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Review of Going Home  
Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
HI frisco,

thank you for this story, i really liked it very much.

the story is beautifully simple and interesting at the same time.

you drew a very calming atmosphere that helped accepting the fact that here was a dying man experiencing his last minutes in a very peaceful way.

Well done.
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Review by Nokian M.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea, Thanks
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Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A beautiful scene that every thinking man must have been through at least once,

i love the language, the brevity of the story, the depth of the meaning, and the boldness of expression.

Bravo
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Review of Im That Girl!!  
Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Nathaly,

i like your honesty and frankness, and you touch on a very important motive, that is recognition. Everybody wishes openly or secretly to be recognized and admired for something.

Good Job & Keep Writing
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Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Jezine,

what a beautiful short story you've got here!!

i could feel your tension grow as you wrote it, and writing in the narrative tone, you made me believe that who wrote this had actually been through the whole experience.

Good Job & Keep Writing.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Tom,

This time i think you excelled. I have read "The Fun House" and i liked it but "The Sound" is even more developed in many ways.
i liked the pace most, also the characters, the leading character Fred Ryan who is both funny and smart but doesn't try to show off in any way, i like the funny tone of the accidents.
The theme is very interesting and at some points i was eating through words to know what happens next. And it made me laugh.
By all means, Keep writing Tom.

Thanks
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Nokian M.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Tom,

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