|Great story!! So far....
I request you too please please increase its size since cats can play other sports as well. I wish I could read about a team game of cats, it sounds nice.....
I found no errors but the repeated use of the word "feline" can be substituted for a better story. I believe that you can expand this story. I think that this line can be corrected as:
"but I swear as he passed the whimpering soaked Chardonnay,..." TO
"But I can swear that as he passed the whimpering and soaked Chardonnay,...."
I may be wrong (since I am only 14). You can also keep track of the Bejieng Olympics and apply any stories and controversies to your feline friends.
Thanks for the great read.........