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56 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
I like to give a positive comment or more. I also like to look for errors, punctuation or misspellings and will let the author know.
I'm good at...
Finding misspellings or punctuation errors.
Favorite Genres
fiction, fantasy
Least Favorite Genres
horror, mystery
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I will not review...
horror or mystery or fetish type stories.
Public Reviews
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Review of True Friends  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
         The author wrote about how true friends are like. The author done well because I wanted to read the entire poem to find out more. The poem didn't rhyme but it was good the way it was written nevertheless.

         There were no errors. I didn't notice any misspellings. The punctuation was used well too.
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Review of Little Cloud  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote about the life of a cloud. I liked how he/she wrote making the cloud speak to the reader. The poem flowed well.

There were no errors I noticed. Everything seemed to be spelled correctly. There was proper use of punctuation.
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Review of Glimpses of Light  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote about the light in a beautiful way. It was written very well. The author painted a picture in my mind with his/her words which I enjoyed.

The punctuation seemed to be missing but each paragraph was written well nevertheless. There were no misspellings. The only two things I noticed were the following sentences need to be capitalized to match all of the others:

the memory of the start of the day

that is bigger
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Review of Duckweed  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
         The author wrote a great small true story. I loved reading this! It kept my attention until the very last line.

         One major thing that I noticed in this poem that there wasn't any punctuation that was used. There were no misspellings. The poem story flowed very well.

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Review of Double Rainbow  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote a good small story. I liked how the author described it so well. It kept my attention until the end. I wonder what Luck was? Was it a cat or dog?

There were no errors that I noticed. Everything was spelled correctly. I thought the punctuation was used well too.
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Review of Bloom  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote a refreshing little story. It was very descriptive which was great. I read it until the end to find out what the author was talking about and made me think it was a human but was something else entirely different which was good.

There were no misspellings, no errors. Punctuation was used well. The story flowed great too.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
         The author wrote a highly detailed story which I liked. I also liked the flowing stated sentence, “They hurried past the newsagent's store just as the southwest wind arrived, bringing with it the first of the large, bone-chilling raindrops that splashed down on the pavement with such force that they burst into millions of tiny droplets resembling that of many miniature water fountains.” I love the use of details in the story.

         I did not notice any misspellings or errors. The story flowed well too. Use of punctuation seemed to be fine also.

         The only thing I wanted to read was more information about the artifacts. The author did include information but I wanted to know more. Maybe if the color was included or the shape would help. Overall, the story is great so far.
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Review of Wild nature tames  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author writes about flowers and rolling hills. The title caught my attention. It made me want to read all of it.

I didn’t notice any errors. The lack of punctuation makes what the author writes flow like the hills which is a nice touch to his or her writing masterpiece. The writing helped me see the flowers and rolling hills which is great.
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Review of Arthur Moon  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author writes about the moon talking to a child. The title caught my attention. I read this until the end to find out more.

I didn’t notice any errors. The writing flowed and what was said made sense to me. The moon is like the children’s guardian which I think is neat.


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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote about being at the beach and what the beach does for he/she in positive ways. The first and last lines of each paragraph were repeated which I liked. The poem kept my interest until the very end which was great.

I didn't notice any errors. Punctuation was used properly too. The only thing that I noticed was the first paragraph didn't mention how it effected the author positively but I still liked what he/she wrote.
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Review of Voices  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author writes about two kinds of voices we can hear that has to do with our own mind. Ones good and the others not good. The author says we normally choose to listen to the not so good voice.

The poem flowed well. I wanted to finish reading this until the end. I didn’t notice any errors or punctuation issues.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)

The author wrote about how we're destroying our environment and how we blame something other than ourself. He/She gave examples of what it's doing which helped me want to read the poem more. I was sad to see these examples. Personally, I feel that one of the main ways we could help our environment is that all of us need to do something small to help, (such as recycle) as a whole and this could greatly help.

The poem flowed well. I didn't want to stop reading it until the end. I didn't notice any errors and the punctuation was used well too.
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Review of From My Hands  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author talks about using her hands for different important things in her life. I loved this and wanted to read each one to see what was written until the end. The ending was great too and asks where a Mother would be without having her hands to use.

There's no punctuation except toward the very end. This seemed to work well anyway with this poem. I do wonder why the word where wasn't capitalized at the very end though?
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Review of Trapped  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author wrote about a fly narrating the story. This was well done. I was happy to hear toward the end that the fly was able to escape without the cat or a person getting it too.

I didn't notice any errors. The punctuation was also used very well. There's nothing I would correct in this story and was well written in my personal opinion.
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Review of Earth  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author writes about ways he/she likes the Earth. I like the examples he/she gave in the poem. I also like how he/she included water since it's a major part of what the Earth is made up of.

I didn't notice any errors. The punctuation also seemed to be fine. I liked how well punctuation was used throughout the poem.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (5.0)
The author writes a great short story about a boy that prefers being by himself and loves books. He changed after his parents bought him a telescope. He discovered something on the moon with his telescope and the ending was disappointing but at the same time, was funny.

There were no errors I noticed. Everything seemed to be punctuated and spelled correctly. The story had a plot which was clear to me and a great ending.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote a great story! It kept me hooked until the end. The story reminded me of the movie, The Matrix.

I didn't notice any errors. Everything was spelled correctly. Punctuation was used properly too throughout the story.
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Review of A Mother's Love  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author writes about Mother Earth which is beautiful. I like how he/she honored Mother Earth. I wanted to read what he wants to say until the very end. I like how he/she gave examples of why we should love her.

Everything seems to be spelled correctly. Even though there is no punctuation's the poem works fine. The poem is informative and flows well.
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Review of Journey's End  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author wrote about the life and journey of a leaf. This was well written. The way the author wrote this made me see the leaf having its journey which I loved.

Everything was spelled correctly. However, there were a couple of sentences that I noticed that needs looked into: "As leaf swirled away into the trees" Adding the might help, As the leaf swirled away into the trees "And the beginning at the end" It might look better if it's this way, And the beginning is at the end (?)
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Review of Good or bad  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (3.5)
The author talks about many important things. I agree with what the author says. I liked, "Different people have different thinking..".

There were only a few areas that need corrected:

Our thinking guides us to judge people... This sentence looks better this way.

For example, some people remember me for my bad things, and some remember me for my good things... This looks better with a comma.

What do you think about this? Please reply..... This looks better.

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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love how the author wrote so many haikus! I found each one of them to be very interesting. It's too difficult to choose only one because they're all great and are unique in their own ways. He didn't quite follow the amount of number for each line but I liked and thought that his poems worked well anyway.

I found a few errors though and will list each poem it's in below:

I strive to help all
Yet am rewarded with pain
Truth will always shine

"Yet (I) am rewarded with pain" This might work better adding an I in that line.

Spread you wings out wide
Let the wind lift you up high
Saw and see the earth

"See the earth" I think this sentence would work better being like this.

Out of comfort zone
Verity spice of life
And that’s a good thing

"Out of (the) comfort zone" I think the word the should be added to this sentence.

Noise is always there
Sound requires an ear
Silence is vacuum

"Silence is (like a) vacuum" Like a should be added here, it sounds better.


Stress when there’s no hair
It’s a good thing after all
Nowt to grip and tear

"(Not) to grip and tear" Not should be added to this sentence. ?

How are you feeling
Im tired confused, pained
Exasperated

"(I'm) tired(,) confused, pained I'm needs to be added and a comma.

Foodball is boring
Im just not made for running
Or F***ing boo-boos

"(Football) is boring" Foodball should be changed to Football.

Dreaming distant lands
Footprints on far flung beaches
The magic of flight

"Dreaming (of) distant lands" The word of should be added.

I wait on a plan
Don’t know where Im going to
But cant wait to see

"(I) don't know where (I'm) going to" I should be added and Im should be I'm.

"But (I) (can't) wait to see. I should be added and cant should be can't.

I need inspiring
I cant see what I should write
The joys of blank page

"I need (inspiration)" The word inspiration should be used instead.
"I (can't) see what I should write" The word cant should be can't.

I don’t want to leave
I like it here its worm
*Crys* can I go back

"I like it here (it's) (warm) The word its should be it's and the word worm should be warm.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (3.5)
The author speaks positively about us. The author says that he/she sees a lot in us and admires us which is good. He/she says that we're an awesome artist too which is great.

The main thing that needs to be corrected in this is the word, dont. It needs to be don't. There's also "Its," which needs to be It's. Those are some of what needs to be corrected. Also the word, "Doont" should be Don't and "colours" should be colors.

I was able to understand what the author wrote. It flowed well too. I enjoyed reading this as well.
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Review of Love  
Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.5)
The author clearly writes about love which is good. It's great that the author says that it's a feeling because that's one of the best ways to describe what love is. The author gives more examples of love and what it is which is also good.

The only concern I had was in the first sentence, "Love is not just word it is a feeling...". The word, a should be added to this sentence, "Love is not just (a) word it is a feeling...". Otherwise, everything was spelled correctly and it was easy to understand and flowed well.
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Review by blueflowers777
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is wonderful because it helps lift up your spirit. The author's right about many of what the author stated. We're beautiful, we're perfect and people are impressed by us. There's great advice in here too. I liked, "Walk in the light and be free." Enjoy the sun and the flowers, those are great things to enjoy, there's good in life we can enjoy, I agree with the author.
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