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Review of The Pink Dress  
Review by freespirit
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is so beautiful Lili J. ! The perfect fairy tale in a modern world, your story makes one think that even in today's difficult world one can pursue their passions and be happy too.


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Review of After It All  
Review by freespirit
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very poignant Mar Prax! In such few words, you have conveyed the entire premise to the point. The pain and the helplessness of the protagonist is very palpable. Bravo!


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Review of Heartburn  
Review by freespirit
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow,your poem Heartburn is absolutely real! It resonates with the sentiments of so many people, it's uncanny. The flow of words is very simple, yet so poignant. It's a very well written, touching poem. I hope you did win the contest.


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Review of Woman of War  
Review by freespirit
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello,
Your poem really tries to touch a very sensitive topic. Their is some problem with the language. For example, "My submarine don’t sink" isn't a very well formed sentence.
The part from "My submarine don’t sink" to "The round table has just one seat" is a little confusing for anyone who doesn't have a background to your story.
Despite this, it's a very heartfelt poem.
Good luck!
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Review by freespirit
Rated: E | (5.0)
Let me first say, bravo! I salute your spirit, your love and your understanding.
With this song, you have given a true message of hope, love and new beginnings.
It is always important to understand that though our sorrows make a deep impression on us, yet it is imperative that we learn to move forward with old memories and new.

The words in your song are absolutely honest and straight forward. They fill the reader with hope for a new stage in life. Perfect.


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Review by freespirit
Rated: E | (3.5)
The article touches very nicely on the love that we share with people around us, whom we ignore to appreciate. It could have been a little more concise, but the emotions expressed are lovely.
Keep up the good work.
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Review of Depression  
Review by freespirit
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tmtsaturn! You have captured the state of a depressed mind truly well.
I would suggest a little refinement in the comparisons - "security walls made of thick metals" can be better illustrated as "thick confining walls".
All the best, keep up the good work!
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