This was such a beautiful and moving poem. It almost brought me to tears. This is exactly how we should think about the end of something. Though it is a hard thing to do.
Wow, this was well written. It did have a few typos but if you re-read it then you will be able to see it. I really liked the imagery and world you created and the name Ginessa. How did you come up with that?
I look forward to reading more of this book.
Keep writing! 😊
Aw, the way the mother flaked out was so horrible. Elena is very blessed to have such kind and understanding grandparents though. One day the mom will probably regret it and the daughter will have the tough choice of whether or not she should forgive her mother.
I enjoyed this so much! It seems that a whole lot of people are forgetting that America was built on a dream and so many other incredible things were built on a dream. We can't forget to dream because it will squander our greatness and life will become mundane and mediocre. 😊
Wow, this was really brilliant! I can't wait to read more and I can totally relate about thunderstorms. I've been afraid of them for as long as I can remember.
Omg , I'm the exact same way with cockroaches. Eek! I'm not a big fan of spiders either though.... Back to your story though, I thought it was great and hilarious!
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