with delicious meals.
I miss those days yet the memories I always treasure in my heart.
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Good Afternoon,
It seems like a bad dream or a nightmare happened reading this scary experience being expressed through poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
The given title alone is terrifying.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Morning,
A natural talent that is the clear description of the given title of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry " Eye Of A Poet "
Yes..and poetic words flow freely and accurately as well as colorfully as it is.
A great observation and a wise description.
A great read.
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Good Afternoon,
Sad to note when one listen to the story but not listening to your side. It hurts and it keeps the distance going on and on as in everything is in darkness not seeing the.light..
This is the sad message of this well written " Why Don't We Talk Anymore "
A very frustrating and disappointing situation is the sad story behind this work of art.
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Good Morning,
A poem that speaks of physical changes as time goes by.
The situation or the condition of yesterday is truly different from today.
I can relate as I experience so many changes too.
As in that's life.
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" Flexibility "
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Good Morning,
A poem that speaks of the deepest faith and the heart speaks.
A poem proving that the Son of God, the Lord Jesus Christ is the King of Kings.
This is well written and nicely presented and with a good flow.
It is another free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
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Good Morning,
That's black magic and it's a terrible experience to be cast into it.
Well...charge it to experience.
Interesting as well as intriguing short story and captivating title
" The Master "
Well.. the lesson is :
Do not ever play with magic.
It's dangerous.
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Good Morning,.
This is a very sentimental story.
The excitement of Andrea may have caused her heart attack !?
I feel sad for both of them for.not having this.most awaited Reunion to happen after not seeing each other for a long period of time.
A very fruitless " Waiting "
Very Sad
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Good Morning,
Experiencing dry season is a terrible one. The plants withered, the arid land, the never-ending humidity that makes us catching our breath makex us pray for Rain to gently falls to.make the air cooler as we welcome the breeze that caresses our cheeks.
This work of art speaks of what is happening with the world.
A sad reality.
The last part is a wonderful twist and turn.
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" Water Is Life "
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Good Morning,
A short story about a wolf named Bo, his wife Cara and their offspring.
A life that having encountered with humans made them decide to move to the mountains.
A " Change " for the better.
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Good Morning,
Diarrhea is a terrible sickness that gives a very uncomfortable experience that truly ruins or can result to :
" Disastrous Vacation "
My suggestion in this writing ;
" im freaking"
" im a girl "
" im not saying "
Please change this to :
I'm freaking
I'm a girl
I'm not saying
Also always put an apostrophe in the word don't..
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Good Morning,
Written for a Prompt.
A realized dream
I am happy for you.
Congratulations for being a Published Author.
You are greatly Blessed.
A wonderful work of art that shares a great accomplishment and joy.
Truly a great read.
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Good Morning,
Hahaha
This is well written and nicely presented and written with all truthfulness and candidness
Yes...this is a great observation that those who religiously visit the gym and do the daily routine of exercises will eventually look physically fit.
Enjoy..
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Good Morning,
This is sad when you cannot voice out what is in your mind. Now is the right time for you to speaks up
You are stronger than you think.
Keep believing in yourself.
This is a sad reflection when you deny yourself to be heard.
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Good Morning,
The unforgettable happening that lingers always in the mind
" The Jet "
This is nicely written and nicely presented.
Descriptive of what was going on in that particular day .
A poem so full of life and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
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Good Morning,
The given title is captivating and intriguing as How Can A War Be Sweet..."A Sweet War
: Aim And Tame "
Another well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
It is well written and nicely presented and the rhythm and rhyme is nice.
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Good Morning,
Reagan and Brandon, two important characters in this well written and nicely presented short story.
Sad to note that the past keeps haunting them and this time Brandon made a clear conclusion of what happened.
Yes..I agree with the given title
"The Choice "
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Good Morning,
Written for a prompt and you did write it accordingly.
The life of short people and the encounter with the big ones.
Still the same the short people loves to eat too.
Amusing story as in like in the Alien world.
I admire the creativeness.
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Good Morning,
The questioning heart and soul is the message of this Free Verse poetry with a good flow.
A personal question about life that also gives a very interesting title of this work of art :
" My Query"
Possibly you are not alone in this
Plight.
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Good Evening,
A very interesting and captivating title of a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow " After Birth "
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
Congratulations for being a Mother.
Welcome to the world of Motherhood and enjoy the journey of being a Mother.
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Good Evening,
Between lies and truth you prefer the Truth this making You one with this beautiful world.
This is a well written and nicely presented work of art that speaks of life's decisions and preferences
Another meaningful and inspiring read.
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" What Compares To Life ?"
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Good Evening,
A wonderful Essay that proves life's challenges make ways for the better or for the best of life.
This writing shares both bad and best experiences and you focused on the best part, thus makes your life harmonious.
I am happy for you and for your future groom and makes me wish to say Congratulations and Best Wishes.
This is a highly impressive
" Good News Abounds "
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Good Evening,
" Roxy"
A very interesting, important and wonderful character.
Possibly a beginning of a nice novel with an Alien story.
ROXY has many great capabilities and surely this story having him as a lead character is plenty of surprises and suspense.
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Good Evening,
This is highly informative and very useful and helpful all the way.
A wonderful writing about technical expertise and great craftsmanship.
This is nicely written and nicely presented with complete and clear explanation.
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Good Evening,
Visiting the cemetery at night is something only the bravest of heart can do and will do. But the love for this dearly departed can never let Fear wins and here is the story that happened at the cemetery being expressed through a well written and nicely presented poetry.
Wise conversation with " The Woman
Dressed In Black "
Highly impressive work of art.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the read.
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