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Review of The Gift.  
Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a lovely piece you have crafted here. The way it arrived on paper seems to be a bit like my own. They just come in, almost like opening a tap and the water flows, but you have to be quick to catch them. Great write thank you for sharing
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Review of Bittersweet  
Review by andy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Bittersweet memories, sang Whitney Houston, echoed here in your writing. Lots of words are misused in everyday life, I believe Love is the biggest, misused many times. The pain in chest like you have had a car sitting on top of you I can relate to. Nice work , just don't try to be something for someone else, be it for yourself, if they care they will accept you as you are. keep writing
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Review of hurt  
Review by andy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good write and I think we sometimes mix friends up with colleagues. You will find people are envious of studious people and want to bring them down to make themselves look good. Be yourself and not an extension of anyone else, it's tough but worth it. Keep on writing.
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Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
That took me back a bit. Have felt the same on another site that has now collapsed taking all my poems with it. Hurt by trolls who actually rubbished my poems and that made me feel sad. Dusty Fog how many of those did I read when I was in the services. I get pulled up on this site for my lack of punctuation. I have not punctuated any of my poems so I must get some lessons, but it is necessary critique to make my writing better. thank you for popping by and for posting this piece and taking me back in time.
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Review of I HAD A FRIEND  
Review by andy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a good write ,good rhyme and flow. This poem is a reminder of what our fore fathers went through to give us freedom. Well penned piece good work.
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Review of Our Love  
Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo bravo bravo well penned love poem. I like this very much and it shows me I am not alone being blessed in a relationship. It is indeed a very precious thing to give love and receive it in return. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Super composition. The little folk get up to lots of mischief as can be seen here.the rhyming is good I write in Rhyme myself and have at times tried to break away but always return to my roots.Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Review of Mind Workers  
Review by andy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Cleverly constructed composition concerning Classical conditioning. Everything we read hear see and do leaves an imprint in our minds and thus our thoughts are guided by all sorts of input almost like an artists palette, colours coming together to form the picture. Very good piece.
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Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for popping by. there are many reasons for writing and not always for profit but extra cash is nice if not depended on. Writing is a great healer as sharing our stories with others can make us feel better by sharing and getting positive responses also increases our feeling of well being. Thank you for sharing your work with us all
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Review of Dear Daughter  
Review by andy
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very well penned such a good piece I especially like the bit at the end where you say you will take second place as like me you have taken first place for so long. Great write thank you for sharing
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Review by andy
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a clever use of Carols to create a story. there is no place like home and being with family at the holiday times is very special. Good write
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