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Review of Hope  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer input regarding how I felt after reading your piece.

I have reviewed, "Hope." Your writing brought back a lot of hope. It was well put together. I encourage you to keep writing; it will inspire others to have hope when going through struggles in life. I know that you inspired me. Keep up the great work!


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Pocket Watch  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening, Grace!

I reviewed your piece entitled, "Pocket Watch." I am not a professional reviewer but I can give you input into what I thought after reading it.

Guilt is a tough weight to carry around. Guilt can overcome us when we can free ourselves from it by turning to Our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. When we pray, we can feel relieved from that guilt and it won't have to weigh us down.

One doesn't need to keep checking to ensure that guilt is with us daily. I hope that you will continue to write. You were precise in explaining what guilt can do. I desire that you won't have to check a pocket watch to keep track of guilt. Once you can be free of guilt, a huge weight can be lifted. Break the chain that keeps you locked into it. You will be amazed at how much better you'll feel.

It is my sincere hope that my review has been a help to you.

Have many good days of happiness and health ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Spilled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I reviewed your piece entitled, "Spilled." I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer my input on how your piece made me feel and give you my best thoughts for a good review.

You have an excellent way of describing about the great depression. I could feel the emotion of what depression feels like. I have battled depression in my life since 1074 through 2006 having been diagnosed as having a Schizo-Affective Disorder. You have described the heaviness or darkness that depression can bring. It is a feeling that doesn't seem to go away, no matter how many times people have told us that by keeping busy, our depression will go away.

I hope that by now you have been feeling better. One thing is to believe in yourself and not let the depression keep you in a dark place. I encourage you to keep writing; I have found this to be a good tool for feeling better about ourselves. Keep your chin and head up; this can be not easy to do, but in time, we can be more accepting of going through it and know that we are okay. Taking the right kind of medication can do wonders for our mental health. I am taking Bupropion and Abilify. Abilify was like a miracle drug for me.

I am thinking positively that my review has helped you to feel better.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer, but I enjoyed reviewing your story, "Sergeant Gus and the Day of Joy." Your story brought a smile to my face and joy in my heart. It's hard to know what the military has to do in different situations. Gus seemed like a jolly soul who wanted to do the right thing. It seems like all of us should have the right to free speech, but it seems like there are those of us who get in trouble when we speak out.

Keep writing. This is a great story for anyone to read.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of New Year's Mood  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I enjoyed playing the word search "New Year's Mood". I was able to get all of the words. I hope that you will have a Happy New Year filled with many blessings, health, and smiles. I hope that you can have more Happy New Year's Days in the future.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Paul Ryan!

It took me a few attempts to find all the words for the grammar word search. I finally found all of them. Does this make me a grammar expert now? I wish. I still have a lot to learn about that.

I had fun looking up all the words. I encourage you to do more word searches; they do my brain a lot of good.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Penguins!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I found all the words in the word search about penguins. It was fascinating what the different breeds of penguins were. I enjoyed doing the search on the penguins. I like to watch penguins go on their journey; I am amazed at how far they travel.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey! I scored 5 right out of 10. That's better than I thought I would do. Thank You for the opportunity to take this quiz. I went on instinct and a hunch for the correct answer. I am in a learning mode. I like to take a quiz to find out how much I know. I encourage you to do more quizzes; you did a fantastic job on this one.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This puzzle was somewhat challenging with longer words to solve. I found all the words. I had fun. Thank you for the puzzle of the Proverbs 31 Women. The puzzle got me to think. I want to encourage you to do more puzzles like this one.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Mochoa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and hello, Darth Owl!

I am not a professional reviewer but will do my best to give you a good review. I have reviewed "Mochoa". This poem is well-written. The ending was said when a man asked another man to marry him. Later on, the other guy told him that he wasn't in love with him. Any break-up is hard and painful.

I am proud of the fact that you dare to share your story with the public. I encourage you to keep writing. I could feel the emotion of pain that you were trying to project. I could feel the tears that were held inside from a proposal that went wrong.

Overall, I could understand the reasons why you would want to run away. It's a feeling of disbelief and shock; the after-effects of having a broken heart. You could continue with the feeling(s) of how you felt (what was going through your head) when you were told that you weren't loved by him.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening and Hello, Amy Jo-Spooky Season is Here!

I got all the words solved in this puzzle. I had fun trying to find them; some were easier to find than others. I am learning new words, which is exciting! It's like searching for eggs and then putting them in the Easter Basket.

I like to find words; still, there are words that I am still trying to find, but, then again, I find the words and then give the writer an encouraging sign for them to continue going on with their work.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Wily, and Good evening!

I was able to get one out of two correct. I noticed that it was the same question. This may be a trick question. I gave a different answer to both. I was not sure how this quiz was going to go, but I was happy to get one out of two correct. I enjoyed taking your quiz; it got me to use my brain.

I want to encourage you to keep doing quizzes; you've done an excellent job. I want to send you many smiles and hugs for your effort to put this quiz together. Let them bless you tonight and continue throughout your future.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I scored 40 on this test. I enjoyed taking the test. I didn't think that I would do so well. Keep on writing quizzes. You've done a great job.
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Review of one piece quiz  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good Evening!

I got three corrections out of ten. I got brave and took this test to find out what I knew. I will not give up. I will try again at another time.

I encourage you to keep on doing quizzes.

Anna Marie Carlson
Preferred Author
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Review of SHADOW  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and Good evening, Kayden!

I am not a professional reviewer; however, I can give you feedback on anything that needs to be corrected and how your poem affected me.

My sister, not a twin, was not a happy camper when I came into the world, because of our parents being older. My dad was 56 when I was born and my mother was 39. Out of four siblings, my sister, who is the oldest, was 18 when I came along. My sister is 85 years old and I am 66. Since I was about 11 or 12 years old, I felt like I was the black sheep of the family. I can relate to the feeling of being the shadow because she hasn't been that nice.

Keep believing in yourself. You are a good person. Don't let anyone take you away from that. Give yourself a hug to remind you that you are special.

I encourage you to keep writing. I admire the courage you put forth in writing this poem.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening, George!

I scored a five on your quiz. I wish you the best in deciding a title for your project.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Celebrating WDC  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good evening!

I am excited. I took the "Celebrating Wdc" quiz and got eight out of ten correct. Not too shabby. I like taking these quizzes to help me know how much I learned. Most of the time I need to guess what the answer might be.

Keep up the fantastic job of putting these quizzes together. I appreciate your time in doing this.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi! I solved your puzzle and had a blast doing so. I appreciate the time and effort that you put into preparing this puzzle. Keep up the nice work! I enjoy learning by doing word searches and it keeps my brain active. It works out, especially when you're sixty-six years old like me.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have a total of 17 reviews so far. I need to know if I am posting it right before I go any further. I may have put one in twice.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Thanksgiving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning!

I completed another puzzle; this one was on Thanksgiving. Thanks again for the word searches.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning,

I solved your puzzle on Elemental Discovery. I remembered some of these terms when I took science in Middle School. I enjoy doing word searches. It keeps my mind active and alert. Keep on doing these puzzles. Keep on bringing them.

Anna Marie Carlson
Preferred Author

Keep smiling, you're doing great!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on what mistakes I may find that could be improved and how your story has affected me.

I edited all of the editing points to possibly make it sound better. I would suggest having a professional editor to do this. I decided to take a try at it. You can change it if you would like or leave it as is.

I enjoyed reading your story. I hope that this will bring a smile to your day today and in the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Unforgotten Souls  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on anything that I come across that may need to be corrected and how your story has affected me.

Your story was very interesting to read. I did not see any spelling errors. Even when people get to be 106 years old doesn't mean that someone didn't have a love life. It was sad that she lost Cristopher at 23 years old and David died after over eighty years. Christopher and David were happy together. She was asked by her great-great niece if she was poly. She never thought of that at the time. The three of them were all happy being together.

It's sad when someone is being shuffled into a nursing home. After my mom had to go to a nursing home, it was very sad. She had dementia. I remember my mother crying when I had to leave her. I know how that felt.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I can only imagine the sadness that the lady felt when her great-great niece was moving away to live with her fiancée.

Anna Marie Carlson
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Review of Farewell  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer you feedback on whether I noticed any mistakes that need to be corrected and how your story affected me.

This was an exceptional story about a man who played baseball for nineteen years playing for Denver. At an age of free agency and frequent trades, he never left the team and he was proud of the fact. He met his beautiful wife, Jessica there. He noticed that the clubhouse was empty when he walked in, turned on some music, and sat in front of his locker to relax. He noticed a small box on the top shelf; it was a box of Geritol. Dave, the clubhouse manager, laughed behind him. The baseball player said, "The jokes have already started" he said, laughing. It was hilarious and definitely what he needed to ease his nerves.

Joe Hardy, who had been with the club for ten years, said, "Hey, Jake, how are you feeling?" "I'm doing all right, Skip. Been here for a little while, kicking back and taking things in".

"Sports Network is here. They wanted him to ask Jake if he would like to be available for an interview before the game. Are you up for it? 'Not before the game. Tell them I'll give them as much time as they want after the game. They've been great with us. They'll understand."

The crowd got on their feet. He heard 46,000 people in unison saying, "Thank You, Jake. Thank You, Jake'.

At the end of the story, Jake plays a good one for his final game. This was a great way to say farewell to the game.

I encourage you to keep on writing. I'm confident that others will enjoy reading this too.

Have a great day and I hope that this brought you a smile.


Anna Marie Carlson
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, and good evening!

I am not a professional reviewer but I can offer feedback on how your story has affected me and point out any corrections that need to be made.

I enjoyed reading your story "Probable Circumstances Surrounding the Disappearance of the Vanishing Man". I saw no spelling errors in your story. I had some laughs when I read it and was embarrassed for Bob when he was doing an impromptu striptease dance.

At the beginning of your story, it tells of a seven-year-old boxer named Rosco, as he was sniffing about, he noticed a pair of pants with a brown belt. A man's collared shirt was noticed further off in the wood line. (I found that this was two words rather than one word).

Chapter Two tells that Bob Thompson was invited to a "Dress Backwards Party". He pulled a prank by wearing his clothes the right way around. The attendees were to dance the night away. Bob was beaming with pride about his prank.

Your story was well-written and very detailed. I encourage you to keep on with your writing. It was interesting to read.

I hope that you will be filled with smiles today and on into the future days ahead.


Anna Marie Carlson
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