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Review of Thoughts of a Son  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer shows the tension between the father and son.

I liked how the poem flowed and sometimes rhymed. I nice touch to the writers ability.

I found the poem had a deep, honest meaning that only a reader who had a father like that could understand.

I enjoyed reading this poem very much.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
Surfing the WDC to R&R I found this poll. The title and subtitle caught my attention and wanted to know what animal I might be.

Upon reading the selections I found what I may be. Polling the results I found many who have done the same ranked as I did.

This was an interesting poll. I wonder how the writer came up with the various personalities and link them to an animal.

Nice idea and great poll. I hope the result help the way you had hoped.
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Review of My Useless Muse  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.0)
Again the writer is able to describe the complete surroundings of his working life. The overall sotry is nicely done, with a hint of his muse at the end.

I liked how he described his muse and what he did with him and how. The humor side was shown by the writer on this.

Overall I enjoyed the story and his reflections of his current work and lifestyle.

I enjoyed this story. I hope your muse does come back.

Keep writing.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer is able to attract the reader in with the great descriptive use. The setting was very well donme and I could see where he was in the city and all the obstacles described.

I found the story flowed very well and keeps the reader interested throughout the entire story.

I found no grammer or spelling errors.

The writer's abilit to show and tell are wonderful.

Thanks for the read and for sharing.

Well done Ed.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
A dark, yet truthful poem of evil and the plights of men and theor wrong doings.

I found this poem actually pretty truthful and I enjoyed readin it.

The "free" form poem caught me and allowed me to enjoy to the very end.

Th writer brought the poem a deep sense of reality of how the world has evolved. A sad poem, yet again reflects real issues.

I enjoyed reading this very much.
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Review of Kay's Cuisine  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An erotic poem that the writer used food as a metaphor, which was quite clever.

The readers can sense the overwhelming hunger the writer has for the creator of the fine dish.

The writer also was able to show and tell within limits the actions the two played.

I enjoyed this poem. Nice job.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.0)
The title and catagory caught my eye and had to view.

A pretty sig with vibrant coloring.

I like the font and size of it. Simple yet very original, like a fine piece of art.

I enjoyed viewing this sig and think the writer came up with a very positive idea and art form.
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Review of I'm [Not] Sorry  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The writer allows the readers to see a difficult situation between lover and the decisions made.

The writer shows how honesty can sometime end a relationship. Truth hurts, saying sorry doesn't always make things better. There is depth to this poem and emotional turmoil placed on the two mentioned.

The poem flowed well and I enjoyed reading this poem.

Nice job on this.
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Review of Forever  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The writer shows and tell the feelings that she has for another, gone, but not from the heart.

Heartache comes in many forms, yet the reader can see this hurt and pain runs deep.

A beautiful poem of love and lost, longing for the one who took her heart.

I liked how the poem flowed and I could sense the feelings that the poem conveyed. Well done.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Interesting intro to a possible exciting romance or erotic novel/novella.

The writer leaves the reader guessing which is good. The description of the unknown person who is admired also left the reader guessing. All good for the introduction. I hope the chapters that follow leave the reader wanting to know more.

Keep up the work and let the mind andpen flow.
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Review of Emptiness  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
A dark, emotional poem of want.

The writer shows any reader the pain and suffering of he/she who this poem is about. Longing to be heard, yet silenced among society.

Longing for direction, longing for something the writer has seemed to have lost.

A nice poem which shows many facets of the phyche. The poem flowed well enough to keept the reader interested.

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer came up with a valid question regarding why or why not beleive in God.

I was surprised not many members polled.

This was a good poll to take and look at. Once more people answer the ratings might give some better results. Hang in there and see.

Nice poll overall. I enjoyed taking it.
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Review of Most unattractive  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The writer came up with a ligitmate poll regarding what men find offensive about a woman.

I was interested to see, so I polled and found out I was in the norm.

The writer came up with a good poll for people to be informed by.

Nice job on this idea.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The writer touches on a subject so few obey.

The visions and horror of the crash brought back memories when a dear friend almost died, but received severe head trama he never was the same, he was a junior in high school.

The writer tells a compelling story of tragety. The visions and emotions ran strong through the story.

This is a wonderful yet tragic read. Do as the writer says, you will live longer for doing so.
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Review of O Comus!  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem made in old English form.

I liked how the writer allows the reader to see the regret form the start. The readers can easily be pulled in till the end of the poem.

The poem flowed very well and I liked the old English, it put a nice twist on this poem.

Nice work you did here.
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Review of Laura's Unicorns  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful sotory of frienship, tragety and loss.

The writer shows that frienship is everything. Her friend dying of AIDS and how she, the writer, defended her friends dying wish as promises are kept.

The visions the reader gets from the surrounding are very clear, sad and filed with heartahce.

The emotions, fear, reality and even death are all expressed with very meanigful grammar.

The writer did a great job on this story. A five ***** read.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.0)
The writer gives the readers a clear message of what pain and suffering the writer has gone through.

Emotionally charged this poem reflects heartache, misery, pain and emptiness. All a soul needs in life is missing.

The poem is powerful, hopeful and of a person needing that special someone back.

I enjoyed this poem.
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Review of A Sense of Place.  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A beautiful poem of reflection, solitude and peace.

I liked how the writer was able to show the scenery while sitting and viewing the entire surroundings.

I sense the poem reflects a grave site where her Great Uncle resides. A poem of peace, sorrow and the happiness of remembering all the good things life offers. This is what I got from the poem.

I could see the birds flying, the wind blowing and the serenity that surrounds the writer as he/she wrote it.

I enjoyed this beautiful poem alot. Thanks for sharing stillwater.
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Review of IT MATTERS NOT  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem regarding ones self and what's inside.

I thought this poem spoke of truth and what the writer truly beleives in life.

I liked how the poem flowed and the underlinging significance and plot.

The reader can sense pride if they share the same theory. Even if they do not, the reader can sense the humanity inside the writer's soul.

I liked this poem very much.
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Review of Touch Me  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short and sweet the writer shows her dreams and needs.

I found this to flowed rather well considering the metre or length of it.

Overall, I found the poem had a powerful meaning behind it and allowed the reader inside the writer's mindset at the moment she wrote it.

nice job.
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Review of The Blue Balloon  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pretty poem reflecting a child's interest of a blue balloon.

The poem itslef read very well and I enjoyed the flow of it as well.

THe form and structure was definately well done asd found the entire poem enjoyable.

The last few passages I found with much moral insight.
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Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice signiture.

I like how the creator designed this with a human and butterfly mix. Very creative.

Oustanding talent!
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Review of Death Can't Wait  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The writer made a great for of poetry in this one.

I liked how the poem flowed hoever, I felt there were things missing that could convey more emotional meaning to it. I may be incorrect, but I felt like something was missing.

I liked how the writer placed death as most occur in a hspital where the reader can sense it with the wording.

A meaningful poem.
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Review of Handicapped  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.0)
A sweet little poem reflecting the disabilities of a handicapped person.

The writer allows the thoughts inside the mind of a disabled person with a heart felt conviction that the reader can feel.

The writer clearly wrote this from the heart and it comes across very clearly.
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Review of Early Morning Sun  
Review by BostonFiction
Rated: E | (4.5)
The writer wrote a powerful, meaningful and emotioaally pact poem.

Every word brough the reader to see, and feel every sense the writer conveyed in this poem.

The waiting and the reflecting of a loved one's last few hours bares such hardship. The writer brought this into the poem.

The flow of the poem was well done. and a beautiful poem overall. Well done.
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