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Review of Default Love Poem  
Review by Bobbie Jean
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you. This was refreshing. I appreciate the imagery and well placed poetic devices. Also, I sensed both truth and experience in your analysis of love. I would like to have seen the same meter in the last stanza, but by then I was so invested that it wasn't too much of a distraction. Good writing. Please don't stop.
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Review by Bobbie Jean
Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem is very detailed and tell a story well. As it is depicts extreme abuse in the first person, I hoped for a more personal account. It's a good tragic poem.
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Review of Questions  
Review by Bobbie Jean
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! So much to think about. I thoroughly enjoyed this thoughtful reflective work. Emotionally, it allowed frustration to build but the questions were not frivilous as they progressed. The last stanza was a satisfying conclusion, although I would have like the principle to be named. Very good.
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Review of Please pass Us by  
Review by Bobbie Jean
Rated: E | (3.0)
I kept asking myself, is the creature life, as I re-read your offering. It is true that we cannot see the forest from the trees sometimes, and your poem seems to affirm that we feel most free and significant when we create. I got a little confused by the rhythm, but it was interesting.
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Review of The Attic  
Review by Bobbie Jean
Rated: E | (4.0)
This seems so honest about the character of older men in general. It would seem to help both men and those who love them to understand them. I would have liked a hint about what caused the retreat and what the outward signals were. Altogether, it's well formed and visual. I'll look forward to more from you.
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