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I will copy all of your mistakes for you to see so, that you can correct them. I am kind and supportive, but will be honest about what I think it is lacking. I love reviewing poetry and short stories mainly. I will review anything though. I will always lift you up and never tear you down. You will find inspiration in my reviews.
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Poetry, short story, and novels or novella reviews, but will review anything. I need the experience.
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Christian, poetry, romance, fight for survival kind of novels. I like short stories a lot about anything. Horror, thrillers, and just about anything else is on my list of what I will review.
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Anti-Christian material.
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Christian romance, Christian inspiration.
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anti-Christian material,erotica, gay/lesbian,
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I will review anything to broaden my horizons.
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Review of Annie  
Rated: E | (1.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" Hi You are being reviewed by a newbie and a member of The Paper Doll Gang!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: Anything could happen in that little frame of words and it did here. I am a bit confused as to what exactly happened to her, but I can see that death set her free and from what I gather she was "stiff as petrified wood" meaning she had a disease that stiffened her or she was in an accident like a flood of some sort that might have injured her. I can sit here and speculate all day and I'd like to, but I guess you wanted to leave us hanging and you did a great job of it. You wrote a good piece. It needs a few areas reworked and it has some errors, but they will be easy enough to fix.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. The character was scared most of the story until the very end when she died. I hated to see that happen because she was finally set from whatever had bound her. .

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.

*Flowery* Favorite part: When she was set free in the end.


*ThumbsUp*Summary: She suffered, apparently, a lot and for that I am sorry. I feel bad for characters that are made up because somewhere on this planet is someone who has lived that life you have just made up or one close to it. People just don't think about that person until they read about them in your book. I felt for Annie and I am glad she has gone to be with the Lord. She is not suffering anymore.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this.
Annie screamed out loud. "Why?" screamed Annie? (Annie screamed out twice)
"Oh, Buster...my passed is gone." (my past is gone)


Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

*PoseyV* NOTE: Once the errors are corrected I will be happy to change the rating score to a better one if you will contact me about it. Anything to help out a fellow writer. Keep on Writing!

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Review of The Reaper  
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie and a member of The Paper Doll Gang!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: Anything could happen in that little frame of words and it did. I loved this piece. It is a fascinating story and deserves a ribbon which is what I will give it today. You are an excellent writer.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. You set just the right tone and followed it up with a great mood of what looked like just a lazy summer days story kind of reading turned into a great little mystery and ghost story.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers. I can only hope to become a writer half as good as you. You caused me to be moved because I have a fascination about death and struggle with it. I don't come to the same conclusions your characters did, but it moved me when they did come to theirs because I recognized their struggles.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: You gave me hints and clues throughout the story about what he was, but I never saw them for what they were because I was too focused on the death of it all. I don't know if he was an angel, the death angel, or a ghost, but you created a great character. Both of your characters were well thought out and described. Your story was well written and your plot was dead on. I am impressed with your work. I hope to see a book from you one day. If you already have one please let me know so I can go buy it and read it.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am a member of the 30-day bloggers challenge and want to be a member of the group as well. I love being apart of this group of people.
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In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie and a member of The Paper Doll Gang! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I was a little lost at first, but in the end I was set to rights. I believe this to be from the heart about your mother. She must be a wonderful and caring woman to deserve a poem of this caliber.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: The tone and mood was refreshing. It was cloaked in love.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: Poems are suppose to bring out emotion and this certainly did. I can only hope I can live up to a poem like this someday. I believe I have, but we shall see. None of my boys are poets though. I do have a mother though and I would love to present her with something like this one day. It made my heart skip a beat.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems except it has no punctuation. I believe all poems should have punctuation of some kind. It tells us where to pause and take a breath. Where to hold and where to start. It is important.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!


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Review of The Pit  
In affiliation with The Rockin' Reviewers  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie and a member of The Paper Doll Gang!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: Anything could happen in that little frame of words and it did. I am impressed with your vocabulary in this short but sad story. I feel for the man or woman. He is lost in this world and no one can see the pain he is in. They ask him about their own worries and don't give a second thought to the fact that he is losing grip on hope. I feel his cry reverberate through the pages of this story.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It is a sorrowful mood to say the least. He is in deed without hope and he is crying, maybe silently, but crying out for help only to get none.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: He is lost and no one can help him, not even himself. He is over loaded with thoughts that are burying him in this pit. You did such an amazing job of writing this. I am impressed.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Review of Cariad  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I don't read fantasy, but I fear I have been missing out. I am quite intrigued. This story has me wondering and hoping for a girl I don't know. This fantasy stuff sure seems interesting. Seems like anything could happen in that little frame of words.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was brutal and revealing. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I only see this problem:

'Of course, master, I will gather the others immediately.' The man rose, moving

the greasy black hair from his carbon coloured eyes. (sentence did not line up. You hit enter too early.)


*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the officer and the new officer that just joined the force. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You won a poetry review from me for your win in Genre auction and fundraiser! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: Now this one is my favorite. I searched all of your work until I found the perfect one and guess what! It can be Christian! The friend you are missing could be Jesus. I love this poem and will remember It above many others I have ever read. After speaking to you, you said none of your work was traditionally Christian, but now you can say that you have one that is if you want to go that route. I'd be proud to have this in my port so, I hope you enter it in as many contest as you can.


*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is like a young boy walking through a field with woods near by and a stream and he is talking to Jesus. He has a lot going on in his little life and he feels that Jesus isn't listening or answering any of his prayers. It makes me sad. I want to take that little boy and hug him and tell him that Jesus will always be there no matter what we are going through. I like your tone. It is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: I had this overwhelming feeling of being lost while reading this poem because I know what it is to be lost and separate from God. I want to reach into that poem and hug that little boy and tell him that it would all work out or is it myself that I am seeing so clearly? I did feel lost and alone reading it.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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Review of Is It Worth It?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are the winner of The Genre Auction and Fundraiser bid! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be very reflective and honest. You poured out your soul in this piece and it shines through. It is worth it? You show the reader that it is. Even through the tough times it is worth it and even when we question whether it is worth it we find out it was worth it. Even in the end when the truth matters more than anything else in the world, it was still worth it. What a feeling it must have felt to be that man and know that no matter what He mattered to his mom through it all no matter how difficult it got and now he knows for sure that he will be able to go on making it matter to him when it comes to his daughter. What a legacy.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood intense yet reflective and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me and on others that read it. It has to. It is a legacy being left by generations of people all around the world. If it didn't matter or if it wasn't worth it they would never have more than one child and would walk away during the hardest times of that child's life. So, yes this has emotional impact and I'd have to say it has a big one. It means so much to so many.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You won the Genre Auction and Fundraising bid! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be heart warming and moving. I can tell you love your mother. I like the way you described the love and need of different kinds without having to go into great detail. You went into detail without having to use very many words. I fell in love with this one. I wish it were one I could have written for my own mother. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little hopeful and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very heartwarming feeling to the poem. We need to know that our parents will forever be there no matter what the circumstances are. We need that bond to continue even into death. Our bonds were created with our parents before life as eggs In our mother's womb with a continuous desire to always be the next in line to be picked to be the next born or as sperm hoping to be the next in line there as well. It is a very emotional journey. Like this journey, poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I think this is a description of what our brains can sometimes do to our bodies. We are safe, but the slightest of noises and we think we are dead. It is amazing what your subconscious will do to you as well. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is fun and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very frightening effect on you. You worry for the girl until the end. It messes with your emotions. Poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression:I was hooked from the beginning. I don't have any thing that I can say was the real hook, but you write so well that I was pulled into what I considered to be a great story. Henley seems like a nice enough girl, but she reminds me of the snobs I went to school with. You gave me no indication of this yet this is what I felt. I like her, but only because I haven't figured out whether she is that snob yet or not Anything could happen in that little frame of words.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was reflective and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused want to read about Henley. To get to know her story no matter my personal opinion and that is no small fete. That is what we strive for as writers.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I think that you could make a story out of this and have. I plan on reading more of your chapters.When I talk about story, I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I am thrilled that you would interview Miss Jane. It went well didn't it. I wonder if it would have gone so smoothly if you had actually met with her. She seemed like a reasonable woman and can see past someone's money to see their soul. I think that makes a great writer. Being so perceptive is what makes you or breaks you as a writer. I could be wrong, but we will have to see when we really meet Miss Jane when we get to heaven.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was direct and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate as to what it would be like to interview some of the greats from that era. You didn't get published back then unless you knew what you were doing. It was a great read. I enjoyed your interview..

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others. Thanks for doing this. It is fun and well, just fun to read. To see your dream play out so well on written paper is magnificent.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am bipolar and I have a couple of people that support me, but most think I am just putting on a show or trying to get attention. My brother thinks it is all related to money. When you have money you are up and when you are broke you are down. I quit trying to get emotional support from my family and friends. I have my husband and my mom and that is it. I do feel all alone most of the time. I want to print out what you said and give it to my kids and the rest of my family and friends. I don't "technically" consider myself as having friends because a friend supports you. I have one like the one you described and she doesn't mind talking about the negative stuff as long as she is doing the talking, but when I do it is drama. I go to a support group, but I am already sick of it. They don't seem to be listening (really listening) and I just don't feel comfortable with that group. I wish you all the best and will remember you in my thoughts and prayers.

God bless
Billie
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be dark and depressing, but I think you were going for that. It sounded more like a letter to yourself than a poem, but some poems are letters to ourselves so, I wouldn't worry about it much. It needs a little work. Fewer words with more of an impact. It has great meaning, but it could have such a more impact with fewer words if you work on it a bit more.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little sad and depressing and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very worrying effect on people. Worry for you and pity. I prayed this isn't really about you and just about someone you know or just your imagination.It brings out emotion, but poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see these problems.
Could it be an annoy face? (should be "annoyed")
Would the people whom I loved dearly left me alone, confused in this creepy world? (should be " leave me alone")
But I always ended up behaved in poor manners, (doesn't make sense)

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is beautiful. I love it. No wonder it is your inspiration it would be mine as well and is. Thank you for sharing it.
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Review of Ask and Answer  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This is fascinating. I had no idea, until The Challenge, that Campfire Creatives even existed. I don't like the idea that you have to be invited to play along though. Some people get looked over that way.
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Review of The Jigsaw  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression:It could be anything. Anything could happen in that little frame of words. What happens is all up to you and I hope you have something great to fill in the blank with. It sounds like a very interesting story. Maybe her parents were vampires or her parents are gay. It could be anything. Maybe she is a werewolf. I can't wait to see what it is.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was reflective and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the officer and the new officer that just joined the force. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be funny, then exciting, then sad. You have my emotions all over the place with this one. It is good, but it saddens me to see a dog die. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little all over the place in a good way and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very sporadic emotional effect on people. However, poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I was a little lost at first, but you set me on the right path pretty quickly. I noticed in the beginning there were a couple of words left out, but it did not take away much from what I was reading. I agree with you that it all starts with you. I am going through emotional and physical pain right now ad can relate. With what you wrote anything could happen in that little frame of words. I mean that in a good way.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was reflective and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see only a couple of problems. You are missing "Pain, it can BE emotional or phyiscal" and "Us humans do" isn't a correct sentence. It has to have a noun and a verb..

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: This is definitely a cynical view on life, but at least the character does find beauty in some things. It is heart-wrenching to know people out there do think this way. I found that you did a great job getting this viewpoint across. It was clearly understood from the get go.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was reflective and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the officer and the new officer that just joined the force. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this that show the different sides of the coin.

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Review of Stone Fences  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be one of the most interesting poems I have ever read. I like the style and the way the grandfather spoke about his farm and his crop of rocks that built his fences and his family. It is a real prize and I bet this is from your own experience because it is written in a loving way. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is so fulfilling and memorable. The tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very soothing effect on people because,we love our families and how they were put together and what brought us together. It is a great poem. It brings out emotion. Poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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Review of Random Quiz  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very funny quiz. I like it. Do you make more of these kinds of quizzes?
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Review of Enemy Territory  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I am impressed with the turn out of the story and how well it was written. Cutos to you for doing such a great job. I can imagine myself in his shoes. I can imagine being in that situation because you brought it to life for me. I am hooked and that is the one thing writers want is that hook and you have it with this character and his situation.

*ThumbsUp* Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was exciting and scary all at the same time. . It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to worry for the poor guy. I was hoping and praying right along with him. That is what we strive for as writers.

*ThumbsUp* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the solider and his situation. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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Review of Unknown  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I was a little lost at first, but you set me on the right path pretty quickly. I can only hope this didn't happen to you and that you thought this up for the writing. I hate to think of what "put her in her place" entails. Anything could happen in that little frame of words. It did just drop off with out a hint as to a future or even a period. I have to believe you were not ready for this to be reviewed, but it is being reviewed. I did that a couple of times. Worked on a piece and saved it only to not be ready for the reviews I got. It was incomplete.

Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It was reflective and honest. It revealed a lot in a few words.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention.I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would work on this and make a complete story out of it. It has potential.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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Review of Shopping  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be a great mood lifter. I can tell you like to shop with your mother. I like the way you described the material on the dresses without having to go into great detail. You did a great job with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little relaxing and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very soothing effect on people because, we women, love to shop and it relaxes us. Poems are suppose to bring out emotion..

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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