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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Tom Vee,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "A Little Trunk Music"

Title:Love the play on words.

Description: Your descriptions lets your audience know that it is a flash piece, and an idea of what the prompt was.

Contents:A delightful story, with twists that were truly not expected. You made me hungry for a good ol' poor boy!

Thumbs up:For entering a flash contest! What a great way to get your creative juices flowing!

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jacob Harney,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "This Process of Becoming"

Title:Your title captured my imagination. We're all in the process of becoming, what is up to us and the choices we make.

Description: Descriptions will be the death of me, but you've captured the essence of your poem with yours.

Contents:I love how this poem flows. In places it almost feels like it's supposed to be read staccato, while others it seems to meander. Wonderful variations that give depth to your words.

Your message is so appropriate in these days.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of swamp fox  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Troy Ulysses Davis,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Swamp Fox"

Title:The title drew me in.

Description: An eloquent rebuttal

Contents:I love the way your poem flows as it's read. It builds and ebs with ease. Then when you get to the last two lines. It's like... yeah. I was nodding right along.

Thumbs up:Excellent poetic skills.

Conventions:No errors noted

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Life is Maths  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kousi,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Life is Maths!"

Title:I picked your piece because of the title. (Is there room to change maths to Mathematics?)

Description: A long time ago, I read a news letter here on WDC. One piece of advice I picked up from it was the importance of making a good first impression. You description is your first impression. This is where people decide if they even want to bother. Many readers will see misspelled words, poor grammar, etc. in a description and pass right on over your piece. This is where you entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work, make it a good first impression.

Contents:Truly an inspirational piece. You've captured a lifetime of learning in just a few lines of poetry.

Thumbs up:Interesting life lessons metaphorically related to math! I love math!

Conventions:You use the term Maths- while you're actually talking about the processes or operations of Mathematics. Maths isn't really the appropriate term, you could use just plain math.
Time zones, I don't think you need to add the zones in there... the proper division of your time- brings...

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Thoughts of You  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi born-san,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Thoughts of You"

Title:I liked the title. In combination with your description, it made choosing this poem to review very easy.

Description: Works well with your contents.

Contents:Your poem sings to the lover's heart. A song of missing, and longing for someone that isn't there. It is very true, absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Thumbs up:You've captured the essence of missing someone special.

Conventions:When I'm alone sometimes I smiled- with the verb tense in the other lines of that stanza, it should be smile instead of the past tense.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi StormLink,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Never Save a Beautiful Woman"

Title:Your title gives away the ending.

Description: Your description teases the reader into wanting to find out what her wicked ways are.

Contents:There's a lot of description, and leading up to the action. Then it's over, way too soon. I suspect this was written for a flash challenge. Twists are always good for those challenges.

Thumbs up:For taking part in a flash challenge. They open your mind to possibilities and really get the creative juices flowing.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi RVM,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Life is a Treasure- Realize it!"

Title:Looking at your port, I chose to review this piece because of the title.It called to me.

Description: Your description works well with what you've written. It reminded me of taking my children mining in the mountains and their emerald finds.

Contents:Life indeed is indeed in one's perceptions. It's our choice or conditions that determine how we react to those perceptions. There is a lot more to it of course, but realizing how our own attitudes effect us, help us to affect change.

Thumbs up:Short, sweet, to the point. You've packed a lot into a little grain of wisdom.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of #bestvacationever  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi Leroy,


I'm honored to read and review #bestvacationever

Title:I'm still figuring out the hashtag thing. It used to be a pound symbol, now it's everywhere.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work. Give a tease of what to expect.

Contents:You've captured the times in your couplet based rhyme. It's amazing the number of people I see out, together, but not even looking up to talk to each other. Times have changed, and more folks need to get a way from technology. Well said.

Thumbs up:Love the ending, pictures on instagram. lol, back to the techno world.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of Yan Can Cook?  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi W.D. Wilcox,


I'm honored to read and review "Yan Can Cook?"

Title:Interesting title, I was trying to remember the show.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:Ok, old friend, I've been reading for the Cosmically Comedic Raid off and on all day. This is the first thing that's made me laugh, right out loud and slap my leg! Well done!

Thumbs up:The ending is simply priceless! Wonderful!

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of Out of Order  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi Scarlett,


I'm honored to read and review "Out of Order".

Title:Interesting title, at first I thought it was going to be about a vending machine. Nice twist.

Description: You've given the reader a hint about your piece, that's what a good description does.

Contents:I was beginning to wonder how this piece was 'comedy'. It seemed like such a huge argument (albeit over nothing). I guess it hit too close to home to see much humor there.

Thumbs up:I did enjoy the last sticker from the wife.

Conventions:Oh for Heaven’s sake, you big girl’s blouse. I'd never heard of calling someone a big girl's blouse. Interesting, I've heard put your big girl panties on.


Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of Cheddar Delight  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi Jatog the Green,


I'm honored to read and review "Cheddar Delight"

Title:Your title fits with your poem.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:What a cute poem for The Writer's Cramp. Flash contests are a great way to spark your creative juices. I hope you did well in the contest. It was a joy to read with great rhythm and rhyme scheme.

Thumbs up:I'm so glad Mickey didn't get caught in a trap, I kept waiting for that to happen.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors within your poem.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi Sierraric,


I'm honored to read and review "A Place on the Wall."

Title:I must admit it was the title that drew me in. (I'll explain that later.)

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:I loved your tale of woe. Poor Humpty, he was a scrambled mess in the end. At first I thought you were talking about a squirrel, I have no idea where that popped into my head. Then I got to the 'drug commercial' part, and I started thinking.
You kept me on my toes! Very nicely done!

Thumbs up:lol, the Royal Medics responded! Too cute!

Conventions: I didn't notice any errors.

A Place on the Wall- just reading the title brought back so many memories from my childhood. My grandpa used to say, "We'll let you go to sleep on the bed, but once you're asleep- we'll hang you on a nail on the wall so somebody else can have the bed." It's a standing joke in the family, many of his nieces hated to go to Uncle Darrell's house, because they'd be hung on nails during the night. They thought the old teaser was serious!

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of Number One Guy  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome to the WdC Power Reviewers Cosmically Comedic Raid, for today only!


Hi Kare Enga in Montana,


I'm honored to read and review "Number One Guy"

Title:I love the title, it reminds me of something my Dad would say.

Description: Your description is delightful. It gives a generous dose of hinting, to make the readership of WDC want to enter your port to read.

Contents:I love Santa tales, always have and always will. You've captured the frustration of being a parent as well. I loved the tongue in cheekiness of your letter.

Thumbs up:Thank you for adding the note at the bottom. It made perfect sense to add the mice into the letter once I read it.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of EnduReview  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Robin Bateman,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "EnduReview"

Title:The title called to me.

Description: Your description piqued my curiosity, Endure-- review combined? Interesting!

Contents:I've had reviews that lifted me up. I've had reviews that made me wonder what the reviewer was actually reading. I've had reviews that have made me cry and literally consider giving up writing completely.

To me, I've always wanted to be the encourager. Years of working with budding writers (first, second and third graders), I never wanted to do anything to stilt their growth and love of writing.

My philosophy about reviewing continues here. I want to encourage, to ask a question or two. I want to enjoy the efforts that have been put forth.

From reading your poem, I think you have that same philosophy.

Thumbs up:For building an acrostic, that encapsulates that encourager that is so important in a reviewer.

Conventions:No errors noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Wake up and Think  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Nixie,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Wake Up and Think"

Title:Ok, your title pulled me in. I'd love to say that sleep is not an issue, but since my mom doesn't know day from night and meds aren't helping, I dream of sleeping peacefully to wake in the morning to be able to think of something.

Description: I love the question, lol, but you really don't want to know.

Contents:I must be living tightly in my 'shell' these days. Your survey made me think about what happens when I wake up. Anymore, I don't wake up naturally, Mom is better than an alarm clock. Only problem is you never know when it's going to go off, or how often during the night it's going to sound the alarm.

I was interested in seeing what other people thought about. The top three were pretty much what I thought it would be. I'd love to see a larger sample and break it down, weekend days and work days first thoughts.

Thumbs up:Interesting survey!

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Embers  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Turtle,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Embers"

Title:Your title and description pulled me in.

Description: Your description is a great tease for inviting someone to come in and read.

Contents:Your poem transports me to many a campfire with the Cub Scouts and Boy Scouts. The fire slowly dying, backside freezing, waiting for the last embers to fade. Part of me misses those times.

It also delves into the embers of life within. I loved your metaphor. It comes at a time when my mom is facing her own realization of her mortality.

Thumbs up:You've captured a moment in time in our lives where we all must tread at some point, and given it beauty and new meaning.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Untuncoi,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "The Lighthouse of You"

Title: I love the title and it gives a hint of what is to come.

Description:Your description will entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:I was really enjoying the similies, the metaphor, the flow of the words. Then you crashed on the reef? Oh my! That was a twist I wasn't prepared for.

Thumbs up:A love poem, with a twist.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Unanswered Call ?  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Angel_Eyes_Misses_WDC,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Unanswered Call?"

Title:I found it interesting you put a question mark in your title. I'm not sure that I would have, but it makes sense if you stop and think about it.

Description: You've enticed the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:I remember that day. I remember the parents of children who were in the air on flights. I remember praying for the victims. I remember the staff members that had family that worked in those buildings. A tragic event, that you've captured and brought back to mind.

So many parents left for work that morning, never to return. It breaks my heart for the families involved.

Thumbs up:For remembering, for in remembering they are still among us.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sara H,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review 'Time is What Matters"

Title:Your title fits your work well.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. It's fine to tell people it was written for a contest, but give them a tease to entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work. Personally, this is one of the hardest things to come up with!

Contents:Your poem tugs at the heart strings. There are so many options here on WDC to really open your work up and show case the interaction between your 'characters'. When I was reading, I was thinking about the use of color, or different fonts for the conversation... then I pondered if it was an internal conversation thinking about the complexities of our existence.

Very thought provoking for early Sunday morning!

Thumbs up: You've created a piece that tugs at the heart strings. I can see this conversation between child and mother/father, I can see it as a guardian angel watching over someone moving over to the next plane and feeling that fear of dying. Wonderful work.

Conventions:With poetry, there are two trains of thought. One that says conventions matter, no matter what form of writing you're doing, and one that says poetry flows from the heart and conventions don't matter at all.

I have one convention that is more of a pet peeve than anything else. The pronoun I should always be capitalized. When I see it in lower case it makes me cringe. Like I said it is my pet peeve and you have plenty of lower case i's in your piece that drew me right out of your lovely poem.

Be careful of using the same phrases too close together.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Cats  
Review by Amay
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lacy,,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Cats"

Title:I wondered if reading that you're writing from an opposing pov if I HATE Cats might work better. Then you could add a wink at the end, if you wanted to.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:You've written a persuasive paper, very list like, but I'm not sure if that was your intention since there aren't any clues like essay, or story given.

Thumbs up:You've hit most of the 'bad' points of cats- here's another if you need one. Those allergic to cats shouldn't work in schools with young children. Young cat owners come to school and deposit their pets dander as they go through their day. Imagine being trapped in a sealed classroom with 20 or so cat owners that want to hug, touch and rub on you all day.

Conventions: I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of eternal love  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Margaret Riw,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I'm honored to read and review "Eternal Love"

Title: I chose to read this piece from the title. I wanted to see your take on Eternal Love.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:Your piece is impassioned, pleading almost. I think, no I know, my biggest suggestion would be to go back and edit this. You've written as prose, but it reads like poetry. Line breaks would take care of the missing punctuation.

Thumbs up:This piece was written with passion, from a heart felt place.

Conventions:
I would go back and edit the title to make it capitalized.
gults- sp? guilts


Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Earth Witch  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Fire* Congrats! You're receiving a gift from "Invalid Item"  ! The Nuclear Package has been ordered for you from: PatrickB } and includes a mix of six reviews of any items in your port!! Enjoy! *Fire*

Hi Stevie,


I'm honored to read and review "Earth Witch" as a part of your Nuclear Package!

Title:

Description: Wow! What an honor to be published at such a young age! Congratulations.

Contents:As I read through your poem, I was taken back in time. It brought back memories of high school and a paper I once wrote, because I "had to". You've done a much better job at the theme than I did! Of course, a term paper isn't poetry, nor is it from the heart even if your passionate about the subject.

Your poem flows well, and I can see why it would be accepted and published!

Thumbs up: I loved the way you contrasted the beauty with the dark and ugly.

Conventions:There were no errors that I could see.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.


Amay

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Review of Moments  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Puddy,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review Moments.

Title:Your title works well with your poem.

Description: Your description gives the reader a hint about what they are about to read.

Contents:I need to make a poster size of your poem and plaster it in front of my son's eyes every morning! But, that's another story.

You've got the right attitude. Life is too short, to valuable, to dwell in the mundane. Every once in a while you need to break out of the rut and live a little.

Thumbs up:Live life well! Mostly, Live and enjoy the little things. Wonderful message!

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

*Candleb*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *Candlev*


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Review of Family Album  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Pat,


I’m honored to look at your pictures in your Family Album for the Power Reviewers Puddle Jumping April Weekend Raid.

Title:Perfect title

Description: I have a precious grandson too. They're the best!

Contents:I love looking at pictures of family events. Weddings are such a heart warming time (and stressful). Grandchildren are the absolute best. They wrap us around their little fingers.

Thumbs up:Congratulations on a beautiful wedding and an adorable little one.

Conventions:Not applicable.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Happy WDC Anniversary!

Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Shannon,


I’m honored to read and review "Whisper Softly, My Love" for the Power Reviewers Puddle Jumping April Weekend Raid.

Title:Intriguing title, it drew me in.

Description: Just enough of a tease to draw the readers of WDC.

Contents:This is how a woman feels about an intimate encounter. It's interesting to ponder, to consider, to remember how that special moment feels. You've captured the depth and breath of womanhood.

Thumbs up:Doesn't that weakening of the knees feeling feel wonderful!

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Happy WDC Anniversary!

Amay

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