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Review Style
Still discovering it. I prefer to review only works that touch me in some way, or from writers I know want honest feedback to help improve their work, and I'm actually in a position to give it.
I'm good at...
Spotting grammar and mechanical errors... from a career as an English teacher. That said, there are those here who school me on intricacies I've never learnt about the language. Also better at reviewing stories than poetry, although it is exhausting to pick through a mistake-filled piece. I think I can give a fairly decent review on short stories, but I'm nowhere near the level of the best ones here.
Favorite Genres
Scifi, fantasy.
Least Favorite Genres
Non-fiction. Personal. Comedy.
Favorite Item Types
Static items & book entries containing stories and poems.
Least Favorite Item Types
None.
I will not review...
Haven't been asked to review something I regretted yet.
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Review of So When  
Review by Azrael Tseng
Rated: E | (4.0)
I was impressed by the flow and resonance of this poem. The subtle contrast in the first line kind of reminded me of The Matrix, where we think we're free (and from some perspectives we do enjoy certain freedoms) but we're ultimately still trapped by our lifetime.
The personification of Time in line 6 also stands out for me. I liked how you showed its nonchalance towards our efforts to count it, mark it, or otherwise exert some measure of control or influence over it ('mocked by the tic and the toc').
Line 9 too resonated with me, especially since I expressed a similar view about how the present becomes the past constantly in this monologue
 Color Me Gonzo  (GC)
The Life & Rant of Hunter S. Thompson.
#2109961 by Azrael Tseng
just a few days ago (not quite as poetically expressed as yours, and it's not a cheap ploy to get you to read one of my writings. Just in case you felt inclined to).
There's nothing I'd change about this poem - I like it just the way it is.
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