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Review of A story to tell  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A fantastic poem about the challenges in life and how we have difficulties along our path in life. At time when we talk about mental health and beginning to learn more about ourselves this is a piece I can relate to. An excellent piece. Well done.
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Review of MUSIC AND ME  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for sharing your story and experience. Music is so important to us all, it is something that can unite us and share happy times and memories. Your story gets this across and creates beautiful images for us all. Thank you for sharing, God bless and happy New year. Keep up the good work
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Review of October Omen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What I like about this peace is it's not clear what it is yet it allows the reader use their own imagination as to what it is.
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Review of GRATEFUL HEART  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I should read your work more often, it is very uplifting :)
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Review of HAPPINESS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful piece thanks for sharing and adding some positivity to my day. Some very good tips for me to take away and use myself too.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. Am looking forward to this
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Never before has this been more true. We are seeing Jewish people suffer again. This is an important piece, well done
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This story aptly conveys the emotions we go through as human beings. We have all been there with Levi. When we have an argument with a loved one our emotions can go into overdrive. It takes a strong person like Levi to go forth with an olive branch.
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Review of Nature's Lulluby  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A lovely piece dedicated to Mother Nature
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Ha ha, love the twist at the end
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Review of This is me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A sad piece of poetry that aptly describes how hard it is to let someone close when you are hurt in the past
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Review of Ghost Town  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
True, we are buried in technology and missing what's around us, then eventually it is too late
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Review of Wildfire!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Fantastic, first time I have seen a piece expressing how a fire feels
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Review of Fifteen Floors  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Short and simple poem , well put together on getting revenge.
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Review of When God Speaks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful, really nice poem, that can be applied across all religions
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Rated: E | (4.0)
beautiful
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A lovely poem which would sit well in the school classroom
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Very enjoyable and entertaining story done.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Really nice memorial, aptly reflects how we feel when we lose a loved one.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this, well done, please see my story Shylock, based on a Jewish businesswoman victimised by prejudice and her daughter eloping
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Review of Apology  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a sad poem, illustrates how an argument over nothing can snowball into a lifetime of hurt and regret.
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Review of Starlights  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A sad poem that truly reflects how hard it is to move on from someone you love
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
With rising anti-Semitism, this is an important story to be told.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautiful story, well done
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