*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/awsomeanator1
Review Requests: ON
1 Public Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Awesomeanator
Rated: GC | (3.0)
I'm not quite sure how this is supposed to be an interactive with other people. With how it's structured and written, this story doesn't leave much for others to work with in all honesty. I give this a three, because there certainly is a lot of passion and effort here, but it's not rated higher due to difficulty to follow from the formatting and grammar, such as missing capitalization, incorrect punctuation, and cumbersome paragraphs that could be broken down into smaller paragraphs.

I know that as you keep writing, your style and ability is only going to improve, so keep at it!
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/awsomeanator1