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Review by Benjamin Black
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfect.
So simple, yet so effective.
It gets very hot here in Australia, I love when the rain comes.


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Review by Benjamin Black
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good read.
What if aliens created us aeons ago and those Ancient Aliens guys were right all along and we are just an intergalactic zoo for their amusement.
How disappointed they must be to find that all we have managed to accomplish is the destruction of our own race.
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Review by Benjamin Black
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very interesting read.
Ghosts have always grabbed my attention but the question is what are they? Are they really the spirits of the dead or are they a residual memory imprinted into somewhere that gave meaning. Or are they just our minds playing tricks on us?
Maybe we will never know, but I do know there is more to this world then we can currently understand.
Personally, having lived in a house that I am convinced was haunted, as well as first hand accounts from family members and their own experiences, I can say, I do believe in ghosts.

There is a section "he told me quite calmly that he makes notes of all his calls in a dairy"
I think you mean diary.


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Review by Benjamin Black
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
There is a lesson to be learnt from this.
Don't be going digging up dead dogs.
I liked this story. Very well written.
The only this i will say is that in the title description should it be "a boy makes a discovery about his past" rather than " a boy makes a discover about his past?"
Other than that, and I may be wrong in that even, very well done.
As they say here, keep writing.
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