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Review of Parents  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello poet,
You have written a beautiful poem about parents. Rhythm is too good. Feeling blessed to read this poem. Even if we are left alone our parents will in our side. They will be the hidden reasons for all our victory.

Keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of Domination  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi poet,
nice poem.
Actually the topic dragged me to read this poem.
I came here to know your idea about domination, but you have placed that question as the opening to start the poem with curiosity.
Good poem. I wonder what is real domination for a person who was lonely and who cannot move or breath..

Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of Fire In the Pool  
Review by Bluebird
Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice poem,
Nature poem gives life to the nature
Through the wonderful words.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review of Magic Carpets  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Super poem of fantasy. I too wish to travel in the magical carpet. This poem has the wonderful message..
The flow of the poem is neat and beautiful. You must be the talented poet. Our mind can take us to the different places, in our shortest life.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review by Bluebird
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
I enjoyed your poetry, it is too good. Poem with flow and rhythm makes poems good.
Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of Thunder Storm  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,
I am glad to read your poem thunderstorm. This poem is perfect with rhythm and rhyme. Punctuation helps to match the rhythm..

Rain will make farmers happy because their crops will grow. I love the last two lines of poem.....you flow of writing makes the poem glow.
keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of Corona  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,

Today's reality.
It may be our karma or it may be crime of some dimwits. Most of the humans are struggling due to corona or because of Its effects on economy.

Poem ends with beautiful message :
We have to kneel down toward god to get rid of it.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review of The Other Side  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello,
It seems you are a witty writer.
Well written poem. Yet the poem is short, I feel like it is talking to me.
I do see the other side of light like that moth. Superb poem. Your muse has given you the blessings of beautiful words.
Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of Strings  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello,
Your poem is nice, expresses the grief and agony of your heart.
Every humans have these feelings, your poem speaks directly to my heart.

Such a beautiful poem in free verse, letting out the sadness and pain through poem is good choice because it can speak to various hearts.

Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of A Bear in a Storm  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem,
Characters differs according to person.
You showed that contrast with the characters of bears.
Poem is written in free verse.
Rhythm and flow of writing is too good.
Conclusion with message it makes poem pretty.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review by Bluebird
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

The seeking of beauty, poem is really beautiful.
Keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of Dawn  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem,
Even though it is short poem of four lines. It explains the beauty of sunrise. Simple flow of writing yet captures nature.

Keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of Still Time  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
Your poem is realistic.
Of course if we clean out a old house, memories as well as old things will peep out to grab our feelings.

Feelings in this poem is quite natural.

Rhythm and punctuation makes the poem more clear and beautiful.
Each room carries various emotions.

Keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of Through the Fear  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem,
I could feel your expression and feelings in this poem. Some times we will feel depressed and discourage, if we endure it for the time being it will lead us in the right path.

You are strong because you lifted yourself after you are discouraged.

Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Super poem,
Soothing words, flow of the poem is simple to understand, yet it has deep thoughts and motivation. Success and failure is common. We can learn many things from it. This poem is a motivation poem. Some truth may be bitter and annoying. Thank you for sharing the true meaning of life.

Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of The Lighthouse  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have penned a wonderful poem.

The light house poem deals with hope and love. I love this poem personally. Comparison in this poem is really beautiful. Actually while I am reading this poem, it plays like a movie in my mind.

Keep writing,
Blue bird.
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Review of The love of God  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice spritual poem,
I am blessed to read this spiritual poem. Flow of your poem is simple, easy to understand, I could feel your love towards god. Yes he gave his life for every humans. Your muse has taken you towards sprituality. You love toward god will bring you more blessings.

Keep writing,
Blue bird
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Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice Acrostic poem,
Your poem is with simple theme and deep emotion, explanation about how love turns to hate is really wonderful. I enjoyed your poem. Your flow of words are really superb. Hate comes after misunderstanding. Your nailed with your explanation.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review by Bluebird
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovable poem,

Your love must be strong. I don't have experience in love, your pretty words moved my heart. You have penned your feelings with beautiful words of love. I am happy to read your poem. Thank you for letting me to read this wonderful poem.

Keep writing
Blue bird
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Review of A Dying Planet  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful poem,

This poem spoke with my heart and I personally loved it. You have expressed your feelings and emotions in this poem. Of course you are right, We will be ignored in many ways in this world.
But who cares, ignore them live happily with a smile. If you start achieving they will definitely look at you.


Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of BEAR DANCE  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice poem,
Firstly, tittle of this poem grabbed my attention. I am so glad to read this poem. Flow of the poem is really nice. I do have some curiosities like the small kids. Even when I was kid, I too had such thoughts to play with animals and birds. I hope your poem must be liked by lot of children.

Keep writing
Blue bird.
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Review of INSANE IN LOVE  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful poem,
Love is immortal, heart and soul fully get immersed in this wonderful emotion. It may give pain or peace.

Keep writing,
Blue bird
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Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for making me smile.

You amazed me with your work. I didn't expect this travel in this bright daylight. I cannot afford much for my travel but your work took me out of this planet without any cash.
Really your words have so much power in it. I love the way you have written. Even within a second I met a alien but appearance is just like a human floating with weird expression. As you told everything is fair in fantasy. Going near the stars and touching it, really amazing experience. Yet it is little possible in reality. I wish I can stay there for a while. Thank you for letting me read this work.

Keep writing,
Blue bird


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Review of Just A Baby  
Review by Bluebird
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem 'just a baby' expresses the reality of the world.
Starting lines portrays a innocent baby who learns from the surroundings, yet the baby is unaware of the world because the baby was naive.

This poem can be related to the true reality, just born baby learns and imitates her parents and siblings.

Just born baby doesn't know anything about the world. It falls for the small tricks and sticks to the temporary happiness.

As the baby doesn't know what is world, what is pain or what is life, she live on the temporary happiness until it enters the real world of various emotions.

Superb poem
Keep penning,
Blue bird


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