Annie's (annie18) Reviews

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#4695714

Review of Short Shots: Official WDC Contest

Review by Annie

Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi

I really enjoy this competition and have entered it in the past.

Is there any way I can be sent a notification when there is a new "Short Shots" competition?

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#3853256

Review of Poem:A dilemma

Review by Annie

Rated: ASR | (4.0)

Good poem overall. Interesting subject matter. Rhyming was consistent.

Suggestions:
"I" should always be capitalized (you're important aren't you? :)
I strongly suggest you always read your written work back to yourself out loud. This way you can see any sentence structure needs fixing.
Also, with poems especially rhyming poems you should hear a certain rhythm to it, like in music. You may want to shorten some sentences to have a matching rhythm throughout the poem.

good job!

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#3852383

Review of Dreamer

Review by Annie

Rated: E | (4.0)

A few common phrases in the beginning, but progressed nicely.
I love the phrase "sensuous sin", very descriptive.

Well done!

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#3851689

Review of It's A Small World: Where are you from?

Review by Annie

Rated: E | (5.0)

People say go with your first thought, so when I read "where are you from", I immediately voted Australia. That's where I was born and raised. After I voted , I realized you probably meant where am I living now, which would be America (more than 25 years)!
I can only vote once........right?