I can see what you are trying to do here- just 'keep being you' and get those words to work for you! There is a nice touch with the imagine/compassion tie up. But you need to highlight these language insights with some kind of patterning of the lines.
Then you have got nascent rhyming with struggle/juggle but it is not followed up.
Try writing in strict rhyme, just for the practice. It will sensitize you to the potential of language expression.
Don't give up - keep going.
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