Hello, I like your sense of word choice and format. What I got from this poem is like a first love that never left the thoughts towrds love and hope for love and test through trials.Well that's what I got, Great work and keep the writing a coming!!!!
Hi, I really like the word choice for your format style. It say's a whole lot with just few words.Great job and keep the writing coming!!!
It made me feel a versatile feeling that change is evident upon opening up with beauty to reveal at each moment something new!
Hi and welcome to WDC. I really like this piece. I could visulize the senerio and you did a great structure with word choice, puttting into format of a realistic event that happens alot. Great style and rhyme. Hope to read more~~ Untill then Keep writing.
Hi, I really like your encouraging words and point of this piece. great word choice and style. For me It stood out to cherish thing more in bad areas/situations and that I can still mold using the confidence to reshape. Great work and style.
Hello, I really think this piece is good. Great structure and format with awsome style.I liked your word choice and togetherness of this piece, like a master piece, leaving me to wonder at the end.Great job, keep it up and write on.
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