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Review of roses  
Review by Amisha Patel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, PoeticFox,
I really like this twist on a classic. I've heard lots of twists of it but this one is much better than the original, because it combines both humor and the romantic side. And you just need to add space between "blue" and "this" .
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Review of Forgiveness  
Review by Amisha Patel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,
I really like this poem for several reasons, it is quite inspiring and really speaks out. the rhyming pattern is very good and each stanza has it own reason why forgiveness is good. the poem really speaks out about what you believe and how god is very forgiving.
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Review by Amisha Patel
Rated: E | (5.0)
hi Alfred,
I really like this poem it really captures emotions through the use of metaphors. Just one thing is that every letter at the beginning of a new line needs a capital letter. I really like the use of nature in this poem because it helps build up a picture in the readers mind.
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Review of Dreamcatcher  
Review by Amisha Patel
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I really like this story because it is something everyone can relate to (everyone has dreams and nightmares) and the added twist makes it creepy, that you think this could be a possibility. it is well written since it is quite difficult to tell a story in such short amount of words
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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Amisha Patel
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Ok, i really like this story even though I'm not a huge fan of horror, it as very well written, even though it was a bit of a slow start , but that built up to the suspense of it being quite scary. I have to say i was not surprised that the 2 other characters (Becky and Jhonny) died, it was expected, and it isn't the most original idea. maybe everything goes well inside the fun house, so they invite more friends the next day, and that's when it become scary and starts killing people? I enjoyed it though :)
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