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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of The challenge  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews for winning a package in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

You have some teenagers at the movies on their first date. The young man is trying to hold the girl's hand, but he seems to be uneasy about actually doing it. I wonder how things will work out.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to put this under the categories of Young Adult, Love/Romance, and/or Friendship.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Protectorate  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews for winning a package from, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" .

A couple of decades after a nuclear war has devastated the world, and one decade after a time travel contraption was made, a man has to go back in time to stop the man who will cause the trigger to be pulled. However, it seems that this person has a personal importance to the time-traveler.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice little auction. Selling images and raising money to help out a group that helps out those new to the site, it also offers some prizes to a few lucky winners, and who knows what those will be. It's all in good fun. One hopes that more will join.

Originality
There are many auctions, but I haven't seen one for images.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the auction.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Ambassador  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little item. An ambassador reports to his king after he has completed a very risky mission. It seems that there is a very dangerous enemy threatening the kingdom, and the only way to placate him is to give him a large amount of money.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to make it clear about what the enemy is, in case someone hasn't read the others in the series.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Teenage Mind  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is your entry to "Invalid Item" , where one has to write a story about an optimistic future- and is a contest that I'm one of the judges of.

Well, it seems that the more things change, the more things stay the same. You have some teenage boy having to deal with a rival at high school, one that likes to make fun of his old-fashioned name. I guess it happens in every century.

Characters
Interesting- typical teenagers.

Spelling and Grammar
When the boy gets the party note, one of the notes is actually a "not".

Suggestions
You might want to date this- I know that Global Warming caused massive flooding, and teachers have access to online social media, but is this 2050 or 2150?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "July’s Best Prompt" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This your response to what you think the best prompt for the July Blogging contest was.

You liked the Prompt that dealt with the best gift. Sometimes we don't realize that simple things are often the best. We need to open our eyes and take a look around, and smile during the good times.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Sound  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. After moving into a new apartment, a college graduate tries to live on his own. However, it seems that the place is haunted with something, as he keeps on hearing a strange noise, and he tries to find the origin of it.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Promise  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. A young girl from a fairly well-off family watches as her father's bank closes, and hardships come to her family, with meals going from fancy, to basic. Her father then hears that they've been selected for relocation, but finds something else awaiting them.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. While vacationing in China, a newly-wedded French couple find themselves trapped in a hotel during an earthquake, with the wife becoming severely injured. Now the husband has to find a way to protect them from something worse than the earthquake.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Chipmunk Nuts  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a cute poem. A man goes to a group, where people have to try and keep check of their delusions, in his case, a "pet chipmunk". However, it isn't easy, as the "chipmunk" has been with him for a long time, and he seems to care about it. However, he wants help.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is a good and funny story. A man stuck at a quilt-making seminar tries to entertain himself by counting the number of dots on a piece of ceiling tile. Eventually, he falls asleep, with some drool coming out his mouth, and begins to tip over. Soon husbands start betting on which will hit the ground first- him or the drool.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. A man falls for a woman with no memory. A year later, she is abducted in a mysterious manner. He finds out that she is to be a sacrifice to a demon, and resolves to go find and free her from its clutches. However, the journey is treacherous, and far from easy.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A man enters a contest, and ends up winning the prize. However, it seems that the prize is as far from a million dollars as one could get. This person seems to have become a captive on an island, and soldiers are watching out for certain things.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. You have a recovering addict meeting up with someone that they used to know from the rehab that the two of them had gone to. The two had lead similar lives, but the one had gone to rehab voluntarily, and the other had it as part of a prison sentence. Afterwards, the two had very different lives.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
This reads more like a non-fiction piece. If it is, you might want to list it as such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Labourer  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have an undead miner looking for a place to rest. However, it seems that he's having some trouble getting to the right spot, as no one took care after he and his friends died when the mine they were in blew up. Very interesting.

Characters
The guy sounds like he's tired.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to list this as Poetry, as this looks like some sort of Free-Verse poem instead of a Short Story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "Stopping the Invasion" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my Emergency Prompt for the Blogging Contest, that asks how would you protect your family during a zombie invasion.

You say that you have some tools that could take care of a zombie. You also say that the zombie invasion is actually a ruse for some other sort of invasion. I wonder what that one would be.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "My favorite genre" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt about favorite genres to read and write about for the Blogging contest.

You state that fantasy and science fiction are your favorites. One can't go wrong with them- they are very popular, and in a great deal of demand these days. Lots of people write about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "My Favorite Activity" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my emergency prompt regarding favorite activities for the Blogging contest.

You list cooking- that is always good. You list reading- love doing that. Then there's writing, always good there. Then you list eating- you can't go wrong with that at all.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a fun little activity. People can come here, and order c-notes for their friends, and they will get "splashed" by a "water balloon". The funds raised through this even will go to help out R.A.O.K., a group that's dedicated to helping people out by giving them Upgraded Memberships. It's good to help people out.

Originality
There are plenty of fun activities like this, but it's good to have fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Good luck with the water balloons.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt in regards to a favorite game for the blogging contest.

Sudoku- that can be a challenge. You have nine rows, and nine columns, to place numbers 1-9 in, without the same number being used twice in either column or row. I've never completed one. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This your response to my emergency prompt regarding superheroes for the Blogging contest.

You talk about your favorite heroes, and give your reasons- Batman, nice car, Superman, alien with powers, plus Spiderman and the Incredible Hulk, they are cursed but try to do good. Always interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt about favorite comics for the Blogging Contest.

Reading the Funnies on Sunday is always good. From Garfield pestering the dog and his owner, to Marmaduke running out the door, and tearing up the neighbor's roses, one just has to laugh. Personally, I like Sherlock Fox- I like trying to solve the mysteries without cheating, if I can help it.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my emergency prompt dealing with theme parks for the Blogging contest.

You say that you live in Las Vagas- and it is like a theme park of sorts. Of course, living in a place that gets lots of tourists isn't easy- you can't go out shopping without someone taking a picture of you. It can be hard trying to have fun in a place you see every day- things can get dull.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response for my Siblings prompt for the blogging contest.

You talk about your siblings- like how one is always sending religious things, and how another never calls, unless it's a family matter. Family can be that way, and you wonder what's going on with them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt for the blogging contest asking about the fetishes you read/write about, or your favorite animal. At first you wondered if you had a fetish, but it seems that you do have one, to chocolate, (and should I say, poetry.) Always interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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