The story is off to a good start. It just needs to have more writers to join in and write it until it becomes known to every writer and author on this website. When that happens I will write every chapter I can till many more people know about it. It just needs more writers to help me and you out with it.
This story is one of my favorites. It is about some of my favorite characters from the pokemon series. Weight gain and pokemon are two of my favorite themes. If there are others like this one, then i don't want to know about them. This story better keep on going.
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