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Review of The Big Bully  
Review by BGood
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great read, Dweeb! ;)
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Review of Strange Storms  
Review by BGood
Rated: E | (3.0)
Feel like your vernacular style shined in the last few sentences. Take a glance through that part and see if you can't add some of that to your beginning. Nice little inner monologue and as some strong symbolism. Keep writing!
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Review by BGood
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Nice simple little from a dad to his son. The message is to he point. Wish I knew some background into how he managed to become incarcerated. Some spelling and grammar issues, but overall it is a great piece of micro fiction. Keep writing!
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