I initially clicked because i saw the word forgiveness and i was curious what the text would even be about.
But the way you write, not only about your faith and your experience was interesting and calming. It was the vision on forgiveness itself that i appreciated where the sentiment was.
The net distinction between the sin and the person was also very touching especially mixed with the importance to repent.
We are all Sinners, but we all have that capacity to repent and to be forgiven.
The poem is small but it doesn't need to be long.
The message is clear and vehicle with a gentle empathy.
You can both feel the unknown struggle but it comes with a promise of better times as long as you do not give up.
Thank you for this little gem, it started my day well.
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