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Review of "Time Out"  
Review by Atticus
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think your punctuation needs work, but your ryhming is favorable. I quite enjoyed thinking of watching seasons change in your words. I can relate to your need for reprieve in this piece of work, and I hope the best for your relaxation. If not for form, I would have left off the last sentence.
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