Good Morning,
A nicely presented free verse poem that describes this very famous worldwide medical condition thst bothers a lot of people, including myself.
You are not alone with this great discomfort.
The born poet that you are wisely write this in your very own wel chosen poetic words that completed this work of art.
Sigh..to myself
That this
Hypertension
Is forever a part of me.
But, this cannot stop me to smile and Thank God for everything.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A vety captivating as well as an interesting title that of a questioning heart..
Why Me ?
A nicely written Essay that described how busy you are attending to the worries of the world. You persisted and worked or give your honest to goodness services for a long period of time.
You are a blessing to yourself and to others.
Uour calling in life is so precious and so Sacred.
I feel so blessed reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Very nice
Deep In Her Eyes
A poem that describes someone who is nice and lovely in her own unique way and is very admirable.
The written lines fit for the given title.
The Last line is my favorite line that makes a great and positive conclusion of This awesome work of art.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical with a very interesting and captivating title
Silly Objectionw :
A Temper Disowned
Another wisely and nicely written and nicely presented Poem by a very observant poet.
Thank You for sharing.
A very interesting as well as a very meaningful free verse poetry thst expresses a very be deep wish for
America to
Shine On
A poem that shows the poet's great concern and care for this country and its people.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Good Evening,
I agree with the given title
Such A Short Life
So we must never dwell on anger and negativeness that one must enjoy life and make it worth living in each moment.
I admire the creativeness and the special message that this poetry
Brings.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
The bored doggie is being expressed here in this 70 words poetry.
How about going to swim me and enjoy t the sight of the millions sardines nearby that serves as a tourists
Atractio at our village.
Surely you will enjoy and stopped getting bored anymore
Doggie
The doggie is so cute.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Interesting title of a Song
Nice lyrics of deepest emotion.
A duet then an instrumental.
A love song or a ballad
Surely this is very nice to listen.
A beautiful Music that brings joy to be the listening ear.
Thank You for sharing
Art From My Heart
Nice title too.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Very observant of your grandfather BB who loves to drink coffee everyday in his own special way and time of drinking it with the grandmother dedicatedly washes the cup for him.
This story I can personally relate with my husband and me.
Great poem all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Morning,
This is a Lovely lyrics of a song or a nicely written poem from the heart.
A poem so full of love and longing for someone very special that gives you the reason to write as well as to sing this song.
This is very nice.
Sad and lonely yet it gives the message clearly.
I wish this person can read this and be able to spend wonderful time with each other again.
Very special and convincing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A nice and inspiring title
HOPE
I am a firm believer of this word
Hope.
This is for a contest.
It is well written and nicely presented.
I admire each line that completed this work of art.
"When one has been forsaken by the
world
It's then that faith in Him provides the hope'
These last two lines are my favorite lines and are most meaningful to me.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A poem from the heart.
All sentiments being addressed to someone very special and the many unanswered questions were all written or being expressed here.
I hope that there is a proper communication to get the true answers and all will be well.
Write On.
Good Morning,
The poem has a wonderful presentation.
Reading between the lines makes me smile as you are already writing a very nice poem with your own wonderful uniqueness and style .
I admire this poem all the way.it looks Awesome to me.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
A Love Poetry.
So full of life.
Wonderful loving words that completed this work of art.
Very true..
Nothing else matters but the love that is true when you are Together again.
Awesome love story behind the poetry..
Thank You for the joyful read.
Write On
Good Afternoon,
A precious and Sacred Love poetry
It speaks of the true feelings of the heart.
Sweet and Lovely.
The title reminds me of a nice song that my older sisters love to sing when I was a child.
A song with the same title
I Love You because
You are You.
Thank you for the worthwhile read.
The written lines are inspiring as it expresses positiveness that leads to gain victory in life.
My Writing Craft
It speaks of a given talent or gifts to express oneself fully to the world through writing
Great Poem.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Yes.. Reading between the lines I must agree.. with the given title
Unfair Expectations
And the first three words of every line that says
How can I..
Truly fits for the given title. I'm Truthful and honest
How can I...
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A very beautiful tribute to one of the world's greatest artists
Leonardo the Vinci who's Mona Lisa makes him very popular or famous.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Great poetry.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A loving tribute to the be Heroes of the country who served the Motherlanf
and its people with all tteir courageous and harvest of hearts
The poem is well written all the way.
A poem or a song it serves its purpose to Thank Them for their services rendered with all their heart and sou
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read,
Good Morning
I love the given title that describes us all., no exception.
Truthful and honest all the way.
The last two lines are my favorite lines which are very meaningful to me.
True , because we are nothing but humsn, sometimes we stumble and sometimes we fall.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
It is descriptive of a star and what was going on as it falls from the sky.
The story behind the poetry is inspiring and interesting.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On
Good Morning,
Sad song.
It expresses a sad experience and situation in life and she sings the story of her situation in a prayer.
Sacred and very touching.
The Blessed Mother truly loves her.
Thank You for sharing the
Song Of Bernadette.
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write On.
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