Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry written from the heart and with all sincereness and truthfulness.
I enjoy reading this especially the main reason on why you play this very wonderful game that needs a lot of energy and strength.
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh..the conclusion...after all that was being said and the wallet was in the car.
What a mess..as in what a day.
I can imagine what's going on to happen next.
Hahaha
Life is a joke sometimes.
Well ..This happens..as we continue our journey.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
" We Are "
What we are and who we are ..
All of these are being wisely and nicely described through poetic words and lines that completed this special work of art.
This is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Morning,
A sad family story as one of the brothers did not make it so well in life and ended up this way
Good to read the ending or conclusion that discipline is really necessary.
This is well written and nicely presented.
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Good Morning,
Here it shows the great importance of this Awesome Community in your life as this writing serves as a last will and testament as in loud and clear and properly documented.
WOW...
This is remarkable.
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Good Morning,
Yes, there is something behind those guarded actions that was once an open arena for the world. Now it's full of secrecy that adds to many doubts on why this is happening
A sad reality.
Yes .this happens in many relationships especially when cheating or betrayal occurs.
This is truly a deeply emotional piece.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
It is not that easy to be isolated for months. It's a comfort that you have a pen an a journal as company for you to write down all your thoughts possibly including fear of the unknown.
I am glad to read the conclusion proving that there is always Hope.
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Good Morning,
This is wonderfully written and must be read by all.
It has a captivating and interesting title " The Future "
A very honest to goodness opinion along with an enlightenment in the Conclusion.
I am so glad to have read this
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Good Morning,
Nice cat and nice name too.
Surely that time at Zoey's was a remarkable one as Snowball was with you.
A great experience indeed.
I enjoy reading this as I love cats too.
The conclusion is Awesome.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
Better be lucky in love ..never mind the cards.
Hahaha
A true blessing when you gain true love in your heart and in your life.
A beautiful poem that expresses what is best in life that matters most.
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Good Evening,
The given title sounds like an action song while the whole story is fascinating and amusing .
You have a lovely and lively life with your husband and I am happy for both of you.
Well.keep the love glowing and be very happy forever both of you
I enjoy reading this.
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Good Evening,
A Prose that speaks of an observation of the wife's habit and the honesty of telling that not everything is perfect .
Well, there's no perfect marriage but as long as it's harmonious no matter what it always works out for the best.
The placing of plastic items in the cupboards surely there's a very good reason behind it.
Each person is completely different from the other but relationship remains intact when understanding of that fact remains.
Nice work of art .
Very truthful.
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Good Evening,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry that speaks of a place that has very special meaning in your life as you were truly taking a drive there that gives calmness of your spirit.
This sounds like a beautiful country song to me
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Good Evening,
This is very touching well written and nicely presented poem from the heart.
It speaks of how you miss her wonderful presence, a very loving and caring Grandma and gone too soon and left memories that you always treasure in your heart
A sentimental tribute to this very special lady in your life.
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Good Afternoon,
The well written and nicely presented poetry speaks of an enjoyed meal.
Interesting and captivating title
" Salmon From A Can "
I love fish in the can and I called it sardines in our place. I usually sauteed it with garlic and onion
Oh .
I am hungry reading this wonderful and inviting poetry
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Good Afternoon,
Life's challenges that feels like a heavy burden surely turmoil of thinking occurs yet as long as one believes that there is Hope and facing life with calmness of spirit surely all will be well.. I believe this is the strong message if this well written and nicely presented
" The Inner Storm "
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
The terrible effect of Tequila..and that project..
Thanks to Mom.
A very interesting story with an unforgettable experience that is well written and nicely presented.
Interesting and captivating title " Saving The Day "
Yet, the moonlight makes a sleep at the garden.
Amusing
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Good Afternoon,
Hahaha What a way to make him finally decide to clean his room.
I enjoy reading the conversation with a typical smart kid and the convincing reason for him to follow orders from Mom.
Another wonderful short story .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry expressing another kind of game known as poker
The written poetic words and lines fit for the given title of this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
" Lady Luck : A Nice Poker
Display "
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
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Good Afternoon,
A meaningful song with a Videography.. Truly a modern generation song with an interesting and captivating title
" Choose "
Very true we are blessed to have choices in life. Guided by our Highest Power God and spiritual awareness we make choices that grow out of awareness and sensitivity to our deepest needs.
This writing is brilliant.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
This is informative and is well written and nicely presented that speaks of an online company in Ireland.
It speaks of its functions and good purpose as well as enjoyable online experience for the community.
Well..
I am happy for them.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
The two kind of beats.
The beat of sorrow and then the beat of joy
Sorrow first then good to know that the ending claims for joyful beating of the heart.
Fourteen poetic lines that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
The writing speaks of the Power of Words
It both can make you or break you depending on how it's being used or said
The given title is captivating, interesting and intriguing .
The two lines make an honest conclusion
Thank You for sharing and for the read
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Good Morning,
A short story with a single character Sarah and the need of candlelight in the darkness of the night.
I am glad that she's prepared as need arises in this particular situation.
Nice conclusion. that have the candlelight serves its purpose.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
Yes..the end with no question mark .
The characters of the story cannot find a way to get rid of the comet.
Sad indeed..
Sad ending for all of them due to that comet
This is a well written and nicely presented
" The Rock Of Death "
Thank You for sharing and for the read .
Write on.
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