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Review of Singing Tower  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Elisa the Running Stik,

I’m honored to view, read and review 'Singing Tower'.

Title:I saw your title and had to click, I remember going there as a young child!

Description: You really did capture the whole tower. I remember my uncle and dad working and walking checking to see if they had the whole thing in the frame.

Thoughts:I have not thought of The Singing Tower in ages. That was such a fun family trip. I can't believe its still standing with all of the hurricanes and fires that have been plaguing Florida in recent years.

Thumbs up:You've captured the beauty and elegance of the Singing Tower. It is a wonder in an of itself. I remember listening to the chimes as a little girl. Thank you for sharing and bringing back such wonderful memories for me.

It seems like dad bought a cassette tape of the carillon. It makes me wonder where that has gotten to, not that I have a cassette player anymore.


Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Catwoman,

I’m honored to view, read and review 'Baby Praying Mantis'.

Title:Your title brought back memories.

Description: Very good camouflage for the little babies.

ThoughtsOh my, what memories this brings back. About twenty years ago I was a teacher assistant in a Montessori school. My lead teacher found a praying mantis egg sack and brought it in for the nature shelf.

After the first day, I asked if she wanted me to take it back outside and put it in the garden. I was told no. So I didn't mention it again. She laid it on top of the kids cubbies and there it sat, in the nice warm classroom.

I'm sure you see where this is leading. One Monday morning I arrived to find countless baby praying mantises all over the cubbies, kids' stuff, and half the room.

I'm sure there were thousands of babies that I swept up and had to dump outside that morning.

Thumbs up:Thank you for bringing back a memory that when it happened, I probably couldn't laugh about it, but now... it's kind of funny.


Please remember, always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Teen Time  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Shaara, The Gardener,

I’m honored to read and review 'I was Swallowed by the Toilet.'

Title:Perfect

Description:

Contents:What a delightful little poem. I'm glad you added the art work, it is so cute.

Your poem flowed very well, and had a nice meter. It was simple and easy enough that I think boys would love it as a poem to recite. I can see several different lessons that could be broached using this as a starting point. Very creative!

Thumbs up:Very original! It made me smile!


Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Shaara, The Gardener,

I’m honored to view and review 'The Toilet that Swallowed, Illus.'

Title:Perfect!

Description: What better way to entice someone to read a story... an adventure... I don't think I'll read it to my grandson whose potty training right now. Maybe later.

Thoughts:The twisted perspective of the toilet leads me to think I'm going to read a pretty twisted tale. I love the artwork. It really caught my attention and made me want to click on the story... which I'll do in a minute or two.

Thumbs up:Clearly and original piece of art for an original story.


Please remember, always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Banana Flower  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Vanillafire,

I’m honored to View and review 'Banana Flower'.

Title:The title intrigued me. I don't think I've ever thought of a banana flower before. There would have to be one to have a fruit, but I've never picked bananas either so thank you for sharing.

Description: I agree, the banana flower must be an exotic one. I still can't believe that I'd never seen one before.

Thoughts:This picture reminds me of a wedding gift we received over thirty years ago. I was teaching in SC and the staff of the school gave us a print of the state flower and bird. The simplicity of the print, reminds me of those wonderful days!

Thumbs up:It was very nice of you to add your friend's gallery information. I'm sure she appreciates the exposure from being on WDC.



Please remember, always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Arwen's Moon  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Robin Bateman,

I’m honored to view and review 'Arwen's Moon.'

Title:I love the title, it reminds me of a book I read recently with a werewolf named Arwen.

Description: Punch up your description. It's a beautiful picture of 'the man in the moon', please don't belittle your work.

Thoughts:This drawing reminds me of so many wonderful memories. I used to teach school, and the younger kids would act out the nursery rhyme and jumping over the moon. Even further back, I remember Captain Kangaroo, on TV with the old Grandfather Clock, that had a moon dial that was always set to the quarter moon phase at the top.

Thumbs up:Your illustration has brought back memories of precious times. Thank you for sharing and making me smile.


Please remember always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, it's me again,

Wow! What a wonderful talent you have I'm sitting here looking at your art work, and I'm amazed. It blows my mind, especially since I have none of that kind of talent.

I do hope, in all sincerity, that you find an outlet that will truly showcase your talents and abilities. It is amazing work, and I've really enjoyed looking through your artwork today.

I wonder if the Story Master or Story Mistress has ever thought about holding art classes here on WDC. I'd love to have some nice art to go with the stories I've written for my grandson, but being retired has really limited my budget for such niceties.

I do hope you'll continue your artistic journeys well into the future.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi AngelArchiver,

I’m honored to view and review '2 Faces of Jackie Estacado'

Title:Your title works well with your art.

Description: Love that you used half and half in your description, you really can see the contrast and dimension it gives to your artwork.

Thoughts:I'm sitting here looking at your artwork thinking, there are a lot of paranormal romance, and romance authors that would love to look at your work. The strength that your illustration highlights is amazing and you did it in less than an hour... oh my goodness gracious! It'd would take me an hour to think of something to draw!

Thumbs up:You've made me want to search out art classes again. Maybe when my husband retires, I can have the freedom to do that! It was a joy to see view and review your work.


Please remember, always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Omnipotence  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Dave Kraken,

I’m honored to read and review 'Omnipotence'

Title:Your title works well.

Description: I think your title really sets the stage for your piece (writing and photo).

Thoughts:Your image called to me, my son at four months lost his right eye to cancer. We've been through a lot of artificial eyes since then, so you can see why I had to delve deeper into see.

Thumbs up:I was thrilled to see that you've developed your explanation for your sculpture. The depth of understanding that you've shared with great ease makes the picture and article really increases the readers/ seers deeper understanding of your works.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of My thoughts  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Werden,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'My Thoughts'

Title:Very appropriate title

Description: It's hard to know who reads the blogs around WDC. It seems like I start, then forget about them.

Contents:It sounds like you've lost your passion for writing. The embers are still there, they just are buried in the ashes. I personally have gone for a while without writing. I've been busy quilting, making baby stuff for my grandson, and taking care of my mom. I just don't seem to have any ideas.

My friends tell me just to write. Write a little everyday. That's hard when you're looking at a huge white screen with nothing on it. So I read, I review, I read some more. Hopefully, one day soon both of us will find our groove again and let the magic of writing flow from our hearts.

Thumbs up:For capturing moments of your life. Memories are fleeting, and mine seems to be flying faster these days than ever before.

Conventions:No errors noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Scales  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Hallgerd,

Happy WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Scales'

Title:Very aptly titled.

Description: Your description gives the vaguest of hints. It is enough to entice the readership of WDC to enter and enjoy your tale.

Contents:Dark, very dark. I love how the tension builds throughout. The depth of your metaphor isn't lost, it eats away at you as the reader follows through.

Thumbs up:I hope your piece did well. You've masterfully taken a vague prompt and fulfilled it with a fascinating story.

Conventions:No errors noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of me...  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Crazy Poet,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'me...'

Title: I love how you used the ellipse to show that there is more to come. After all, we write and continue to grow.

Description:Kind of a curious description. Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:It feels like you've written a stream of consciousness poem. As the thought came to your mind they found their way upon your paper. It is interesting as it is kind of disjointed,but it flows well.

Conventions:can't is missing the apostrophe. There are a couple of places you might consider putting in a comma or an extra line break.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Streams of Sand  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Jyler,

Happy Second WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Streams of Sand'

Title:Your title called to me as I was looking through your port.

Description: Your description enticed the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:You've created a hauntingly beautiful poem. So many times we live in the could have, should have world of dreaming about missteps we've made. Hind sight may be 20/20, but sometimes even looking back we don't know what that different path would have led to.

Thumbs up:I love how your poem starts, it really pulls the reader in and allows them to think about those people in their own lives that they could have, and probably should have...

Conventions:
That moments gone.
That moments through.>>In both lines you've used the plural of moments, but it really should be the contraction - moment's (moment + is)

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Naughty Child  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Grampa D,

Happy Second WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review "Naughty Child'

Title:Your title caught my eye as I was perusing your port.

Description: My grandson just left to go back home. He's just 10 months old, so he hasn't been too naughty. Your description along with your title caught my eye and pulled on my heart strings to open and read.

Contents:Your poem flowed and the meter was just perfect! The rhyme scheme worked well. Such a cute little ditty. I hope there is a picture to go with your poem. It would be delightful!

Thumbs up:I absolutely loved how your poem just rhythmically flowed with such great ease. I find that very hard to do.

Conventions:No errors noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Megan,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Lord, Make Me a Ballerina'

Title:Your title reminded me of days long, long ago... there are pictures somewhere of me in my little tutu. I certainly wasn't graceful then, nor has it improved with age.

Description: Your title will bring back memories of all those poor kids that were stuck in dance classes, whether we wanted to be there or not.

Contents:You've captured the desire and the hardships that come with working toward those goals. It isn't easy to be a dancer. I think of toe shoes and painful feet. You really have to want it to go through all of that. I guess that's one reason I didn't stick with it any longer than I did.
The last line just seems like a tag a long. I supposed its the way I was raised, promising to be good wasn't going to make it happen.

Thumbs up:Going for a dream!

Conventions:No errors noted. Thank you for spacing out the lines, it really makes it easier to read.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jeremy Lester,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'All that I have Learned.....' (You should go back and add an "E" rating to your piece.)

Title:Your title fits your poem quite well.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:You've written a poem that I think everyone over 30 can readily relate to. We've all had those cocky teenaged years when we thought we were invincible, only to get knocked down by life's journey in some form or another. You've summed it up and presented the facts of growing up in a pleasant ditty.

Thumbs up:
"I've gained some knowledge of life and become quite humble it seems." Nicely stated.

Suggestions:
whom always took with a grain of salt what his mentors have told,
Is staring at the clock on the wall,
realizing in all this time, all that I have learned, I have not learned at all.

In your last three lines.... mentor HAD told

I'd break the last line after time... then your last line... would look like this:

All that I thought I have learned, I have not learned at all.

That way your lines would follow the pattern you started at the beginning.


Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of To My Dearest  
Review by Amay
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Puma One,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'To My Dearest'

Title:

Description: You've given your readers a window to peek in, they can use your description to decide if they want to delve further or not. Well done.

Contents:Oh my! Small print... I'd bump up the font for the reader's ease of reading. You've created a beautiful love poem. One where distance is the enemy, and time is the only thread that shortens daily.

Anyone in a long distance relationship would feel your hearts anxiety and understand the depth of feeling.

I have very little to offer... The only thing I noticed and it's probably me and the way I read it. I read the poem as the one at home writing the one far away... The last phrase kind of threw me, as it sounds like the one far away is writing home.

Thumbs up:Very touching, very moving...

Conventions:
“one more day is passed, not much longer now.” Has passed

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Narcissist  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Cary Griffin,

Happy Second WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Narcissist'

Title:Interesting title

Description: You've enticed the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work. If they don't know what a Narcissist is, you've given them a little hint.

Contents:You've captured the feelings, the emotional quality.. that I love you, but I can't really love you because you're not me. There seems to be a hint of wanting to change, but doubtfulness about actually following through with that course of action.

Thumbs up:Very original, well stated but kind of choppy, as if having a conversation with one's own self.

Conventions:No errors noted.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Elements  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi LPForever24,

Happy Second WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Elements'

Title:A very interesting title for your poem. It says a lot, but you really have to think about it.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work. Not wanting to give it away offer the reader anything to go on. From your title, one might have thought this a poem about the periodic table...

Contents:Your free verse poem flows very well. As I read, I kept wondering where I was going to end up. Vivid images popped into my mind. I thought about a picture that was posted over a year ago on one of the poetry contests.

Thumbs up:
The ashy remains of those memories
Are whisked elsewhere by the melancholy winds which blow and lead them far away
To an entirely new world
Where the cycle can begin anew"

Conventions:There are those that say poetry doesn't need punctuation, then there are those that say that it does. My heart says follow the poet most of the time. I think some ending punctuations would be helpful to the reader.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of The Last Straws  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jacqui King Cosper,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'The Last Straw'

Title:Perfect fit!

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work. How was your piece received at the Daily Flash?

Contents: Oh my, what a delightful read! It is something I could just hear my Uncle Jim sitting down at the dinner table and telling at the end of the day. Oh the memories of stories that he'd tell while sitting at the head of the table.

Thumbs up:You've brought back precious memories, for that I thank you.

Conventions:There were a couple of spelling errors, but nothing major. You can edit as you wish.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Echo's Lament  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi CallMeBaka,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Echo's Lament'

Title: Fits your piece beautifully

Description: Interesting description, but you give the conclusion away. Tempt those to come in and read, let them read your piece to find the ending.

Contents: Very concise... a fifty word challenge, definitely a challenge to tell a myth in 50 words! Well done.

Thumbs up:Fifty words to do anything is a strenuous challenge. It teaches the art of brevity, which sometimes is a good thing.

Conventions:Watch out for capital letters (names of gods should be capitalized).

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Zheila,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Hypatia of Alexandria'

Title:I chose to read this piece because of my Lower Elementary Montessori Training.

Description: Your description is appropriate for your article.

Contents: Back in the day when I was earning my credential. We had to create a script for the Great Lessons. I was on the 'team' working on the History of Math and the Story of Writing. As part of our presentation, since all of us on the team were women- we chose to do the "Ladies of Math". Hypatia was the Lady, I had to portray... in a talk show format. Your article brought back some vivid memories of our truly silly entertainment. Such a shame, everyone else took the assignment so seriously. We even made up a song.

Thumbs up:Thank you for sharing your knowledge of this important woman in history.

Conventions:Nothing noted, you probably should site your references.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review of Alone in Darkness  
Review by Amay
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Samael,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Alone in Darkness'

Title:Your title fits your poem well.

Description: Punch up your description. This is where people decided if they even want to bother. Entice the readership of WDC to open and take a peek at your work.

Contents:You've written a poem about love lost, the hurt and hopelessness of that time. Interesting and sad. It seems a bit choppy but that might be how you wanted the hopelessness to appear to the reader.

Conventions:No errors noted that detracted from the poem.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi You Obviously Love Oreos, Why yes I do, in fact!

Happy first WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'My Failure of Sneaking Out'

Title: I was typing up the title, and I typed at instead of OF, now that I've said it a few times, I'm wondering which version is really more correct?

Description: You've given the readership a short summary of what you've written. Well worded and should pique the curiosity of some folks.

Contents: I shook my head and giggled as I read. Very nicely done. I can see the situation unfolding. Poor mom, I bet she's wondering what her daughter is going to do next.

Thumbs up:Creative resolution to a youthful situation.

Conventions:I didn't notice any errors.

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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Review by Amay
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Huntermartin,

Happy First WDC Anniversary!

I’m honored to read and review 'Trial of Champions.'

Title:Interesting title, it makes one wonder who will win!

Description: Interesting description- I must admit, it is what drew me in. I saw a video this morning about why to always look under the toilet seat. It was a HUGE spider. So it seemed like something I was supposed to read today.

Contents:I'm curious, it seems as this is part of something much larger. Is it? Personally, I think that with expansion, you have a good outline of what could be a great paranormal story.

Thumbs up:Keep going!

Conventions:No errors noted

Please remember, I'm just a writer like you, and always take reviews with a grain of salt. You have to decide what is best for your work and follow your heart.

Thank you for sharing your work here on WdC.

Amay

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