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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of Chipmunk Nuts  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a cute poem. A man goes to a group, where people have to try and keep check of their delusions, in his case, a "pet chipmunk". However, it isn't easy, as the "chipmunk" has been with him for a long time, and he seems to care about it. However, he wants help.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is a good and funny story. A man stuck at a quilt-making seminar tries to entertain himself by counting the number of dots on a piece of ceiling tile. Eventually, he falls asleep, with some drool coming out his mouth, and begins to tip over. Soon husbands start betting on which will hit the ground first- him or the drool.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. A man falls for a woman with no memory. A year later, she is abducted in a mysterious manner. He finds out that she is to be a sacrifice to a demon, and resolves to go find and free her from its clutches. However, the journey is treacherous, and far from easy.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A man enters a contest, and ends up winning the prize. However, it seems that the prize is as far from a million dollars as one could get. This person seems to have become a captive on an island, and soldiers are watching out for certain things.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. You have a recovering addict meeting up with someone that they used to know from the rehab that the two of them had gone to. The two had lead similar lives, but the one had gone to rehab voluntarily, and the other had it as part of a prison sentence. Afterwards, the two had very different lives.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
This reads more like a non-fiction piece. If it is, you might want to list it as such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Labourer  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have an undead miner looking for a place to rest. However, it seems that he's having some trouble getting to the right spot, as no one took care after he and his friends died when the mine they were in blew up. Very interesting.

Characters
The guy sounds like he's tired.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to list this as Poetry, as this looks like some sort of Free-Verse poem instead of a Short Story.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "Stopping the Invasion" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my Emergency Prompt for the Blogging Contest, that asks how would you protect your family during a zombie invasion.

You say that you have some tools that could take care of a zombie. You also say that the zombie invasion is actually a ruse for some other sort of invasion. I wonder what that one would be.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "My favorite genre" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt about favorite genres to read and write about for the Blogging contest.

You state that fantasy and science fiction are your favorites. One can't go wrong with them- they are very popular, and in a great deal of demand these days. Lots of people write about them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "My Favorite Activity" 
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my emergency prompt regarding favorite activities for the Blogging contest.

You list cooking- that is always good. You list reading- love doing that. Then there's writing, always good there. Then you list eating- you can't go wrong with that at all.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, this is a fun little activity. People can come here, and order c-notes for their friends, and they will get "splashed" by a "water balloon". The funds raised through this even will go to help out R.A.O.K., a group that's dedicated to helping people out by giving them Upgraded Memberships. It's good to help people out.

Originality
There are plenty of fun activities like this, but it's good to have fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Good luck with the water balloons.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt in regards to a favorite game for the blogging contest.

Sudoku- that can be a challenge. You have nine rows, and nine columns, to place numbers 1-9 in, without the same number being used twice in either column or row. I've never completed one. *Bigsmile*

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This your response to my emergency prompt regarding superheroes for the Blogging contest.

You talk about your favorite heroes, and give your reasons- Batman, nice car, Superman, alien with powers, plus Spiderman and the Incredible Hulk, they are cursed but try to do good. Always interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt about favorite comics for the Blogging Contest.

Reading the Funnies on Sunday is always good. From Garfield pestering the dog and his owner, to Marmaduke running out the door, and tearing up the neighbor's roses, one just has to laugh. Personally, I like Sherlock Fox- I like trying to solve the mysteries without cheating, if I can help it.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my emergency prompt dealing with theme parks for the Blogging contest.

You say that you live in Las Vagas- and it is like a theme park of sorts. Of course, living in a place that gets lots of tourists isn't easy- you can't go out shopping without someone taking a picture of you. It can be hard trying to have fun in a place you see every day- things can get dull.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response for my Siblings prompt for the blogging contest.

You talk about your siblings- like how one is always sending religious things, and how another never calls, unless it's a family matter. Family can be that way, and you wonder what's going on with them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response to my prompt for the blogging contest asking about the fetishes you read/write about, or your favorite animal. At first you wondered if you had a fetish, but it seems that you do have one, to chocolate, (and should I say, poetry.) Always interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a very nice image for the Non-Humans R Us group. It depicts alien ordering a candlelight dinner at a restaurant- I wonder what he's planning to have- I hope it's delicious for him.

Color
It's nicely depicted. Coloration has some nice tones.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a useful item as it shows the links to some of this group's newsletters, which depict various creatures from the realms of sci-fi, fantasy, and horror, and other things that go along with it. A very useful item for those checking the group out.

Originality
There are other places where groups' newsletters are linked to, but it's good to keep things organized.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a nice picture to show off the Non-Humans R Us group activity forum. It depicts a cat-like woman wielding a large paintbrush in a striking pose, as if attacking something. A very nice picture to use for the group.

Colors
All are done very nicely, with the shades of red, blue, and orange mixing. The cat creature is nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Nightmare  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have a young person trying to run from something, with the help of another. However, they are getting tired, and feel like giving up. The other manages to get them into a car and orders the driver to get moving. They then see a figure in the headlights.

Characters
Interesting, though the main character could use some description- is the person a male or female?

Spelling and Grammar
You might want some space between paragraphs, and work on apostrophes.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

This is an interesting story. A person finds themselves unable to move, surrounded by a bunch of metal poles, some of which are stained with the color of rust. They then see a bunch of knives, and someone holding onto one.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on your use of apostrophes, for contractions and possession-ship.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have a group of young men and women entering a cave. Afterwards, terrible things start to happen, with members of the group getting killed. Now the question is, who will die, and who will live to see the morning?

Characters
Some work is needed, better descriptions, and perhaps names.

Spelling and Grammar
You've got some work here, especially with punctuation. Also, is this a story, or a long-verse poem? I can't tell.

Suggestions
I see room for lots of improvement- I can't even tell you where to start. Using Microsoft Word might help out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Matter of Taste  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. On a distant planet, a dragon-like creature is observing a human colonist, who grows cows. One of the creature's friends show up and ask about the human. The creature tells his friend about the human's cows, saying that they taste better than human, and that he'd be able to replace any of the human's cattle with a clone. The creature also tells his friend that he has the human's DNA on file, and that he'd be able to make a clone of him for his friend to try.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to double check your quotation marks, you have some minor issues there.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Member Survey  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This survey ask questions about a member's time on Writing.com- such as how often they are on, the number of people they've recommended to the site, if their writing has improved, and other questions along those lines. Lots of fun to participate in. *Bigsmile*

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
For some of your questions, putting in the option, "I don't know" would be useful.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Query Letter  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting item to look at. It happens to be a letter that you've sent to some publishers, in regards to you wanting to submit some stories/poems/articles to them. Sometimes this can be tricky, as there tends to be rejection from many publishers.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
If you still use this, you may want to update it- to make sure that the information is current.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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