Wow... WOW!!! K5R - you just keep dragging me deeper in! This work is so engaging! Even the way you phrase the scenes and the action, show that you have a strong command of your Creative License! Keep this story coming!
I am enamoured with Joan! I await the next piece to this work.
Excellent piece! I'm not a gamer, myself; but you still kept the whole story interesting!
It seems those must be some familiar characters! I would probably enjoy reading more of their PolyAmourous exploits! If you would like, can you share a link to your other stories?