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Review by anonymous
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
(Forgot the rating, sorry!)
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Review of Memory on a swing  
Review by anonymous
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a short but meaningful poem. However, I feel like the poem should have at least 10 lines, maybe even 5. Sometimes small poems mean the biggest things. I look forward to reading more of your work. (Please note that this is a writer to another writer.)

Sincerely,

Anonymous.





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Review by anonymous
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This an amazing contest. I would be honored to take place in it. Excuse my brain cells. I'm think of something already, not to gory, but a perfect fit for your description. I'm sure I'll be capable to fit into your requirements, but just in case I'll be reading everything at least 20x times. Thank you!
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Review of The Little Thief  
Review by anonymous
Rated: E | (5.0)
Spectacular. One suggestion, "Theresa" is mentioned throughout the story, and sometimes more than once in a sentence. For example, "Lucy looked at Theresa with eye brows furrowed, giving Theresa a look as though Theresa were nuts...-" Theresa is mentioned 3 times in a singular sentence, which isn't bad, but repetitive. Instead, you could use words like: girl, she, their. For example, the sentence could end up sounding like:

Lucy looked at her with eye brows furrowed, giving Theresa a look as though she were nuts...-

Overall, splendid story and brilliant title, 5 star review from me.
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