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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a world where humans and fantasy creatures co-exist in a Modern world, watch the relationship develop between a male human and a female werewolf, as they try to overcome various barriers between them. What will happen next to these two?

Characters
Characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and Grammar look okay so far.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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77
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Had to vote "Fire" but personally, I'd go "All of them."

A cure little piece where one has to figure out what element that they'd control if they could control an element. Something that many might find fun to look into.

Thoughts
Kind of cute.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Salty Siren  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An interesting piece. You have a female pirate, torn about what to do. Does she go forward, back, or carve a new path? Plenty of choices to be had, if she wishes to keep her crew safe and alive. An interesting story to read for sure.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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79
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks interesting. After a snowstorm has finally lifted, a pair of friends - a male human and a female werewolf - go to a nightclub to have some fun. However, by the looks of things, the fun is just starting, and I'm waiting for more.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
For the section about first time, you got "fist" instead of "first".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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80
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is cute. After a long day at their respective jobs, a pair of friends come home to unwind. Soon after talking about their respective days, the one suggests sharing a bubble bath, where things take a turn for the funny. Sure makes one laugh.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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81
Review of Cold  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is the Sixth of Seven Lucky Reviews for Seven Lucky People. Enjoy.

You have someone looking for something important. However, no matter how hard they search, they come up empty. Finally, they come to only one conclusion - the item must have been taken. Makes one wonder.

Characters
No real description of the characters are given.

Spelling and Grammar
I see no issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of How to be special  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is the Fifth of Seven Lucky Reviews for Seven Lucky People. Enjoy.

You have someone named Pawn. They would like to be Special. So, they ask someone to help them to be special. Very cute, and I like the chess motif as well. Plenty will enjoy this.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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83
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is the Third of Seven Lucky Reviews for some lucky people. Enjoy.

This is actually a very fitting item, as I am reviewing this while on my cellphone due to the power being out.

You have two friends, a human and a werewolf, enjoying a video game when the power goes out. Then, the temperature starts to drop, and the human gets cold. Good news is, the werewolf know how to keep them warm. The question is: can the human trust them?

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and Grammar looks good to me.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF and I howl at the moon every night. HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!


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84
for entry "The Naughty Elf" 
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is the Second of Seven Lucky Reviews folks will get from me. Enjoy yours.

Let's see. You have a Christmas elf in a bit of a bother. Seems that there's an issue with the sleigh, and they need to come up with something quick. Problem is, things go from bad to crazy.

Characters
Worthy of a good chuckle.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "~ He Made Me Whole ~" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I asked for something to review, and you sent me. Congrats on being the First of Seven lucky folks.

You have someone talking about the moment that they decided to allow Jesus into their life. How they felt unworthy of their love. However, Jesus was more than willing to accept them.

Thoughts
An interesting piece of spiritual exploration.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling or Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Man of Dreams  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested! Enjoy.

This is a short little poem. Context seems to be centered around Martin Luther King Jr.'s "I have a Dream" speech. Kind of cute, yet sad.

Thoughts
Looks interesting to me.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Spoils of War  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

Well, this an interesting poem, of an older boy, who was raised up the Cowboy Way, who became a man through the Army, even becoming a sniper, and the changes that he went through as a result.

Characters
Joe could of been any young one that joined the military during a time of war. Gone goes the carefree boy, when he sees combat. They never come back the same.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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88
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a review I'm giving to test the Automatic Response System. By giving a review of two hundred fifty or more character in length, I should be able to receive a response, which includes something cool.

Thoughts
Sounds like a cool idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a Poll asking what tv show or video game series should be made into a movie. To be honest, I'm waiting on Sly Cooper. Overall, a cute little item if your a fan of the late 90's early 2000's.

Thoughts
I thought that this was cute.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Wolfe Family Farm  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
In a world where humans are second-rate citizens at best, with lucky ones being merely slaves or pets, many are seen as nothing more than livestock, and seen as a source of food. Follow one werewolf family that raises human livestock, and learn about the complicated relationship that they have with the herd, especially the relationship between Robert Wolfe, the Owner and Master of the herd, and Herd Leader, John Wrangler, who plots to free the herd from their situation. However, things won't be easy, because these two have a certain amount of respect for the other. What will happen?

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Masquerade  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this is a chuckle. An entry for my April-May contest in "The Anthro Activity Anteroom" , wherein a Masquerade that has been hiding Fantasy Creatures from Normal Humans has been broken, as well as their reactions afterwards. That being said, the twist at the end, is clearly worth a chuckle - Best Option Indeed! *Rolling* *Laugh*

Characters
Characters are given more of a general description, but I'm curious about the Post-Masquerade world.

Spelling and Grammar
You got a \ at the end of the second paragraph that you could get rid of.

Best of Luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Vampire Bouncer  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting read. You have a vampire, working as a bouncer at a bar. However, when criminals start messing with his neighborhood, the fangs come out, and blood is soon spilled. Rather interesting.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a story about a woman married to a high-ranking politician during the time of a pandemic. However, it seems that her love life isn't what it could be. Her husband then gets a challenger, not only to his political position, but for his wife's affections.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Homecoming  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem about a cat that greets its owner as they return home from work. Makes me laugh and think about the little dog I deal with. After all, as soon as my mother and I get home, and open the door, that girl's like "Mommy's Home!" and just rushes out the door to jump on my mom's legs. Got to laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with Spelling or Grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's sort of easy to tell what this poem is about, after a read-through. This has been something of a rough couple of years for many. However, one must look on the brighter side of things, because hardships have come before, and we've weathered them. Sometimes though, even in darkness, there's a light, and it can shine brightly.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Somebody with the initials C.D. popped on over and said, "Hey boys! Come take a look at this! Someone's trying to make fun of a song that's been parodied about half a dozen times already!"

A fun start to a parody of a song I enjoy. I wonder how it will end.

Characters
Given the original source, an interesting take on the characters.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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97
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Some interesting thoughts on dating and courting - like is courting old-fashioned, or has it changed into what folks call dating? Then there's the question of commitment and if there's such a thing as cheating while dating. Lots of things to think on.

Thoughts
Interesting to read.

Spelling and Grammar
Some minor issues - betraiel should be betrayal for one. There's also some punctuation issues.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of THE CHAMBER  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting poem about a man, who, due to their crimes, is about to be executed. As it is, it seems that the man has a prior history involving this place, as it seems that his father had also died in this location.

Thoughts
An interesting subject to thing on.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Night Terrors  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a man and his son looking for a creature that has been scaring their livestock. However, what they find is something most don't expect to see. Looks like the start of an interesting book.

Characters
The characters seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Trip To Nowhere  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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You have a short story about a man living in a bunker, some time after World War Three has occurred. It seems that things are rather difficult for him, especially once one learns the truth.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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