amateur40's (amateur40) Reviews

This story aptly conveys the emotions we go through as human beings. We have all been there with Levi. When we have an argument with a loved one our emotions can go into overdrive. It takes a strong person like Levi to go forth with an olive branch.

5

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#4393475

Review of Nature's Lulluby

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A lovely piece dedicated to Mother Nature

6

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#4391415

Review of Decisions, Decisions

Review by amateur40

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Ha ha, love the twist at the end

7

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#4391413

Review of This is me

Review by amateur40

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A sad piece of poetry that aptly describes how hard it is to let someone close when you are hurt in the past

8

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#4387933

Review of Ghost Town

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.0)

True, we are buried in technology and missing what's around us, then eventually it is too late

9

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#4386315

Review of Wildfire!

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Fantastic, first time I have seen a piece expressing how a fire feels

10

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#4385182

Review of When God Speaks

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Beautiful, really nice poem, that can be applied across all religions

11

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#4383607

Review of Just a Touch of Spring

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

beautiful

12

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#4367604

Review of Exposing the Underbelly

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A lovely poem which would sit well in the school classroom

13

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#4366222

Review of Back To The Past: Jane Austen Thirty

Review by amateur40

Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)

Very enjoyable and entertaining story done.

14

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#4361887

Review of The Silent Poetry Collection

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Really nice memorial, aptly reflects how we feel when we lose a loved one.

15

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#4361829

Review of 'The Merchant of Venice' dialog - redone

Review by amateur40

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I like this, well done, please see my story Shylock, based on a Jewish businesswoman victimised by prejudice and her daughter eloping

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#4361670

Review of Apology

Review by amateur40

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

This is a sad poem, illustrates how an argument over nothing can snowball into a lifetime of hurt and regret.

17

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#4361000

Review of Starlights

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A sad poem that truly reflects how hard it is to move on from someone you love

18

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#4360197

Review of Hatred of the Jews

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Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

With rising anti-Semitism, this is an important story to be told.

19

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#4359786

Review of The Hummingbird

Review by amateur40

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A Beutiful tribute to a beautiful bird

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#4358750

Review of The Centurion And The Jew

Review by amateur40

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Beautiful story, well done