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Review of Earl's Sandwich  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story :A sandwich's autobiography, that was a really creative story . The description and the details surely makes the reader feel for the sandwich, hoping it survives the eating assault.

Likes : The way the movement of internals of the sandwhich is described is really funny.

Suggestions : No suggestions



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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really funny story, that too based in a real event. It's Not surpsising though that young kids saw something on BBC , they would assume it to be true. It's written really well, describing the details enough to give the reader a really good picture.


I just wonder can a TV channel today pull such a hoax and get away with it... there would be such a hue and cry on social media about it.

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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Story : A story of love for peanut butter and dislike for cooking. Cooling sure can get boring for some people, especially if one is not really good at it. It's nice the way the author has brought out the complete dislike towards cooking by detailing how he dislikes every part of the process.

Likes : The ending was a little surprise, and it closed the story well

Suggestions : The writing can be a little more descriptive to give the reader a better feel of what the speaker is feeling.

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Review of Turning Thirty  
Review by bas
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A very interesting tale of love of youth turning into a bad decision. The blindness of love in youth can lead tk so many wrong paths , which as mentioned in the story only hits us when we get older and thirty is surely one such age when realizaion of a lot thigs dawns on us.

Likes : The ending was really creative and unexpected, very well done.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really hilarious story , with Jeeves in Hogwarts. Both the characters have been presented exactly as they would behave and the story is entertaining right till the end.

Likes : The idea of using robot houseflies sure was a creative thought.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story : That is a really funny tale of a fight for possession. The funny ending really makes one wonder did he really win the case or it just appeared as if he won it .The story also keeps the suspense on till the end, which makes it a very good read.

Likes : The ending is really unexpected and well written.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review of Life Eternal  
Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story :A very interesting story about a choice being offered, to choose between life and death, but everything comes at a price which Brad failed to realize in time. The story is very well written and keeps the surprise hidden till the end .

Characters :Liked the way face of life was described,as if it had taken Brad's persona.


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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A description of the authors belief in God and his support to her at all times she needed it. In a period that has tested every one in someway or other, having a strong belief in someone , having the faith that you will be taken care of no matter what is so essential and I belive that is some thing that the generetaion today is starting to miss. The names might be different across the globe ,but everyone needs an anchor.

Suggestion: In the last line ->
can rest assured my anchor will

I think "be" is missing.


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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : That is a wonderful story detailing the search for the perfect coffee. The story builds really well before the hilarious truth of the coffee is revealed.

Likes : The way the owner makes sure that the customer buys the coffee was nice, the perfect way of marketting.


Guess we should be careful before we ask for recepies of exotic dishes *Laugh*

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Review by bas
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am reviewing this as a part of I write in 2021 .

Poem: A poem about the legend of a dragon and how they get formed . The poem flows well as a story and the words have been weaved well into the poem.

Likes : The ending is nice with ,dragons coming aid of downtrodden.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review of Completion  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Story :A story about an attempt to turn herself into a witch.The description makes the reader feel her desperation, making it a good read.

Characters : The surprise ending is nice, making the reader to want her to succeed.

Suggestions :
Just a typo who had seased -> who had ceased .

Do you plan to write a longer version of it ?

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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story : A tale of a brothers participating in a boat race . The description of the race is vivid and makes the reader get involved in it.

Likes : The ending was good, making the race seem like a family tradition.

Suggestions :May be if word limit allows, a little history about dad also being a racer could be added...just a thought.

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Review by bas
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Story : A horror story that unfolds in a scary desolate mansion . The detail description of the mansion adds well to the horror scene. Though it felt the ending left a lot to the readers imagination.

Likes : The falling book was a good attempt at distracting the reader before introducing the new character.

Suggestions : May be the story can be expanded after removing the word limit needed for the contest.

Thanks for sharing the item, enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Hide and See  
Review by bas
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story :A story about two kids and their attempt to hide a mischief.The banter between the kids is presented well, both trying to get rid of the wood.

Likes : The idea of sticking with superglue is hilarious and surely something that kids can come up with.

Suggestions :

Just a typo

brush along the trail. I guess you meanr bush along the trail

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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story : A tale of people stuck in a bar as a storm catches them off gaurd. The stories narrated by people to kill time are ramdom in nature,which is what one would expect in a random group of people.

Likes : The sprinkle of ghost in between makes the read interesting.

Suggestions : As a story may be some event or may be some history of ghost can be added so that the ending will make it seem a little more complete.

Thanks for sharing the item, enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Dear Me (2021)  
Review by bas
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story : A letter to yourself describing the struggles, dreams and what you are looking for in life. It's clear from the content that it is written from heart and is encouraging to read as you showcase the desire to succeed and your belief in yourself

Likes : Liked the part which describes that healing takes time, isn't it something we so often forget that wounds need time to heal and there is no magic bullet for it.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story : A chapter of sci fi story, describing the arrival and interaction of the characters on a different planet as a punishment.

Likes :The ending makes the reader want to know where do the characters go, keeping the story intersting.

Suggestions :No suggestions.

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Review by bas
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Story :A very interesting story about interaction between a digital Avatar and a human. The interaction has been presented really well and keeps the reader interested .

Likes : The ending puts across the message well that the real life will always take over and be of more importance than the digital life.

Suggestions :A few typos

her time has arrived. Like a ghost from another world, ....her time had arrived

his drained his cup to ....he drained his




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Review of Darkness  
Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Story : Description of anxiety, and how it can make everything seem so difficult. A problem that needs so much more attention from people, and yet is ignored is so many societies. The author has portrayed the feelings very well.

Likes : The reach out for help at the end is huge step in tackling anxiety I feel.The right words, support ,at the right time can make a lot of difference.

Suggestions : May be you can think of making it into a longer item with a little more on how it should be dealt with.

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Review of Toxic  
Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Story :A tale of going back to an ex who never cared and what realisation dawns on her . The emotions in story are presented very well, clearly showcasing that when we love we really can become blond to what other person is doing.The name too fits the story really well.

Likes : The ending where she says she still loves him,but adds the realisation to it .This is something a lot of us fail to do in real life.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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Review by bas
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Story :A detailed description of the scene where children are getting ready to get back to school after the summer break.Its a well observed description , including details of how the groups behave.

Characters : Like how the young boy and girl groups have been distinguished based on the group behaviour

Suggestions : No Suggestions.

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for entry "Divine Forest
Review by bas
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am reviewing this as part of I write 2021.

Poem : Poem Around the word Deciduous, it brings out the the beauty of lush green trees and wilderness. Breathing fresh air in a lush green forest can be refreshing,something that most of the city dwellers never experience i guess.

Likes : Branches heading towards heaven, can be related to the heavenly feeling that one can feel in the wilderness.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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for entry "Chapter One
Review by bas
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Story :A book around a fantasy world created by orbs and the struggle between the beings of the planet.The introduction sets up the story well , clearly setting up a reason for conflict, creating enough interest to read further.

likes : The detialed description of how the worlds got created from the orbs seemed well thought of.

Suggestions :
Just a typo.

her into consciousness ... I guess you meant into her consciousness




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Review by bas
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Story : A tale descibing a beautiful dream

Likes : A fairy coming out of the flower was a nice.

Suggestions :

A few typos ..


This places was : The place was

I took my hand and: As I moved my hands ....sounds better

like a wisps of smoke. : a is not needed


I began to wonder around the mystical forest.: I began to wander

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Review of I bid you welcome  
Review by bas
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Story :story of a unique or evolved host welcoming a guest into her house.The story is presented really well keeping the reader guessing and engaged all through. The details of the house included makes it good read. But the ending does leave somethings to readers imaginations.

Likes : Liked the way the statue was described with the surprise added with it.

Suggestions : No suggestions.

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