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Review by Ayren
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very interesting, at first it was a little confusing and repetitive. I really like how it seemed to be one big extended metaphor though. It was a neat idea and you executed it well. The ending was quite good too. Congratulations on a well done, good job.
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Review of Milk  
Review by Ayren
Rated: E | (3.0)
Although I did think this this was a rather pointless poll I did get a real kick out of the options, kudos, they were hilarious. One thing I think you could do to improve it would be too have an: It okay or something like that option because it skips from "crap" to "good" nothing imbetween. Good Job, made me laugh.
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Review by Ayren
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked the concept of the piece because you always here the expression swallow your pride but these days with all the dirt and horrible disgusting things people are doing we could do to have a little more pride. Like I said I like the concept but your formatting disoriented me quite a bit. Other than that though, good job.
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Review of Potter Poll  
Review by Ayren
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good questions for getting more answers out of the poll, adding christian, not christian parts in there. IMHO Harry Potter promotes trust, friendship, Love, Kindness, all the same things the Bible teaches and the only witchcraft that is done for harmful purposes is by the bad guys and is clearly shown to be evil.
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