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Review Style
I will copy all of your mistakes for you to see so, that you can correct them. I am kind and supportive, but will be honest about what I think it is lacking. I love reviewing poetry and short stories mainly. I will review anything though. I will always lift you up and never tear you down. You will find inspiration in my reviews.
I'm good at...
Poetry, short story, and novels or novella reviews, but will review anything. I need the experience.
Favorite Genres
Christian, poetry, romance, fight for survival kind of novels. I like short stories a lot about anything. Horror, thrillers, and just about anything else is on my list of what I will review.
Least Favorite Genres
Anti-Christian material.
Favorite Item Types
Christian romance, Christian inspiration.
Least Favorite Item Types
anti-Christian material,erotica, gay/lesbian,
I will not review...
I will review anything to broaden my horizons.
Public Reviews
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is BillieGail memory of Cheyenne . I am glad you liked my prompt. I had been thinking about what I'd pick if I got to pick and I am glad I picked this one because everyone really had a good time with it. I read some of the stories of how life would change for them, but mostly people like to have it the way they have it now. Thanks for your take on it and I found it very interesting.
Billiegail
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I hate to review this like a regular review so, I'm not going to. I was so saddened by this that I cried. I have never gone through something so tragic as this, but a friend of mine did and it is one of the hardest things to deal with. I have had cancer and the scare is horrific. I can imagine the feelings you had to have had having to tell your family, who has suffered much, about your news. It had to be heart-wrenching.

Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood.Such a sad mood, but joyful of beating cancer.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to cry. I can only hope you have faith in God because, in my eyes, He is your saving grace.

*ThumbsUp*Summary:

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I am feeling so bad for you for your loss. To think you never wanted children to end up wanting them after such a loss. At least that is what I got out of this letter. I feel for you and your family.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. It gave me hope for a better future being a cancer survivor myself. Maybe there is hope for others. The more people beat cancer the more we understand it and can fight it..

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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Review of Tea  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my goodness. What was it? This could make for a very interesting book or short story. I would like to see an expansion. You did a great job with the story. I was expecting something totally different. I thought the husband was dead only to have her die in the end. How tragic.
You have talent with this sort of thing though. Great job.
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This has heart. It has soul. It comes from somewhere inside a person that others can only see by getting to know you and perceiving it. This is a letter that is written out of an unselfish love for another human being that you love without cause or condition, but may not be in love with. You speak to her with that kind of love. I could write a letter like this to an old boyfriend of mine that I love without cause or condition, but it just didn't work out between us because we were unequally yoked. This is beautiful and worth reading. You did an amazing job of getting your point across and putting emotion into it. I am sold on this letter.
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am awed by your letter to the Catholic church. I did a research paper on this very subject in college and got an A. I wish I had your letter to research at the time however. It is full of truth and conviction. I am impressed with your love for the church and its people. You have expressed it clear enough here. I believe you should send this to the Pope because he needs to hear the truth from people just like you and me. We are clear on what the bible tells us about praying to Mary and to angels. I believe in angels, but not like the Catholic church believes in them. I believe, like you do, that we have guardian angels and that they do the work of the Father and that they can fall just like satan did.
I say hooray to your speech to your letter. I back you 100%. Thank you for writing it and I pray Catholics everywhere will read this and have a revelation.
God bless you.
Billiegail
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Review of The Bride  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: Shocked! Was this for the 55 and under story contest?

Tone & Mood: The mood was blissful in the beginning and ended shockingly.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt for the officer and the new officer that just joined the force. I was completely sucked in and thought that you could make a story out of this. I mean a long story like a novel or novella.

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this. There is something to the story. I have to ask Why? oh why? did he shoot his intended bride?

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there! *PoseyR* "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie!*Blush*

*ThumbsUp*Personal Impression: I am a fisherwoman and a boatswoman as well so, I know a thing or two about them. I loved your descriptions of the boats.

Tone & Mood: Great tone and mood. It has a great mood of wonder. You wonder about the boats life history which is something that goes through the mind of nearly everyone that sees a boat for the first time.

*ThumbsUp* Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate. That is what we strive for as writers.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*ThumbsUp*Summary: Your overall story was well presented and held my attention. I felt the wonder you were describing .

*ThumbsUp*Overall: I would recommend this to others and buy the book if you wrote it because I think you would do well to make a book out of this. There is something to a boats history.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this story. Please keep on writing more stories just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and I loved that it is about God with great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a wispy and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like I was being spoken to by the voice of God. My own inner voice knowing it is from God that this voice comes from. Poems are suppose to do that.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

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Review of My Psalm  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and so psalms like, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is uplifting, honest, pure and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like I was reading a psalms out of the bibile. It made me really feel something. Poems are suppose to do that.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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Review of Indecision  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be the question we all ask ourselves at one time or another, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a questioning mood a wondering mood and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It makes me ask those same questions in the here and now. Poem are suppose to do that.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

PS I see no reason why it needs any more tweeking.

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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and personal, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is uplifting and spiritual and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like I would like to have had two mothers. I felt every emotion your poem expressed. Poems are suppose to do that.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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In affiliation with Blog City ~ Every Blogger'...  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
I'm not either. All of mine ended up in a braw.
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for entry "Bar Talk" 
In affiliation with Blog City ~ Every Blogger'...  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So very entertaining.! We have such a talented group of bloggers at Blog City. You write very well.
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Review of Mirror  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and somewhat dark, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little depressing and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like the person looking in the mirror hates herself or her life. She once glowed, beautiful, and happy. Now, she is filled with self-loath. I hate to see that in a person and I hope it is not yourself that is in the mirror. It is filled with emotion though. It makes you wonder what happened to this girl who is now filled with self-loathing. Poems are suppose to do that.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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Review of Lost In Paradise  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and sad, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is a little saddening and the tone is good and solid.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I sometimes feel like I am stuck between Heaven and Earth forgotten. Poems are suppose to do that though. They are suppose to make us stop and think or feel.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!

*BalloonR*WelcometoWDC "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! *Blush*

*FlowerT* Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and somewhat dark, but great meaning and great use of the language.

*FlowerR*Tone & Mood: Mood is dark, but it is surreal as well. It speaks the truth.

*FlowerP* Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like I you were talking about bipolar for a minute there. I feel like I am wearing a mask that is the sun to everyone else, but I am really the thunderstorm that I am most comfortable with.

*FlowerV* Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

*Flowerw* Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! (A newbie you know!)

Personal Impression: I found this to be deep and somewhat dark, but great meaning and great use of the language.

Tone & Mood: Mood is a surreal and the tone is good and solid.

Emotional Impact: It has a very emotional impact on me. I felt like It was written for me at one time in my life. It saddened me and made me really FEEL something for the writer (you), but poems are suppose to do that.

Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!
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Review of Silence  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi there! "Gasp!" You are being reviewed by a newbie! I
Personal Impression: I found it to be depressing because your mom has passed on and you seem to need her. It is a great piece of work though and you should be proud.
Tone & Mood: Mood is a little depressing and the tone is good and solid.
Emotional Impact: You caused me to wonder and speculate until the end.
Grammar/Punctuation: You did an excellent job with this. I see no problems.
Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and
I truly did enjoy this poem. Please keep on writing more poems just like this!
Summary: Your overall poem was well presented and held my attention. I felt for you personally. You build the suspense and hooked me with "You responded with not one word". I didn't know how it would turn out. I didn't know if she was mad at you or if she had passed on. You did a great job.
Overall: I would recommend this to others and there is something about the poem that tugged at my heart strings. You are a good writer from the looks of things.
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Review of Bite of Vengeance  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was too funny. I had no idea it was a dog until the very end. How ingenious of you.
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Review of The Song of Life  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is beautiful and beautifully written. Paints a gorgeous picture of mother earth. Great job.
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Review of Snow Melt  
In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
too funny
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In affiliation with 30-Day Bloggers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That made me laugh. thanks for sharing.
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a beautiful job of this. I love it. I love the "The weathered pages stained with age" part the most. It says something about time and what happens in time. It is like a love letter. I love it.
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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (2.0)
I don't want to sound rude because I am not trying to be but, it didn't really seem to make much sense to me but, then again poems don't make much sense. I loved parts of it and wondered at the other parts. How is sunshine the answer to it all? What did it do? That is what confused me most.
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I agree with your summation of what poetry isn't but, it doesn't make it poetry. It makes it prose, at least that is what I am told anyway. I write like you do for the most part (in prose) and call it poetry but, others disagree with me. I liked it though. Keep on writing.
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